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I took a deep breath and gasped myself back to life, as I felt my sister sigh and pass away beside me. Sometimes we found each other lingering together long enough to touch hands and smile. Not this year. This year, I roared to life and I felt the strength of it, the hunger of it, in a way I hadn't for years. I felt like I could go to all the BBQs and eat six steaks and all the potato salad and maybe take one of the little kids running free as a desert. It would be that kind of summer. I'd sing with the jets rushing overhead and spread my arms wide with the snap of an American flag in the wind, and I'd visit hundreds of elderly people in their tiny hot apartments after the power blew out, because it was going to be that kind of summer. My kind of summer. I would come out of this one glutted on pinwheels and parades and BBQs and death. I could tell.


Inspiration: La Mort du Printemps: https://www.deviantart.com/art/La-Mort-du-Printemps-738504334
Story potential: High.
Notes: I like the idea of the seasons as vampiric sisters, who pretty much destroy all the things. This isn't a plot, though.
We really didn't think anything unusual was happening that Halloween until we say jack-o'-lanterns taking to the air and flying off. That's what it looked like at first, you know, since we could actually see the jack-o'-lanterns because of the light inside. Except for the electric ones, of course--those got the cord pulled out of them first and were generally dropped to smash in the street a minute later when the carriers realized what they’d grabbed. We live in a more crowded, urban area of town, so there weren't that many pumpkins outside to grab--nobody likes cleaning up smashed pumpkin, you know! But there were enough. Enough that a couple of the news choppers out doing some sort of novelty eye-in-the-sky Halloween thing got a few really good video feeds of the flying jack-o'-lanterns. enough that we realized that something really, really freaking weird was going on. Then the eyewitness reports started to come in (and believe me, by that time we had flipped on the local news to see if anybody had an explanation about why this was happening), and we were informed that a swarm of unusually large bats were behind the jack-o'-lantern thefts. Still just something worth laughing about and remembering to tell people about--


Inspiration: LJ's Halloween theme, with bats carrying off jack-o'-lanterns.
Story potential: High.
Notes: Forgot jack-o'-lantern was hyphenated. Huh. Also, ritual magic invoking the essence of Halloween! Bumping this one from medium potential to high simply because of the holiday connection.
Wake me up when September ends, dear," she said, and then my mother rolled over and fell asleep amid a drift of comforters and overstuffed pillows. A single red-orange leaf lay beside her pillow, like an alarm clock promising to wake her up when her season came around again. As it happens, this had been one of the better summers that I could remember in my whole life, at least when one considers it a good thing when my mother is awake. After some fifteen years of being my mother, I think she's finally learned to remember that I am human, and mortal, and have limitations. I may be awake when she sleeps away the other three seasons, but once she wakes up, she's *up* until winter comes to town, and sometimes even for a bit after that, since the seasons may shift back and forth a little. There's wiggle room. Some of that wiggle room is why I saw so much of her this summer. I wonder how Summer is doing, honestly, or I would if I really knew him. But he's here now and again to visit with my mother and discuss those things pertaining to their separate domains (it's a lot more than weather, let's just put it like that). She got to be awake because of the drought and unseasonable cold that had some of the maple leaves turning colors early. Everyone else complained and worried, but it made me secretly and selfishly happy, because it meant that for once I got to go on a summer vacation with my mother and my father. Dad and I have always had our own little rituals--and believe me, I use that phrase in the most common and generic sense, not like some of the other mortals who've figured out about Mom and the other seasons would!


Inspiration: "Wake Me Up When September Ends" - Green Day
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure if I want the protag YA or not, but either way, lives with parents, interesting seasonal relationship. Stronger story potential because this could be a good seasonal sale.
I can't take it any more. 5 to 4, standing, watching winter getting closer and closer. Every twelve hours, going out and measuring the frost line. Bundling up in anoraks and furs and goggles, stumbling out into summer and roasting, continuing to walk until I reach winter's edge. I've already sent back that we're going to need to move the cabin again. Winter is coming, faster and faster, and I am trapped here guarding the advance. That's how they pitched it to me, but really it's a much more boring job. Tedious and terrible, at the same time.


Inspiration: http://boingboing.net/2012/05/14/great-moments-in-pedantry-win.html and Tricky's "Five Days."
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Eh. Weather analyst in a fantasy world--worst job ever!
"Snowshoe through fairytale woods," the brochure said. It sounded delightful. Fairytales are good, right? So my wife and I booked our vacation in the Icelandic resort, packed the kids off to the grandparents, and headed out the door with dreams of open, vast expanses of snow, toasty fires, and overstuffed feather comforters waiting for us at the end of the night. We never expected to be fighting for our lives--being *severely* out of fighting shape, no matter my weekly handball game and her daily jogging--and we didn't expect the rewards we got at the end of it either, and I'm not talking about the gold. Although the gold was nice, or will be nice, if we can ever get a pawnbroker to accept it.


Inspiration: A line in a NYT travel article: "Once a week, the trails are groomed to perfection, and the lodges’ caretakers will shuttle your belongings forward, leaving you free to cross-country ski or snowshoe through the fairy tale woods unencumbered."
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Mostly, I like the idea of these protagonists dealing with something like that. I suppose that makes me old.
Hearts in a bowl. Tiny, delicate, pink-and-white hearts, perfect in every anatomical detail, but looking so pastel and sugar-coated that she was tempted to reach out and take a bite. She knew they would be delicious, would explode in her mouth in a burst of sugary deliciousness and a rainbow of good feeling. They would be so good that she wouldn't be able to resist another, and another, and another . . . and she would end up in the mother of all diabetic comas, or become a serial killer. Or both. There were three men and one woman who hadn't been able to resist, who were in the hospital right now. They would die if it wasn't for life support, and it would be with a smile on their lips. Fairy hearts.


Inspiration: Valentine's Day is coming up, there are pictures of hearts all over the place.
Story Potential: High. I thought medium, but with the seasonal tie-in to Valentine's Day, could be a good thing to start writing around Christmas of next year....
Notes: Good note for another urban fantasy, but nothing to set it apart in and of itself.
It was important to leave the hut, to walk over snow that crunched under her reindeer-hide boots, to move among the herd, to breath air so cold it cut her lungs like a knife. It was important to squint at the winter sun and the dazzle of whiteness over the land. These things were all important, all necessary if she wished to remain connected and allowed in the land, if she wished to not have her hide hut blown over and the winter wind rush down to freeze her to death, if she wished not to have the ice crack beneath her feet and dump her into the death waters, if she wished to not have the reindeer leave and let her be alone and stranded and dying slowly in her hut. She just wished it was easier to make the wizard understand this.


Inspiration: Pondering what to do on my break from baby and house.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: There's some possibility here, but I haven't formed it/grasped it properly.
He said the dead would come back to us on Easter morning, and lots of people stocked their pantries and armed themselves for a zombie apocalypse, but it wasn't like that at all. Like I said, a lot of people prepared for a catastrophe. A lot of other people mocked the prophecy--or, like me, didn't even bother to mock it, just wrote it off as another crackpot spouting off in our increasingly religion-led state. So I was shocked when I came down to breakfast Easter morning and saw my mother sitting at our kitchen table, the same table she had sat at and paid bills in the evenings as I was growing up. She looked up and saw me, smiled, and just got up and walked out the door. By the time I ran to the door and threw it open, she was gone. I saw she'd organized my messy correspondence into neat stacks.


Inspiration: Thinking what holiday comes after Christmas. And the personal.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I want more of a magic realism feel to this "dead coming back to life" idea. More of an influences and remembrances sort of thing. Not sure I can write this now, though. Too close--I might not be able to judge whether what I'm writing is any good or not.
It just didn't feel like a holiday until the saints heads were hauled out and rested on their ceremonial spears. The ones with a little dried flesh still attached got dusted; the ones that were only bone got polished. Some extra padding was required to keep the skulls in place, of course, but a little of the green sponge kept for flower-arranging did the trick. One winter, her mother had used the green sponge to arrange flowers *in* the skulls, but that had generally been viewed as a lapse of good taste not to be repeated. One shouldn't mess with tradition. And so, just as the skulls were neatly arranged and the boughs of holly hung, the messengers were sent out in search of new saints. They hadn't found one in 10 years, of course, and the last one had been snatched up by the Gonnagles before their messenger even made it back to the hall.


Inspiration: Thinking of holiday decorations.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: This is an entertaining bit, but the story doesn't have legs (just skulls).
The spring melt was so lovely that at first she didn't notice the snow. Almost all the snow was gone from the ground, the sun was shining, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky. Crocuses stuck their heads out of the ground quizzically. Buds formed on tree limbs. Robins hopped around murdering worms. In general, a gorgeous, perfectly normal spring day. Until the snow. At first it fell in small flakes that she ignored, but then the flakes became large as a hand-mirror, gorgeous and ornate, and she gasped and turned to run back to the village. But it was as if she was caught in a maze of mirrors, sharp and glinting snowflakes plummeted to earth around her and shattered--

Inspiration: Wishful thinking, and the view outside my study window.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Snow Queens have to come from somewhere, right?
She tensed when she heard voices coming down the trail. He laughed. "What, you think they're coming here looking for you? You've been missing two months. Everybody's given up on finding you until Spring thaw. No, this is a school group that comes down every winter to study hibernation patterns. Buncha college kids. You--" he patted her thigh familiarly, "you aren't going anywhere. They'll find you when the snow thaws. What's left. In the meantime, you make good company and help keep cabin fever at bay." She slumped--


Inspiration: Voices in my head.
Story Potential: High? Medium-high?
Notes: I think it's my weakness for serial killers that's making me give this a higher ranking. And then...one of the students has some sort of psychic ability, precog, sensitive, or telepath. And how does that change the dynamic, and what are his limitations? Could be fun. Especially if it's all from the viewpoint of the girl in the box, so to speak. Or if it's her taking cues that might all be in her mind, leading to actions that let her escape. That could be fun.
On the day the dead came back, it wasn't like in the movies. They didn't shamble around in the rotting bodies they were buried in. They weren't ghosts. Well-maybe they sort of were, but it wasn't so bad. They didn't want our brains. What they wanted was our *bread*. We ran away screaming form the supermarket when they showed up, but it was the food inside that they wanted. It was sort of lowering for all us horror-film fans. We'd been expecting a post-apocalyptic standoff with guns and rifles, and it was more like being stuck behind the fat lady in line at the supermarket checkout. At first. It took us a while to realize that they weren't getting any *less* hungry no matter how much food they ate, and they ate a lot of food. All of it that they could find, in fact. Tin cans they ripped open with their fingers. Bread loaves they ate whole, plastic bags and all.

Inspiration: Looking at the holiday schedule.
Story Potential: High, medium-high.
Notes: Although I don't have time to get this written, edited, and submitted for Cinco de Mayo, alas. Not with it taking months for editors to read through their submission stacks. I should have picked a holiday farther in the future, I guess. Independence Day. Ramadan. Halloween.
Snow on the branches formed a pattern of interconnecting avenues that she stared through as though they were a forest of probabilities, and to her they were. The snow ate at her skin and she heard a howl of rage behind her, but she tilted her head to one side and saw the lattice of black branches against a white sky shift, slightly, enough that she knew where to step to go in. Her feet were numb but her step was sure, and she walked into the winter maze without hesitation. Another shout behind her, "No, Tanya, don't--!" Her father, come to the rescue too late. On time to save her from the others, too late to save her from herself. A wall of ice--

Inspiration: Leftover snippet of a Christmas card that I've been using as a bookmark, showing just branches of a snowy forest.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I like the idea of a seasonal maze that does--something. I'm thinking like shaman selection or the like, but I don't know. But this almost isn't a story. But something about it pulls me...I blame it on being Minnesotan.
They greeted the rising sun with the joy of children unsure that the darkness would ever leave them, though they didn't know how close it had been. The sacrifice on the stone closed his eyes in joy, as his blood ran down the runnels and then slowly trickled to a stop as the rising sun painted everything the red of his blood. His body's heat cooled as the rest of the world warmed from his sacrifice. The wreath of holly on his head fell to the ground, leaving pin-pricks of blood along his brow. His fight done, the spear fell from his slack hand. He died, and passed from life into legend.


Inspiration: High
Story Potential: High. Really high!
Notes: This is the ending, so it should be the beginning. And it's real. He's the sacrifice, and he goes and does what he needs to to make the sun come again and stay longer. Lover, scholar, warrior, which? All? This is a story best told circular, which will be an interesting challenge for me. Of course, naturally I think of this *after* when I should write it to get it published this year. Because this is a winter solstice/Easter(?) story. So I should have written and submitted it last October. Ah, well, adding a note to the calendar for next year.
It was the twelfth day of Christmas, and signs of stress were beginning to show. "How much longer do you think she'll need this?" she asked between gritted teeth.

The psych nanny in her skull answered, "A large number of days longer, I would guess.. This is something she feels she lacked after her parents died, and it represents all the happy things that she wanted and couldn't have."

"And how long do you think it will actually be necessary?"

"All that time. Though at a certain point, she will probably start becoming angry with the toys and the perceived hollowness. What she really wants is her parents, and there's no bringing them back for Christmas."


Inspiration: Writing down the date -- 12/01/2009. Twelve.
Story Potential: High, mostly because of the Christmas angle.
Notes: Or is there? Time to think about technology and science and psychology. Hrm--the ghost of families past? Spiritual experience brain centers? (Nah.) Dead stars movie technology? A little Katherine Hepburn with her mother? A little Cary Grant with her father?
The sun shone hot in the red sky. Heat waves sizzled and danced above the sidewalks and the metal fire escape ladders were so hot that if you spat out the window, the spit would sizzle on the metal. If you tried to grab the fire escape with your hand, you'd get a raised welt there in only a few seconds. She hadn't tried to fry eggs on the metal, but she'd seen others do it. Didn't work too well; you only ended up with mushy scrambled eggs that, well, you couldn't even eat. No chance of properly frying an egg. She sat in front of the fan and stared out the window at the endless heatscape, wondering when she would ever escape it. The offices were a temporary respite, but they were a different world, one too cold and too pale and--

Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/70854278@N00/3508139861/
Potential: Low
Notes: Potential's low because this isn't really a story. I like it, though. But there's still no story.
Shifting the heating pads made different patches of her body warm, for a while. She tried to trick her mind into believing that it was the same as if she was warm all over, but she failed. As soon as she moved a heating pad, the empty spot chilled down. It took only a little bit before she started to lose feeling. She couldn't sleep; if she did, she knew she'd die. Instead, she spent delirious half-waking, half-sleeping hours shifting around the heating packs. Only the packs at her neck and her hands stayed the same--the arteries in the neck meant that that was the best place to spread warmth throughout the body, and, well, without the use of her hands she wouldn't be able to keep shifting the packs--

Inspiration: Maybe my own obsession with keeping warm is showing. Right now, I've got a cup of hot tea + heated slippers + a heat pad for my lap.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Nothing wrong with this little sketch--in fact it's kinda interesting--but it alone does not a story make.
Santa's on his way! The kids screamed as they ran rings around their mother. She smiled, and the tiredness fell from her face for a moment. "Yes, darlings, Santa's on his way." She moved to the window ad pushed the curtain aside. "And this time, that bastard will get what he deserves." She absently checked the shotgun she was holding in her hands. "And no milk and cookies for that fat reprobate until I get what I deserve. Or I'll shoot his bright red ass." She settled down in the chair opposite the chimney once the children were tucked away snug in their beds, the shotgun resting across her lap. She was still a beautiful woman, despite the wear and tear that three children had wrought. She jerked awake from a light doze when she heard the sound of hoofs on--

Inspiration: "Christmas (Baby Please Come Home)" by Joey Ramone
Story Potential: Low/Medium
Notes: What? Santa should pay child support just like everybody else.
Dinner was delayed. She scowled out into the blizzard going on outside the cabin. He was due back by now. He knew she' d made his favorite--a main course of gingerbread cookies, followed by a nice hot oatmeal and cinnamon soup, with only the most delicate of spun-sugar spires for desert, and hot mulled wine on the side. She wasn't worried about him, for his element was snow--but his element was *also* hot warm cottages with snow blowing out past the windows and a nice warm fire inside. Especially because cookies were involved. She tilted her head. What was missing? The stockings were hung on the chimney with care, the children were tucked away snug in their beds--and his glass of milk was still in the fridge.

Inspiration: Oh, thinking of Christmassy things.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: There's no actual story here, but it's somewhat charming, and a seasonal theme gives anything a boost in potential.
She did not like to share. Now. Not yet. It wasn't that she was selfish, but she saw the future and knew the end of her story, and she knew that it would require her to share far more than she wanted. So for now she huddled over her toys and her food and her love, trying to keep it all for herself until it came the time when she wouldn't be able to not share. She told her prophecies easily and for free, most of them--only the way of her death did she keep to herself. She was thoughtful about it, though. She didn't know exactly when it would happen, but she knew she'd be neither a child nor an old woman. She switched to eating only vegetables and was extremely careful with her health. They would find no worms between their teeth, no infections to spread to cuts in the fingers that would butcher her. It--

Inspiration: Thinking about Christmas, and what Christmas is really about. Sharing.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Might be a flash story. I don't think it needs to be spun out far.

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