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The #impact of the sword in her gut was so slight that she didn't even feel the pain for a moment, just a sharp, searing heat. Steam hissed as her flesh quenched the blade.
"Ah, yes, this is a good one," the smith said, smiling.
"Will she live?"
"Maybe. Who cares?"

Inspiration: impact
Potential: high
Notes: She does live, maybe because the person who asked cared enough to try and save her. And she does have a weird magical link to this evil (well, it's forged that way, at least) sword, which would complicate some things.
More than power? Never had anyone offered her that, and she leaned forward, intrigued. "And what would you say is greater than power, pray tell? Love? Wisdom? Other people have tried to sell these things to me before, and they were never able to carry through." "No," answered the merchant, bargaining for his life. "Magic. A magic that will make your food taste sweet again, will make every victory priceless and every ounce of power better." She leaned back and laughed. "That hasn't been the case since I was five and all my siblings were drowned like puppies, because the King had picked his heir." "He was a brutal man." "He was the finest King this country had had for fifty years." "And yet, I notice that you have no heirs of the body yourself." She shrugged, trying not to show the chill that went through her at the thought.


Inspiration: "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" - Daft Punk
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: The cliche here would be to do a bodyswap with some true unfortunate. But that's a cliche, which is why I don't think this story as-is has a ton of potential.


A little fanfare greeted them when his ship sailed broken-winged into the port. He set his jaw grimly when he saw the midget bandleader and the assortment of ragamuffins dressed up in new band uniforms and provided uniforms. Only the midget appeared unfazed by their assignment. The musicians had a glint of desperation in their eyes that made him wonder if some cruel puppet-master had suggested that if they did a bad job, their payment would be much less favorable than the handful of coins that would have bought their services. If their services were bought, and not simply impressed from the streets or the jails. The noises they made were about as awful as one might expect from drunkards and bums rousted out and handed instruments they'd never played before, never seen before except in the occasional procession that passed them by. Except--the captain paused, as one of the small, bent figures in the back raised a trumpet to his lips and let a pure, clarion string of notes fly free to hang in the air, as pretty and perfect as any court musician might have managed.


Inspiration: Daniel Merriam's "A Little Fanfare"
Story potential: High.
Notes: The implied politics and twisted nature of this world are appealing. Because this is all a mockery of his failure, except....


The post of Writer for the Sleeping Child was a fairly prestigious one, and well-paid, and it wasn't as if anything bad was happening to the Child. The Child--slept. The Child would always sleep, until it was no longer a child. Then it would wake up and be taught all the things about the world that a non-sleeping child would have learned from the time it could open its eyes and look around. Except how to talk, and certain other aspects that were significantly distressing to most people who interacted with the former Child. He was pondering what he would do when the Child woke. He had not had it for its full life; there was a previous Writer who had decided to stay on for the next Child. He did not think he could do that. He knew too much of her sighs and the slight lisp with which she talked, he knew what many of the symbols meant and annotated them in the Writing as should be sent. Some Writers adopted the Child when it awoke, took it home with them and made it part of their family. If he had a family, he thought he would have done that, but he did not. He knew very little, really, about even normal children, and so he worried that he would not be able to take proper care of her. His family still lived out in the country, by the foothills, a journey of a week's length that he made only once a year, in time for the annual Moon Dreaming festival. He would not be able to rely on their support as another unprepared father might. And he could not move back, first because his entire life as far as he could remember living there was devoted to escaping, and partly because his only chance at making a good income to support a family was to stay in the city. He did want a family, he just wasn't particularly good at talking with women, and he knew none of the ways that a solitary man might acquire a family. If his sisters had lived nearby, he assumed he most likely would have been married for a good ten years already.


Inspiration: http://www.danielmerriam.com/index.php?option=com_ponygallery&Itemid=0&func=detail&id=150
Story potential: High.
Notes: She wakes up early, say at--oh--ten. And no, there is not nor ever will be anything romantic between them. Ew. But because she wakes up early, she retains more of the powers of the Dreaming Child than normal, at least when she sleeps. And then plot ensues.
Pluck the tiger's teeth from his jaw and burn the phoenix in her blood. She winced as she read the instructions. "Are you going to tell me that this is allegory or that these are actually terms for different herbs?" she asked her teacher, a note of hope in her voice. He shook his head. "Nope. But it isn't about the animals, either. The Phoenix and the Tiger are-well, all right, you may decide to call them allegories. If you are ever in a situation where you need this spell, they are--well, they could be all sorts of things. They could be situations, they could be people, they could even be the animals themselves. The spell isn't clear, really, and it's been over 500 years since we had a recorded casting of it. But all the wizards who have glanced at it have shuddered and said that they think it will work." She glanced at the instructions again and shuddered herself. "Is it worth it?" "Look at what the spell is for. Do you think that if you ever need to cast a spell like that, you will hold back at anything? It's not black and evil magic, if that's what you're asking. There's no child of your blood sacrifice. Nothing like that. This spell is more of a--challenge. It's not about doing something bad, 9it's about figuring out where these elements are and doing what you must to activate or destroy them. As you can imagine, it's not something that a person would do just for fun or to see if it works."


Inspiration: "Devouring Time" - Mark Growden
Story potential: High.
Notes: I suppose that this could be a high potential idea, in there somewhere. Maybe. Not sure.
I have hedgehogs in my garden ! This one makes gym. !! Thanks for Explore !!

"Noooo!" the hedgehog squeaked as it tumbled posterior over teakettle. (I say posterior because my mother really, really didn't like me to swear. She said it made us look poor.)

I stopped. I'd only been rolling it away from the bonding circle, but then, I'd never heard a hedgehog say something that sounded like...well, that sounded so much like it was actually saying something before. I began to have a really worried feeling about how this particular bonding ceremony was going to end up. Sure, everyone says that what you get is representative of your personality in some way, but I’d been hoping for a predatory cat or something else with sleek fur and sharp claws, that could be decorative or defensive. A hedgehog--I imagined what the other girls in the school would come up with to decorate a hedgehog, and I winced. Bows on every quill, no doubt, should the hedgehog sit still for it. I resolved then and there that I would make sure *my* hedgehog never got forced to sit still for such things, and it was only after I decided that that I realized what I'd done. I'd gone and accepted a hedgehog.

"Thank you," it said, as it rolled over and sprawled its feet out until it could stand up and waddle back into the circle.

"Don't thank me!" I denied hastily. "I didn't accept you!"

"Oh, yes you did."


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/__pjm__/9257319074/ Too cute!
Story potential: Medium-high
Notes: It really is ridiculously cute. And I like the idea that it indicates something in her that will be able to stand up to things a whole lot bigger than she is.
Rake

What should Death's bride wear? It wasn't even really a question. If you were going to be Death's bride, you wore the traditional white dress covered with an overdress of ashes. Over time, that had evolved into a silvery gray embroidered overdress that managed to be mournful and celebratory at the same time. Some of the past brides had spent the last day on the earth worrying about accessories and putting their final affairs in order, but Gita's affairs had always been in order from the day she was old enough to take over managing her father's accounts, much to his relief. The house was cleaned, she'd arranged that the neighbor women should bring in food for her father for the next month while he adjusted to living without her, and she'd prominently placed the name of a good local bookkeeper on top of the neatly stacked books and beside the spike where her father usually just stuck whatever papers he thought might be important. She expected that when the spike was full, he might actually notice the bookkeeper's name. She had written farewell letters to all her extended family and to all the friends she'd made in the short 16 years that she'd spent on the surface of the world--but she reminded herself sharply that she'd decided not to think about that.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/closetartist/6955948306/
Story potential: High.
Notes: Something about the practical choice of the rake really appeals to me. So she faces him with rake in hand. I like this character. And I think these photos are going to be some great inspiration for me.
Toad Way split off from the merchant's district in Dragon Row, and that was where the sailors went. Sometimes sailors asked why the pleasure district's street name was Toad, but older hands took them aside quietly and explained about certain beneficial effects of toad-licking, and why you should avoid it, but why there were parlors dedicated to just that activity. Certain young sailors tried it. Some of them were able to put it aside and return to work and go on to create their own life as a sailor. Some of them never escaped it and spent their days in casual labor at the docks or, once they grew too decrepit for that life, begging so that they could chase the toad.


Inspiration: ChaoticShiny city generator
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Meh.
The jester capered, and the king laughed. The jester flipped, and the queen smiled. The jester left, and the animation drained from their faces as if they were nothing more than wooden statues. "We don't dare kill him," the Arms-Commandant murmured to his assistant. "They become themselves again briefly when he is here, entertaining them. Serious business is nearly impossible, but they will sign papers and issue judgments in the intervals between laughter. Sometimes. When we removed him from their presence and buried him deep in a dungeon room designed to hold fearfully powerful wizards, they did not recover. They wasted away so much we feared they would die. And so we are stuck with royalty who only become themselves while he is present. He himself claims he does not know why this is so, and it is true that the King and Queen's malady first occurred while--"


Inspiration: ChaoticShiny - "The heroes must discover the story behind the ship without the jester killing them."
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: Whatsit--the floating princess. Or the one who would not stop crying. Also, a ship is definitely involved. And the King and Queen are still enough themselves that they will not lie together while another person is in the room, so it's no heir coming soon, either.
The under-priestess of the sect of absolute purity slammed her hand down on the bar counter again. "Another!" she demanded. Everyone in the bar held their breath. There were already six empty glasses lined up along the counter where the priestess had slammed them after she drank the highly alcohol, very peppery, and quite likely to lead to dancing contents. The bartender eased forward, mixed another swirling red drink, and cautiously slid it across the bar to her. The highest number anyone in that bar had seen a person consume was seven, and that was Big Ed, who they would have guessed was a half-ogre if anyone still believed that ogres existed. Priestesses were sweet, pure innocents who drank nothing but evaporated water that had been boiled into steam and recaptured so as to remove any harmful elements that might disrupt their purity. They ate nothing but vegetables. They had nothing but sweet sleep and innocent dreams. And that was as it should be, given the awesome power that they had bestowed upon them in return. They certainly didn't slam back...seven.


Inspiration: http://chaoticshiny.com/taverngen.php
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: Eh. Could be fun, but pretty much a standard high fantasy gimme.
Discovering that the baby you never planned to have, almost decided not to keep, but in the end kept and went back to a village not too near but not too far from where you came from, and claimed yourself a widow of the war--discovering that baby can spit fire is no small thing. Nobody asked what side your husband was on, of course, because dragons were monsters invading from across the oceans, sailing on giant rafts of monstrous trees lashed together, or landing on small islands and overnighting before sailing in to the port. You don't remember when the war started. Most people don't, now. Your father was a young man when the dragons invaded. Or first flew to our shores. You've heard a few older people muttering that the dragons weren't the ones who started the war, and we could have avoided all this if only--


Inspiration: "Spitfire" - Prodigy
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure if there's enough unique here to power a story, but maybe. The child is not a child of rape, but a consequence of a one-night stand after she was saved from some wartime danger by a dashing soldier. The dragons started invading because something worse across the sea was invading them. And it's coming next. The dragons are now in hiding and almost impossible to find, but she's by god going to have to go on a quest for them so that her child can be taught safely. Maybe re-read Mary Brown before writing this, either for inspiration or to avoid duplication.
A teardrop on the fire, a quick pass with a vial to catch the steam as it went up, and just like that--passion's heart was captured. She didn't feel any different, not right away, but then--she'd been concentrating on the spell, not thinking of the pain of losing him, of losing her family, of losing them all. She could have gone the vengeance route, turned to the dark side, followed the left-hand path, but she'd held just enough of herself to make the other choice. She held in her hand the vial of pain and anger and rage and sorrow and heartbreaking agony. She felt light, as if she could drift off into the sky like thistledown. She sighed. She hadn't known quite how much relief she would feel--

Inspiration: "Teardrop" - Massive Attack
Story Potential: High? Medium-high?
Notes: So what happens all those many years later when she uncorks the vial?
I've been to the edge, where I stood and looked down. I've lost a lost of friends there, and I always remembered them in my prayers and thanked the goddess that I hadn't joined them. But now, with the way things are, and the village government.... It's all so peaceful and calm, and everybody patronizes me when I talk about how they should be more careful, how they should still train in arms. They are annoyed with me, too, like one would be with a senile elder who always frets about the yang-li migrations. I am not so old yet. I am only just entering the middle years, and I'm still strong enough of arm to beat any other in the village, not that that's saying much these days.


Inspiration: "Ain't Talkin' Bout Love" - Van Halen
Story Potential: medium
Notes: So naturally s/he goes over the edge, back to the battle--or to start a battle. Or to find a battle lost and to save it after the end.
The heat of the desert sun penetrated through the white robes and veils. The rhythmic drumming of horses hooves underneath her as they raced across the salt flats. The bitter taste of the air in her mouth. The views of lakes in the distance, lakes that she knew were a lie. It was horrible and it would kill her if she lingered. She threw back her head and laughed gleefully. It was horrible, yes, but beautiful, and free in a way that she could never be where there were other lives around. Here--if she let free and a spike of energy shot out into the desert, there was no life to be harmed. At worst, she might kill her horse and herself. That was it. That was why--

Inspiration: "Shrine" by Beats Antique
Story Potential: Medium-high
Notes: I like the "feel" of it, but the story itself is not original enough to write.
The dice rattled and rolled across the velvet panel, finally sliding to a stop on top of death and taxes, and the king laughed a deep rumbling belly laugh. "Death it is!" he proclaimed. The court applauded politely, though the man in cuffs looked pained. "But wait," the prisoner insisted, "see there--the dice didn't lay flat. It's on its side between death and fate." "Only because there was a wrinkle in the velvet," the king grumbled. "Even a wrinkle may show the desires of the gods." "Oh, bah. Very well, then. A quest." The king leaned back, stroking his beard.


Inspiration: Dice-roller.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Blech.
Dormice were cute, adorable, and enchanting--everything she was not. Unless you used "enchanting" in the other sense of the word. That's why they were her default form whenever she was startled or forced to 'mute into something else. No hero worth his salt would ever hurt such a tiny, helpless, adorable creature. Little girls would protect her and feed her. Only a real dastard would hurt a dormouse, and most of those would recognize her for what she truly was and steer clear. Nope, in a storming-the-castle-type situation, a dormouse was a fantastic choice! It was somewhat less so when what had startled her was her familiar. The raven croaked laughter and--


Inspiration: Cute Overload, because OMGCEEYYYUUTE!
Story Potential: Low
Notes: Funny premise, no story.
The hanged man didn’t bother her, it was the shadows that danced below his swinging feet that did. She’d watched them all afternoon, first to keep from looking at the hanged man’s face—though it wouldn’t have bothered her, she told herself, she just didn’t feel like it—and then from a fascination of her own. The shadows danced against the angle of the light, in ways that did not follow nature. They were—separate. Their own thing, definitely not cast by the hanged man. He did cast his own shadow, which she could just barely see if she squinted at the right angle. It was the only shadow that didn’t go against nature, but it was mobbed by the small horde of unnatural beasts. She wondered if, when her turn came, they would--


Inspiration: ?
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: And yes, she's hanging in a cage.
It was very hard work being a Fool. One had to be entertaining, and funny, and do pratfalls, and make oneself a spectacle--while still pointing out the pomposity that rulers and those who surrounded them might be prone to. Puncturing the egos of the rich and powerful, without going so far as to make them kill you. It was even harder to be the Fool in Trilandia, for one also had to please the Queen--ahem. Literally. That required a good-looking, strong man who could still leave the impression that he was nothing of the sort. And one must please the queen without allowing others to know you'd gone that far and making them kill you. He'd clearly failed at least in one respect--

Inspiration: The book cover of Fool's War.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh. Nothing new here.
The bird with the golden beak sat inside a cage, and she thought it was the saddest thing she'd ever seen. "Its beak was too hard, you see," the vizier explained in a whisper in her ear. "It pecked and it hurt his highness. So he got a goldsmith and a butcher, and they sawed off the bird's beak and fashioned a soft gold one to replace it. The bird is not so hungry as it used to be, and it does not sing as loudly or fly as boldly, but when it pecks, it feels hardly like anything at all. But it rarely pecks." She slewed her eyes at the vizier. "I would have understood without the elaborate story." "Ah." The vizier smiled sadly. "But you see, the story is also true."

Inspiration: The previous freewriting about a room with a bird in it.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Neat image, but nothing new here.
It was tithe day, and the overlord's collector sighed as he approached the Valle estate. Always there was more work there, though also more profit, and it could not be said that they did not abide by the tax rules. People who lived there died a little younger than elsewhere, but they did not have to fear being taken on tithe day, or losing their children. A child was a simple enough thing to take with him, however, and the Valle had an arrangement that was far from simple. Behind the tax collector a huge wagon filled with glass globes trundled along.

Inspiration: Pondering taxes. The taxman cometh. Thinking about tithes other than money.
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Neat set-up, but only a set-up.

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