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What should Death's bride wear? It wasn't even really a question. If you were going to be Death's bride, you wore the traditional white dress covered with an overdress of ashes. Over time, that had evolved into a silvery gray embroidered overdress that managed to be mournful and celebratory at the same time. Some of the past brides had spent the last day on the earth worrying about accessories and putting their final affairs in order, but Gita's affairs had always been in order from the day she was old enough to take over managing her father's accounts, much to his relief. The house was cleaned, she'd arranged that the neighbor women should bring in food for her father for the next month while he adjusted to living without her, and she'd prominently placed the name of a good local bookkeeper on top of the neatly stacked books and beside the spike where her father usually just stuck whatever papers he thought might be important. She expected that when the spike was full, he might actually notice the bookkeeper's name. She had written farewell letters to all her extended family and to all the friends she'd made in the short 16 years that she'd spent on the surface of the world--but she reminded herself sharply that she'd decided not to think about that.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/closetartist/6955948306/
Story potential: High.
Notes: Something about the practical choice of the rake really appeals to me. So she faces him with rake in hand. I like this character. And I think these photos are going to be some great inspiration for me.
Ezekiel 27:4-6

They went back two weeks after the death flag had flown high above the body. Her mother's chair still sat there, unscathed, and the neatly scoured bones were stacked on top of it. Seeing it gave her the chills. It was supposed to be this way sometimes, or it had been in days of antiquity, when they had first moved out here, but in time out of mind what they had found was insect-riddled corpses, bodies chewed by coyotes, bodies shrunken by the heat. Some even said that it wasn't a fitting way to treat their dead, despite the ritual's inculcation in their most holy rules. "What is that?" Edgar whispered, edging closer to her. "It's a death-eater," she said quietly, almost whispering herself. After the days she spent happily lost in the first archives of the colony, the time teaching the kinder, and the--


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/dandom/8512414543/in/photostream/
Story potential: High.
Notes: And what does the death-eater provide in return? And why did they leave? And why are they back? And and and.... Also, that is one gloriously creepy photo.
The dying do their own work. They finish what must be finished--which is their death. That is all that they need to do. A very few have other things that must be done, even at the end. Words to a loved one. Reassurance. The last piece of a project. Usually these things fall away as death grows near, but sometimes the need grows. We think that's what happens to create zombies. You thought I was going to say ghosts, didn't you? No. The mild hauntings that you hear about sometimes? Those are just--


Inspiration: "Letting Go of What Cannot be Held Back" - by Bill Holm
Story Potential: High, mostly because of the tropes it spins about.
Notes: A zombie death before completion? That's what causes Hungry Ghosts--MUCH harder to deal with. Also, 'hauntings' is so a word!
The death-thoughts lingered in the corridor. What if I make chicken.... I need to find a sitter... Oh god I don't have his money.... I wonder why she looked at him that way.... I ignored the last three ghosts and focused on the chicken. It was a good, strong thought, linked with the taste and look of chicken, so I should be able to track it. I knew the other three thoughts, two from a prostitute murdered by her pimp, and the last one from a boy who'd died accidentally. The chicken thought, though, was new, and I hadn't been called to the morgue to rule out new death-scents. So they didn't know she was dead.


Inspiration: A slate article about cadaver dogs: http://www.slate.com/articles/news_and_politics/explainer/2012/04/etan_patz_search_renewed_can_cadaver_dogs_smell_30_year_old_corpses_.html
Story Potential: High?
Notes: Mm, cadaver telepaths.... I do love this idea for a character.
He said the dead would come back to us on Easter morning, and lots of people stocked their pantries and armed themselves for a zombie apocalypse, but it wasn't like that at all. Like I said, a lot of people prepared for a catastrophe. A lot of other people mocked the prophecy--or, like me, didn't even bother to mock it, just wrote it off as another crackpot spouting off in our increasingly religion-led state. So I was shocked when I came down to breakfast Easter morning and saw my mother sitting at our kitchen table, the same table she had sat at and paid bills in the evenings as I was growing up. She looked up and saw me, smiled, and just got up and walked out the door. By the time I ran to the door and threw it open, she was gone. I saw she'd organized my messy correspondence into neat stacks.


Inspiration: Thinking what holiday comes after Christmas. And the personal.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I want more of a magic realism feel to this "dead coming back to life" idea. More of an influences and remembrances sort of thing. Not sure I can write this now, though. Too close--I might not be able to judge whether what I'm writing is any good or not.
The rope dangled over the edge of the beam, gleaming a white purer than anything else in the barn. It just drew the eye naturally. One couldn't help looking at it and thinking that maybe if you got the ladder and leaned it up against the beam, then it would be an easy thing to remove the rope, to take it down and burn it, or maybe just to unwind the noose and store it in a drawer where it could be used for more ordinary purposes that would dull that gleaming white and redeem the idea of the rope. She knew better. She knew that the idea of getting a ladder and getting close to the rope, that was where it all started. Her uncle had started talking about getting "that damn cursed rope down" the week before he hanged himself. Cursed, she thought, in more ways than one. Why else would it have still hung up there after the EMTs lifted her mother and got her down. Wasn't it usual to have to cut the rope?


Inspiration: The cord of the blinds hanging down.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Yes, it's creepy, but not that interesting.
Caves ran in the runnels of melted flesh, places where the waxlike slow drip of her features created caverns. They lived there. Some of them remembered her; some of them didn't. *None* of them worshiped her. She was dead; she didn't care. But wars were fought along her skin, and children born, and other good things. The caves ran deeper, near to her bone, and the population grew, and generations lived and died inside her...and she became less dead even as her flesh stretched out to tenuous unrecognizability. Some shred of less-than-conscious--

Inspiration: The way the wax ran inside my desktop candle.
Story Potential: Er, high?
Notes: This is interesting, but I don't know where (if anywhere) it might go.
"I'm sorry to meet you," he said. He looked perfectly serious. His face had that sort of distant, a bit detached regret that one might use if one had bumped into a stranger and spilled their coffee, or taken their taxi, or accidentally closed a door in their face. It wasn't what anyone would expect from a speed dating scene. "What?" she stuttered. "I never thought you'd be here--it's really not your usual scene at all, Kate." Creepier and creepier. She'd told him her name, of course, but she'd used the full name, Katherine. And he didn't say it like a man making a nickname to be annoying.

Inspiration: Title of "Lethal Death Note Weapon" video, plus a thumbed-down song on Pandora, some annoying alt-rock thing.
Story Potential: High...
Notes: ...but pretty much for an urban fantasy/romance. I blame the audiobook I was listening to.
The interring of the living went smoothly, he thought, as he watched the living being pushed into their cryogenic tubes and tucked away in the formerly inhabited catacombs. The dead bore them no real malice--after all, these were their own descendents!--but the living had ruled for long enough. The dead deserved a small break from the boring work of keeping the spiders and worms occupied. So they rose up and forced the living out. A few of the living had decided to join the dead during the process, or had ended up so because of actions they took opposing the dead, and that was just fine. They'd ended up on the winning side, after all, and now they too could enjoy ruling the world. But now what was there to do?

Inspiration: Typing "interesting" into Google, having the clock tick over at "inter."
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Meh.
The trick to it was not dying. Once you got past that, it was easy. It was a hell of a trick, though, and just because he'd managed it--once--didn't mean this time would be any easier. He looked back over his shoulder and saw the bullyboys approaching warily, their eyes on the singularity. On the other hand, they didn't look like they'd be much impressed by any trick he could pull, and he doubted they'd just let him go. So--it was the long dive through godonlyknewwhat. Again. He tucked his wallet away inside his pocket and buttoned it shut, quickly checked to make sure he had no loose bits or bobs, took a deep breath, and jumped in, feeling his testicles retract as soon as they realized what he was doing.

Inspiration: I was--thinking of tricks to doing stuff?
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Though I don't know what's going on here. I just love the first line. And hell of a title, there.
I expire in two days. That's been rough to adjust to. I mean, I always knew I'd expire someday, but I never actually went around hunting to figure out my expiration date--that's not in my nature, or so I thought. I didn't find out what my expiration date was until another me tried to kill us. Then I had some serious reason for wondering why and what I needed to do to protect myself. Turns out, not much. Not getting killed for two days is something most anybody can handle. The real question is why somebody would try to kill a person expiring in two days anyway. Sure, I've heard the rumors about the transformations some of us make when we start to expire, but it never really made sense--

Inspiration: Checking when library holds expire.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I guess it's high potential, because I really want to know why somebody would try to kill him. Of course, my brain could always come up with a stupid reason that would make this a low potential story.
He felt her in every seed she might have sown, in every tree she might have grown. He felt her in every beat of his heart and every pulse of his blood, the part that she would have fixed. He felt her absence so sharply. She lay in her coffin deep in the clay dirt, under a roll of green plastic grass that failed to conceal the raw ugliness of a grave dug into the hill. The flowers he had planted on her grave lived, still, but she was gone forever. He felt the flutter in his heart, the flutter that she'd planned on fixing in an operation scheduled for a month, and he did not care. He saw the seeds sitting in the garage--

Inspiration: "I Feel You" by Schiller
Story Potential: High
Notes: Sort of a magic realism story about healing--things fix themselves through mysterious circumstances, which sort of comforts him, until one day he finds his heart flutter gone (metaphor for grief and stuff). Or could take it entirely in another direction and make it SF, with creations guided past the hand of the one who gave them agency. Ooo. Writing it both ways, to sort of contrast, could be interesting--but could they be packaged as one story? Maybe not. Maybe would have to write and sell them separately--or would you? Could frame it as a grandfather and a grandson's similar stories.... Congenital heart defect? Hrm. Pondering.
Death's mum had made him a sweater. It was fuzzy. It was a shade of peach that she probably thought was quite masculine, it was fuzzy, and it was a sweater. It looked very comfortable and warm and the sort of thing one would wear to be hugged. Death sighed. He'd tried explaining, "But, Mum, I'm Death!" before, but it never worked. He might be Death, but she was still his mum, and he looked cold as, well, cold as Death Himself, when he went out on his rounds. He might be Death, but he was also Sam Frampton, and his mum didn't want to see her Sammy get cold. Such frightful places he ended up--

Inspiration:

Potential: Actually, high perhaps.
Notes: It's an interesting character, at least, which is not necessarily the same as an interesting story. But this is definitely a character that could be in an interesting story!
When living is too much, try death for a while! That was the new marketing department concept. Death sat in bony silence at the head of the conference table and stared at the presentation. He scratched his head with one bony finger. One didn't "try" death. He wasn't sure what they were up to. "Brilliant!" exclaimed one of the marketing executives. They couldn't see that Death was there, of course; they probably thought that death was just a brief cessation. "Who doesn't want to take a break, sometimes, a complete absence of stress or thought or anything." Death snorted gently.

Inspiration: "What the F**K" by Carbon/Silicon.
Potential: Medium.
Notes: Cryogenics? Near-death experience? Meh. Whatever.
In the garden of the dead, there were two trees. They were most annoying. They kept having living branches that Death had to prune and ferry to the Upperworld, to keep the trees properly dead. It got so bad that he began to feel like a gardener, and that simply wouldn't do. Some might use it as a metaphor, but he knew the weight of his job, and he enjoyed a peaceful dead garden, filled with things in their proper places that required no more action or attention from him. Living things might die, and then he'd have to shepherd them from one state to the next, but the dead offered no surprises.

So it was that Death decided he needed a gardener.

Inspiration: This picture: http://www.flickr.com/photos/violen/3512611964/ Also, we have two Russian olive trees, which are apparently the worst kind of tree to own ever, because parts of them constantly die randomly.
Potential: High, I think? Could be fun.
Notes: Something of a humorous tone, but not Pratchetty. Could be fun.
The memory medium was compact flesh, and he cursed when he read the specs. He hated compact flesh. It was damn creepy, is what. He didn't like hearing ghostly moans when it started to break down and he was trying to listen to his music. He didn't like ghastly images leaking into his photographs. Sure, they could say all they wanted that it was only a problem for knockoff cards, but it wasn't like he could afford to pay full price for a guaranteed happy, complacently haunted, or preferably untenanted, compact flesh card. Because really, these days how many people died happy? Not bloody many, that's what. Still--

Inspiration: Misreading my own post about a compact flash memory card for my camera.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: An entertaining conceit, but no story here.
The cemetery fairies were lonely. Nobody buried the bodies in winter, and it made them restless. Not to mention the cold made their wings stiff and likely to tear if they tried to move too fast. The fairies made little snow fairies over the graves, they cleaned away lichen that was stiff and dried, and they recited the names and lives of the people buried beneath them. That only took a little of their time, however, so most of the time they spent huddled inside urns and pine trees and mausoleums, their wings wrapped round themselves to keep the cold from getting too intense. They weren't weak Southern fairies, to drop off into hibernation at the touch of a chill breeze, but--

Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/piedpiper1/3058008086/
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Not really a story here, but I like the idea of cemetery fairies. Must remember it when I write a fantasy world.
She was carving ghoulies out of the dinosaur skulls when her father found her. She thought he'd yell at her, because most of the year he wouldn't even let her touch the bones, but this time he just stopped in the doorway and watched what she was doing. She carefully carved out toothy grins and winking eyes, smiling lips or mouths parted in a howl, ears like curlicues or like trumpets. The knife never got dull, and she thought it was so much better than th knife that she took with her to school to cut her meat and peel apples. "Papa," she asked, "can I have a knife like this to take with me to school?" He went a little white around the eyes, then guffawed, as if it was a surprise to him. "No, dear--"

Inspiration: A website with crafts suggestions for kids. It had suggestions for carving ghosties and ghoulies.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I thought this wasn't very high, at first, but now I rather like the idea of writing a cheerfully goth little girl who lives in a very peculiar world/society. It's not original, I know, but it *is* endearing.
Small children could be lost in her folds of fat, smothered to death in her ponderous embrace. She smelled faintly. It wasn't a fat-person-doesn't-bathe-enough smell, like cheese and old socks. Her smell was less ordinary. It smelled like clean death and salt and fries. There was a little smell of a pork chop, and a little of somebody's tears. She smelled a bit like chocolate and a bit like vomit. A bit like artificial cherries and a bit like fresh blood. Just sitting too close to her made him hungry and scared at the same time. He wanted to ask her what was in her bag and if she'd brought enough to share, and he wanted to run away very, very fast.

Inspiration: Well, I'd just been eating.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: There's something here, yes there is.
The unsolved mystery nagged away at her, whenever she saw the bakery. It was nothing that she wanted to think about. But at the same time, she refused to change her usual walking route to avoid the bakery; that would make her think of it because she *wasn't* seeing the bakery, and it seemed to her that would be even worse. Nobody knew how the stripper had ended up in the cake, at least nobody who'd admit anything, though plenty thought it was the fiancée who'd made the cake be baked a 2nd time--with the stripper inside. The worst part of it was, she understood from the men who'd attended the bachelor party, was that the cake had smelled really good. Like the best parts about cake and a pig roast mixed up together. They still got a weird hungry haunted look in their eyes when they talked about it, and there was some talk that Rob might have actually gotten a taste, after everybody else fled the room. She thought--

Inspiration: "Finished With Lies" by They Might Be Giants
Story Potential: Medium-high
Notes: This idea started out cozy mystery and wound up horror. Neat-o. I'm thinking there's some force trying to make people eat people. Lots of weird food accidents/murders, some people getting a taste for it. Question is, why is something trying to force the people of this town (world?) into cannibalism?

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