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She liked the #vespers held in the park. She could actually attend the evening service because it wasn't held on church-guarded holy ground, but she could appreciate nature's peace. The darkness also made it easy to pick up a snack afterward.

Inspiration: vespers
Potential: low
Notes: Eh, it's a vampire thing. Although I like the whimsical nature of the character, this isn't particularly a story idea in itself. And she does appreciate nature and creation, still.
"Sir, where should we put the bodies?" the soldier asked. He was young enough that the fringes of his gills were greenish from nausea after the slaughter.

She sighed. Always the way. They were ordered here to murder a populace of creatures, sentient creatures in their own way even if they failed to pass some of the most critical tests to ensure Sentient Protection. The recruits were filled with stories of glory and battles for the good of the sentient alliance and told they were doing the right thing, the good thing, the thing that would allow more of their children to spawn. It was even true. They just weren't told that it would feel like murder.

She looked around the campsite. River, no, didn't want to contaminate it. Hard ground, no good for digging. Very little fuel to burn the bodies, and it would waste precious time for her soldiers to dig. She pointed. "Throw the bodies around the tree."

The clinging to their belief in tree gods that would walk among them and save them was one of the things that showed they weren't real sentients.


Inspiration: https://www.hcn.org/articles/scientific-research-tossing-salmon-for-science
Story potential: High
Notes: The bodies (maybe usually in graveyards) accelerate the growth of the "tree gods" from the trees that the "foolish natives" worshiped. Ooooooo .... spawning pools, have it lead to her coming to terms with some of her spawn dying, eating each other, but also deliberately feeding one--the kinder, more charitable one--against custom, to help it to grow. "There are worse deaths than those that bring something better into the world," she whispered to it. (Okay, that twist/character arc makes this story strong.)
Whenever I had trouble trying to sleep, when the sound of the waves alone failed to lull me to sleep, I would leave my bed and walk down to the bluffs where the wind-whistlers sat. I don't know who they were--or are, I suppose--because the ceramic whistling masks they wore covered their faces entirely. Even their ability to see was navigated by mirrors through a labyrinth of pipes. You could not simply glance at their eyes and know. And yet I never saw one lying fallen, broken on the shore, never saw one trip as it (and I would say he or she except it is impossible to tell) moved around. They wore the masks when they came out of the temple, and so you could never know if the people you saw go in went in simply to pray for luck or good trades or good weather or if they themselves were wind-whistlers. Enough went in that I was certain couldn't possibly be, that it was impossible to tell.


Inspiration: "Brain Stew" by Green Day + unsettling photo of person in windwhistler mask sitting beside some body of water: http://www.flickr.com/photos/67105066@N07/12435334803/in/explore-2014-02-10
Story potential: High.
Notes: Just--a weird obliteration of self, in order to find self. Has resonance.


The waves were choppy that morning as she pushed the boat off from the pier and settled down to row to the altar center, or what they thought was the altar center. Eventually, the buoy from the last successful sacrifice always disintegrated or floated away or fell apart, but that was part of the way it worked. Nobody would put extra buoys out unless they'd had a separate sacrifice, as if the altar might move around and they might end up sacrificing to nothing. She had a major request, this day, and so she'd gone to the trouble of buying a whole calf to take out on the waters. That was the rules. No fish, because there were fish enough, but something from the air if you had to or the land at best. She'd once heard tell of a thing called a camel, that lived only far out in the desert, and she figured that would be the best sacrifice of all--certainly nobody else would have offered up such a thing--but one had never come near her.


Inspiration: Picture of water, mountains, and clouds: http://www.flickr.com/photos/o_d_r_a_d_e_k/12175351336/
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Pretty picture, though!
He wanted it to be a memorable sermon, one that would get the attention of the people who hadn't done more than run through a mental chore and grocery list in their mind during church for the last ten years. He figured that would require some props. And somewhere along the line, it became a pretty elaborate scheme involving a chicken suit, some sparkly red undergarments that were large enough to go over the chicken suit, and--well, suffice it to say that he ended up needing a truck to haul all his supplies to the church. Sure enough, as soon as he popped out wearing the chicken suit, he had everyone's undivided attention! The sermon went over pretty well, too, with everyone laughing in the right places and some people looking thoughtful for the first time that he'd seen them. He figured it was remotely possible that he might even be called back to preach at that church again, though you never know what the outcome's going to be when you wear lingerie on the outside while giving a sermon. He thought he might get some phone calls complaining, or maybe some phone calls complimenting his humorous approach. He didn't expect to get many phone calls talking about miracles and blessing him and--sure, maybe he'd always tried to believe that it was possible a single sermon could do so much, but he'd realistically settled down and hoped for the small change that matters most--the ability to change a sinner's heart and set them on the right path, or the ability to strengthen a believer in a time of trial.


Inspiration: Looking for Mondegreens in "Dragostea Din Tei" by O-zone -> Googling "razor sledding dancing" -> this: http://americandigest.org/mt-archives/american_studies/a_small_favor.php
Story potential: medium
Notes: And now he'll be stuck with his chicken suit, poor pastor.
We all stared as the car drove through town. Nobody'd seen a vehicle like that in decades, even leaving behind the little detail that the King was driving it. My grandmother was a big Elvis fan, so I grew up surrounded by ceramic statuettes and black velvet paintings, so I knew the King when I saw him. This guy looked just like him, and I'm not talking about the shining jumpsuit or equally shining slicked back hair. No. The cheeks, the lips, the eyebrows--this guy was a reincarnation or a clone or something, down to the shape of his hand as it tapped casually against the convertible window as he drove up to the local diner, pulled in, and parked. I don't know what possessed me, but when he slid into a booth, took off his sunglasses with one slick move, and smiled at me--that smile that's half a sneer--I couldn't help myself. "Banana sandwich?" I asked. He smiled. "I think I'm going to like this town."


Inspiration: "Race Car Ya-Yas" - Cake
Story potential: High.
Notes: This is an oddball, genre wise. More magic realism than anything else, I guess. Oh,and Elvis is coming to town as a preacher. There will be rock-and-roll miracles. And--stuff. I don't know. But I feel a pull.
If you feel the sun begin to burn, your time has come. Don't try to run. The sun god stretches everywhere, in time, and he will reach you if he has to scorch and entire village to get them to drag you out, or if he has to bake you alive in the hut you fled into. After you are dead, they will put your body on a platform in the desert to allow it to desiccate and feed the vultures, as is right and proper, and the sun god will eat your withered essence. If you do not run, he might not eat you. He might only kill you if you did something that caused the sun god's justice to be called down upon you. He might just give you a vision. He might drive you mad and make your brain boil with visions that will never end while you live, but which might serve others. He might make you a priest. I don't recommend walking into the desert with no water to seek the sun god. Many do, every year, but he tends to scorn sacrifices he did not want. Some few become priests, but once they do, they realize the sun would have shone on them no matter where they were.


Inspiration: "Narayan" - The Prodigy
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Eh. Setting.
The under-priestess of the sect of absolute purity slammed her hand down on the bar counter again. "Another!" she demanded. Everyone in the bar held their breath. There were already six empty glasses lined up along the counter where the priestess had slammed them after she drank the highly alcohol, very peppery, and quite likely to lead to dancing contents. The bartender eased forward, mixed another swirling red drink, and cautiously slid it across the bar to her. The highest number anyone in that bar had seen a person consume was seven, and that was Big Ed, who they would have guessed was a half-ogre if anyone still believed that ogres existed. Priestesses were sweet, pure innocents who drank nothing but evaporated water that had been boiled into steam and recaptured so as to remove any harmful elements that might disrupt their purity. They ate nothing but vegetables. They had nothing but sweet sleep and innocent dreams. And that was as it should be, given the awesome power that they had bestowed upon them in return. They certainly didn't slam back...seven.


Inspiration: http://chaoticshiny.com/taverngen.php
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: Eh. Could be fun, but pretty much a standard high fantasy gimme.
Preston Pollard

Preston knew the ascension was today--it had appeared mysteriously on his day calendar--and so he dressed with great care, choosing the kelly green sweater vest that he knew accentuated the golden tones to his dark skin, and the gold tie that his mother had gotten him when he first got his latest job. He wasn't entirely clear on how the ascension had appeared on his day calendar, or on why he qualified to ascend. He believed in God but had never been much of a one for organized religion, though he did now and then go to his neighborhood Lutheran church. Every visit he tended to have to explain why he hadn't been there for so long. He thought perhaps the ascension note had been written on his planner as a joke by one of the other partners or his personal assistant, but just in case it wasn't, he wanted to make a good impression on Whoever might be meeting him.


Inspiration: The photo.
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Eh.
I am so sick of hearing your preaching. Dead or alive, I'm walking around, and I don't look so bad as most of those hordes. The fresh supply of pig brains you bring me might have something to do with that. I think better than most of the horde, too. And so I know that it isn't any divine grace--and least, none that passed through *your* hands--that keeps me well. I see them bringing their newly passed to you to lay hands upon, as if that will keep them from rotting, and it makes me so angry. I'm not a killer, but I think I could make an exception for you. I know that your congregation probably won't die, not if they're concerned about their loved one being a rotter. It isn't the rotters that attack, it's the ones who could almost pass as human.


Inspiration: "Whiskey Hangover" - Godsmack, plus probably a bit from White Trash Zombie.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Eh. It's a take on the new, friendly zombie idea that may be coming in the urban fantasy genre.
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"That billboard's going to be a problem," said the middle-aged hausfrau with a pallor to her cheeks and sunken eyes that didn't match the rest of her image. I stared up at the image of the bible on a billboard plastered beside the abandoned church. "It's not a real bible. It doesn't even have any holy words in it. It's just a piece of plastic stretched up there as an advertisement." "Doesn't matter. It provokes thoughts of sanctity in every passerby. That will be enough to wake the church." "Surely it also provokes boredom and irritation?" "Boredom and irritation about sanctity are enough. They always respond to some inner belief in sanctity." I turned away, swearing. "Let the white goat go."


Inspiration: The picture. Why? What did *you* think they were up to?
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Blahbittyblah.
The price for all was the price from one, he thought, burying his head in his hands as he knelt in front of the altar. If it was as simple as doing whatever you were already doing, it negated the value of that sacrifice. If what you were doing was killing your neighbor, instead of loving him, that could not be right. It could not. And yet, it felt so good, so easy. But if that was the case, then what was he? What part of God could he be? Was the pastor to another God the part of God? Or had he derailed his intended life when he swore himself to a god that the aliens denied existed (yet)? Were those who suffered intended to be the suffering part of God? Should their suffering only be enhanced? Should exquisite torture chambers be created to make them the perfect suffering parts of God?


Inspiration: More musing on the WorldCon story idea (note to self: see http://penthius.livejournal.com/321684.html).
Story Potential: High
Notes: I've got the alien religion figured, now I just need the crisis of faith, the resolution, and some sort of emotional denouement...then, of course, to write it in a week.
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She was on the walk of stones when she found the key, lying on top of a journal and set in front of her feet as if it had always been there. She hesitated before picking it up. Yes, the paths gave, and that was why they were walked by the devout and the brave or the ambitious and foolish, but most liked best the paths of pearls or the path of flowers. Wealth, ease, those things were cherished. But the full loop always went through the path of stones, and nobody who skipped a path would ever receive a gift. She had heard that anyone who rejected a gift would never receive one again, and (whispered) that things would be taken from them and given to others. But it was the path of stones, and that always caused suffering, although it ended in greater--solidness. Foundations. The power that comes from things other than wealth.


Inspiration: Flickr photo: http://www.flickr.com/photos/malrabaal/7026475301/
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: This has potential, it could go places, but it isn't jumping out.
The wind dance was late that year, and Zula knew that the winds would sweep the sands harshly because of it, ravaging crops and killing travelers on the road, instead of lying quietly except during the certain times when she would dance the wind awake. Because the wind was a living thing, and dance it must, or it would die...but before it died it would go mad in its dreams, and sleeping, would roll across civilization and destroy everything in its death spasms. They hadn't believed that, and that was why the wind dance was late. The other dancers were dead, slaughtered in their dwellings, by idiots who thought they were evil witches that brought the winds down on people from maliciousness. It wounded Zula down to her soul when she realized that was what people thought, but she never would have believed they could be so evil. Her people were slaughtered. Only the babies too young to understand had been taken instead.


Inspiration: This photo: http://www.flickr.com/photos/ka_ba/6697275415/
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Now this is an interesting take on it. And I think having her choose some path to rebuild things instead of taking direct vengeance would also be good. Oh, and the winds *are* alive.
He said the dead would come back to us on Easter morning, and lots of people stocked their pantries and armed themselves for a zombie apocalypse, but it wasn't like that at all. Like I said, a lot of people prepared for a catastrophe. A lot of other people mocked the prophecy--or, like me, didn't even bother to mock it, just wrote it off as another crackpot spouting off in our increasingly religion-led state. So I was shocked when I came down to breakfast Easter morning and saw my mother sitting at our kitchen table, the same table she had sat at and paid bills in the evenings as I was growing up. She looked up and saw me, smiled, and just got up and walked out the door. By the time I ran to the door and threw it open, she was gone. I saw she'd organized my messy correspondence into neat stacks.


Inspiration: Thinking what holiday comes after Christmas. And the personal.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I want more of a magic realism feel to this "dead coming back to life" idea. More of an influences and remembrances sort of thing. Not sure I can write this now, though. Too close--I might not be able to judge whether what I'm writing is any good or not.
"Give me a sign!" he called to the sky, arms spreadeagled as he screamed into the blue, blood trickling down his flesh where he'd mortified himself with thorns. He was determined to stay in the desert shrine until he received a sign, and if God had so abandoned him that there was no sign, he would die of thirst, and that seemed well enough. He'd brought enough water for three days, and he would refuse to drink the last flask until he was traveling home. Then he would need it. If he drank regularly and became dehydrated eventually and *then* he received a sign, he wouldn't even make it home. He sat on the stone and waited. In the heat of the day, sweat trickled across his--

Inspiration: B.B.K. - Korn
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: And the sign is that the water in the last flask never runs out, but he almost doesn't find it out, and only when in despair.
The bell sounded for Matins. Gregory forced himself to look around his cell for the last time. He noticed again how the crack along the wall looked like a sideways mountain range, and the little fluff of straw that the sparrow who made its nest in his window had left behind, the familiar worn wooden lines of the cross above his cot, and the dent in the mattress that had been the bane of his sleep for the last five years, since he was old enough to be moved up from the orphanage when he asked. He bit back a lump in his throat. He would miss it greatly. When he left his cell, the bag with his few worldly possessions over his shoulder, wearing unfamiliar worldly clothing and sturdy boots in place of his sandals, his rosary around his neck, he met Father Petros.

Inspiration: "Requiem Eternam" - Chant, Sarum
Story Potential: High
Notes: I like the idea of a priestly culture where those who are taken in young are forced to go out into the secular world for--oh, I don't know, five years?--before they are allowed to wholly dedicate themselves to a monastic life. And it offers the chance to explore God-in-the-world. Though I'm not sure this strictly would fit into fantasy, but it's certainly not real-world. Hrm. Possibly a problem story.
It's just not as melodramatic when your savior is hatched. Oh, I did the best with ti that I could, but really? Hatched? That doesn't even scan with anything. Making the Christmas hymns was going to be a bear. Ha! A bear. I joke. There were no bears on the world. Once there had been something like a fox, but the Clucks had waged war until all the foxes were dead. A genocide, we would have called it, but it happened before they were even really conscious. Cavemen--well, cavechicken. As soon as they figured out slingshots it was over, though rumors persist that a few survived to the present day.

Inspiration: Some Christmas song.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: This is funny and weird, but-nah.
Earth angel, they call her. She's not of heaven, and so she is allowed to descend to hell. She's not human, and so she cannot be trapped there. She is immortal, and so they cannot kill her. At least not permanently. Sometimes they try, they tear her apart in anger and sorrow at what she reminds them of. Some say that's why the devil allows her entry. She brings with her the whisper of the grace of God, the reminder of all that the damned do not see. Beauty, love--all these things flow from God, and true hell is their absence. She brings back the memories, she hints at the good. She is beautiful. She smiles in a way that might almost be love--.

Inspiration: Earth Angel by Karin.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Eh.
"Mother Mary with a shotgun!" he breathed. And indeed, it was. She stepped down from her pedestal with an AK-47 slung over her shoulder and a real businesslike look in her eyes. Her robes shifted to blue-and-white arctic camo, her halo snapped down a rifle sight, but her mouth remained curved in that all-knowing, all-forgiving smile. The children were getting a bit out of hand, but mother was here to set things straight. The first nephalim charged forward with a scream and was mowed down. It slid to die at her feet, looking up in hope? sorrow? fear? She signed the cross on its forehead. "And you shall be in heaven with me this evening."

Inspiration: Some discussion of gonzo writing the other night.
Story Potential: Er--medium-high?
Notes: Still not the style that comes most naturally to me, though. And feels like it's missing something.

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