2012-08-19 10:49 am

Rememberers: Fantasy

All around me are familiar faces. People can get all excited about reincarnation and the possibility of discovering that they were Cleopatra in a previous life all they want, but I say it's not worth it! For starters, there was only one Cleopatra. There were millions upon millions of slaves, or even people who just scratched a living out for the entirely of their lives. So finding out what you were is not so much fun. Who needs to be suddenly burdened with post-traumatic stress for a life that they never even lived? And then you get the less than one percent chance that you gain the ability to recognize people from past lives. That's me. The less than one-percenter. And it's awful. Everywhere I go, I see faces that I recognize from the twenty lives I've lived before. Yes, I said twenty. I know that's a lot more than the average, but apparently I'm one of the unenlightened ones, the ones who resist moving on. Or maybe I'm just one of the ones that goes insane whenever I'm given a good life and I do something so horrible that I'm cast back on down the reincarnation scale. Your choice which you believe, but I tell you, I think my life's pretty good right now--oh, don't think I don't see you inching away!


Inspiration: "Mad World"
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Eh. It's a novelty gag, but not really enough to support a story on its own. Could be a decent minor character, I suppose.
2011-11-30 03:43 pm

Arise: Magic Realism

He said the dead would come back to us on Easter morning, and lots of people stocked their pantries and armed themselves for a zombie apocalypse, but it wasn't like that at all. Like I said, a lot of people prepared for a catastrophe. A lot of other people mocked the prophecy--or, like me, didn't even bother to mock it, just wrote it off as another crackpot spouting off in our increasingly religion-led state. So I was shocked when I came down to breakfast Easter morning and saw my mother sitting at our kitchen table, the same table she had sat at and paid bills in the evenings as I was growing up. She looked up and saw me, smiled, and just got up and walked out the door. By the time I ran to the door and threw it open, she was gone. I saw she'd organized my messy correspondence into neat stacks.


Inspiration: Thinking what holiday comes after Christmas. And the personal.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I want more of a magic realism feel to this "dead coming back to life" idea. More of an influences and remembrances sort of thing. Not sure I can write this now, though. Too close--I might not be able to judge whether what I'm writing is any good or not.
2010-11-02 02:29 pm

Alibi: Science fiction

Too many things to alibi, too many arguments and lies. He listened to the heavy pound of fists on the door. They'd be through in a minute, to find him here, squatting in the corner, his apartment papered with evidence. He lifted the blue pill up to the light and stared at it. It--he couldn't--who would take care of her? The door splintered away from the jamb. As the police spilled into the room with shouts and drawn guns and blinding flashlight beams, he dropped the blue pill into his mouth and dry-swallowed it, closing his eyes tightly. "Oh, shit--" he heard one of the cops swear...and then there wasn't a him there to hear it anymore. The--thing he was sitting on--floor, suggested a word in his mind, was cold, and there were noisy people in black rushing around.

Inspiration: "Sympathy" by Lou Hickey
Story Potential: High
Notes: And then it's a mystery. Once he is capable of being on his own, as a person with no memory. This could be...fun.
2009-11-16 11:42 pm

The indelible curvature of her brain: science fiction

The indelible curvature of her brain folds was a problem. The pathways were so long ingrained and so well formed that he could not bring himself to wantonly destroy them, and there was no way to simply wipe them smooth and simple again. He settled for a rough approximation of detaching them, breaking the linkages to the most obvious pathways. The memories were still there, and it was possible that they would rebuild the connections--brains liked doing that--but for now it would appear that he'd filled his responsibility. Yet she would not have the crafted beauty of her brain, the labor of decades, destroyed. He felt a brief glow of pride as he completed his work, something almost forgotten.

Inspiration: "indelible" (which came up when I was writing "Walking Out of the Machine," the twitfic Vicesteed tie-in. I tried to think of something that was not paper or writing that could be described like that.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: I love this description, but the actual story isn't unique. Best title ever, though!
2009-10-20 02:47 pm

Storm Coming; Genre Undetermined

The stones gleamed a golden beauty beneath the rain from the downspout that polished the ordinary dull rocks to shining jewels. The water ran over her fingers, reflecting the sun that shone through the clouds. The storm light made the leaves bright green and the pebbles precious jewels, it made the air heavy and fragrant with promised fertility and possible death. The sunlight shone green, tornado-green, though the clouds were only light. Cars drove past on the street, heading home as soon as possible. On the edges of town, wind blew through the wheat fields.


Inspiration: "Zen In The Art of Writing." I don't think this approach to memory-mining works for me. Maybe I need to do the linked word-groups thing. Very odd, but seems like an approach worth attempting. So--ah, yes. I loved storm weather as a little girl, and my favorite thing was to be out in it, staring out how it transformed ordinary pebbles. Well, not strictly ordinary. My mother collected granite and quartz and other interesting-looking rocks, possibly as part of the same thing that made her interested in gravestones.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Maybe high potential? Storms transforming nature/beauty. There's something there. But I'm also looking harder for something because of the source. Hrm. I mean, really, there's something in anything.
2009-09-11 11:15 pm

Wiping Memories: Science Fiction

The trick about wiping memories is not to wipe them. That's the misnomer. That's the reason that people think it's never happened--oh, sure, in the beginning, maybe a teen wipes out a school and leaves everybody convinced it was a gas leak that caused oxygen deprivation and some brain damage, but after that, no. They'll be found and they'll be maintained and taught. You can't take something without leaving something else in their place. And an absence will be noticed, will be pushed at again and again, like a tongue at a gap in the teeth. But something misty and hazy, that won't be noticed much, beyond the nagging annoyance that age--

Inspiration: Episode 2 of the Dollhouse.
Potential: Medium-high?
Notes: I like this angle and view of it, but I'm not sure if this is an actual piece or just a fragment.
2008-09-21 04:42 pm

Beware the Gap: Horror

It was the blank that worried her. It was a small thing at first, she thought, because she could remember remembering things surrounding it, but the blank grew, and that worried her more. She could, if she was clever, skirt around it by remembering herself remembering the blank, and she could write down the memories and hide them and find them later, but the original memory--was gone. IT was strange, remembering herself remembering a void. She developed all kinds of tricks to deal with it, and she had to use them faster and faster as the gap grew. Bad enough that the gap grew for herself, but she was sure it was a medical problem and that her doctor would be able to solve it, give her a medication or an operation or some cognitive therapy that would fix it all. She grew really scared only when she realized that others there had a gap, too.

Inspiration: Having a blank page to fill.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Don't we all fear forgetting? This could be strong. Some nice Steven King/John Wyndham-style of story.