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Sep. 19th, 2010

Dance, for the feeling is something that you can't keep inside! It may be the lying bugs in your brain jittering down along your spinal column and out along your nerve endings, it may be a dance that will make them call the police or the med isolates, but you can do nothing but dance! And you will understand when you feel it, for the dance is miraculous and wonderful and part of a world-dance that talks to space. You may only be one part, but when you really stretch and reach for that dance, you may achieve a state like the Sufis, where you rise above yourself and see the greater world. Did bees feel this way, when the bee colonies on your world survived? Yes. Who do you think their hive dances were for?

Inspiration: "Dance, Soterius Johnson, Dance" by Jonathan Coulton - and a discussion of different POVs.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: This POV immediately grabbed me, and I want to know what's going on, and--it has that strong, compelling feeling that good stories do sometimes.

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