penthius ([personal profile] penthius) wrote2006-04-04 04:43 pm

Dining on a Dead Girl's Dime: Genre Undetermined

A dead girl bought me dinner. She'd messaged me earlier in the evening to congratulate me on my birthday. I'd stared at the screen for a long ten minutes, seeing a cheerful greeting from Alice...Alice, whose funeral I'd attended and whose murderer had never been caught. It made me press the heels of my palms against my eyes. I remembered all the good things about her: all the things that had made me love her as a friend, and maybe a little bit more. It made me laugh a little to realize that she'd programmed birthday greetings into her system to send automatically. It didn't make me think any worse of her, though--it was just like her to plan ahead when she figured she'd be busy.

Inspiration: getting spam email from "murdered"
Story Potential: High, I think, at least in part. I like this set-up. Could blend well with any number of other ideas.
Notes: Could be straight-up mystery, though I didn't have much luck with the last one of those I attempted to write.


Status: Written as "Dining on a Dead Girl's Dime."

[identity profile] wilowisp.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not really sure how you feel about comments to this journal, but I thought I'd risk it a speak up. I really love this entry.

[identity profile] penthius.livejournal.com 2006-04-04 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! As for how I feel about comments, I really like them. This is basically brainstorming and a bit of keeping-the-pipes-from-freezing for me, so I really love feedback.

[identity profile] penthius.livejournal.com 2008-08-02 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Written 08/01/2008 as "Dining on a Dead Girl's Dime."