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There's no place like home. There are a lot of cliches surrounding that idea. It's the place where they have to drag you back! It's where you'll find out who you really are, after leaving to find yourself and only eventually coming back. It's the place that you'll look for for the rest of your days. What most people don't talk about outside the context of family is that it's the place that has a certain kind of people, the kind you grew up, the kind who act in ways that you can predict without having to stop and think about it and second-guess. I grew up on the Mining Station 4201, and those of you who were reading the newsfeeds about twenty years ago are probably wincing now. Yes, that one. The one that the terrorists blew up as an opening strike. How many casualties was it? Lots. Lots and lots. Well, we fought that war, found their home base, and destroyed it before I was 17. Don't expect that to cheer me up. As far as I'm concerned, all that means is that we murdered another whole bunch of people, same as they did to us. I saw the victory vids before the admin got smart and cleaned them up. There were bodies of kids and noncombatants in there, too, same as at 4201.


Inspiration: "Low Place Like Home" - Sneaker Pimps
Story potential: Medium
Notes: Meanwhile, all mining's become automated, so how to go about recreating home?


Space born, space made, and space served, she was, but space babies were expensive to keep in space. She'd been born in a lab, of genetics optimized for muscle and less bone loss, for quick reaction times and sharp eyes and no nausea and a high G-resistance that still tolerated no G just fine. She might have made a pretty good swimmer, if she'd been earth born, but instead she was tracked to pilot from the time she was old enough to walk and start playing with the shiny toys--the peripheral awareness devices, as the kindergarten called them. And she was a good pilot, and she loved her job, and she hated the enemy just every bit as much as she ought to, but no more than that, and she had a sterling record during the war. Her psych eval was clean after the peace treaty, too. Not for her one of the orbiting space stations of old space born who couldn't deal with the peace, who had to be kept way from the rest for the safety--


Inspiration: [livejournal.com profile] dsgood's comment referencing "space born," googled out to the 10th, came up with this image: http://www.inprnt.com/gallery/eilidh/spaceborn/.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: And so she manages to keep a job in space after the war until she ends up downsized to earth. And then--
You can't see the stars so much in the sky anymore, but it's not because of light pollution or smog. Nope. They've decided to come down and see what all the fuss about being human is. You've probably heard that lovely poetic quote about all of us being starstuff? Sounds fine until you see the wandering stars lighting up the eyes of what will be a human husk once its abandoned. Sounds romantic until you see the dark eye of the abyss shining out of that cop who pulled you over for a traffic stop and just seems to be far too amused about the whole process. They don't really get the human thing, you see. The stars wander around being dazzled by flesh and sensation and gravity acting upon them directly, right up until they step in front of a bus or walk into a pool and don't know how to swim or do some other incredibly foolish thing. The dark stars, though, they seem to have a bit more purpose--


Inspiration: "Wandering Star" - Kid Beyond
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Nice imagery and all, but it just doesn't make sense!
Nothing like the smell of napalm in the morning, he thought, quoting some old sage from the bushfire era on Earth. 'Course, out in vacuum the only thing you smelled was your own piss and sweat--and vomit, sometimes, when it was particularly bad. He'd heard stories how only the real hard-cases survived the first few wars because no bright spark had thought to put in a way to vacuum out the vomit, so men would choke on it and die if they were the sensitive type, or they'd go to trying to get their helmet off, which sometimes was okay and sometimes would pop your eyeballs inside out.


Inspiration: LJ writer's prompt
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: This isn't a story idea, but it's a nice bit of character/setting.
"Your synapses are very sparkly," the G'klon trade ambassador told him very seriously. "Should you wish to discuss this opportunity further, you should reach us at our embassy." "Ah--thank you?" Ted said, not sure if he'd been complimented, threatened, offered a job, or all of the above. The G'klon were weird, not least because you could never tell what rank or status a person you were talking to was. One day it would be one thing, and the next, that person would e doing something else. It was disconcerting, was what. He decided that if it was a job offer, he still wasn't interested; he was doing just fine in the interstellar catering business, thankyouverymuch. The one thing his stint as a reservist had qualified him for was space-jobs. Too bad he didn't have any of the qualifications for the top notch gigs--but he got paid a whole lot more as a waiter up here than he would down there.


Inspiration: LJ's prompt: "What compliment did you receive last?"
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Polite introduction of the body-snatchers....
It was somewhere around Nothing Point where we started having the engine troubles, and that was--well, not quite as bad as it could get, but plenty bad enough. Nothing Point was so called because there was nothing else around, but at least there was the Point. Mechanics, food suppliers, some of the shady or desperate traders. You could get your ship fixed there, if you limped in, if you had the coin to trade, and if you were smart and well-armed enough to keep somebody else from stealing it for scrap. It was that sort of place. And if you lost your ship, you couldn't go wailing to the authorities, or even your insurance company, for that matter. It was gone and you were stuck. That's if you were lucky, and they were merciful.

Inspiration: "Somewhere Around Nothing" - Apocalyptica
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: I like the setting. Could be fun. Nothing super-original here, though.
They tangoed across the room with a dust rag in one hand and a mop in the other, pausing in the middle for a close embrace, and then moving on with the perfectly timed rhythms of professional dancers. They were professional dancers, of course, but not first and foremost. Nor were they cleaners first. No, what they had chosen to set above all other things in life was being able to live in space. Chronic lower back disc pain would have rendered her unable to dance...eventually, barely able to walk. In space, though there was some gravity in the residential quarters, she would get no worse. And she could still dance. And so they took whatever jobs they could--for he was a man loyal to the woman who had been his partner in dance since they were seventeen and his partner in romance for almost as long--and they danced in space.

Inspiration: "Swedish Wedding March"
Story Potential: Low? High? I am confused by this.
Notes: I love this image, but it's not a good story idea.
There was no up or down in the water reservoir. There was no out and no in. There was no right and no wrong. There was no company. Even on an EVA, there was such a hive of ships and workers on the skin of the station that it was impossible to truly feel alone unless you let yourself drift out far enough to be at risk of becoming a Flying Dutchman. In here, though, she could be herself, hair flowing out in the water as she rolled over and over. Eventually, she would touch the floor, or find her head breaking the surface. It was not in her control when. She might swim for only a couple of minutes, or for hours, until the webs between her fingers ached and her gill flaps felt rough and raw from the chemicals the water was treated with. It was safe to swim in--she'd asked, carefully--so long as you could breathe water.

Inspiration: "Any Other Name" by Thomas Newman
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Good character, interesting setting.
It's not the darkness and the cold of space that gets to you, you know. I mean, depending on where you are, space isn't that cold--too hot, in fact!--and the darkness is just like a beautiful background for stars and planets and all kinds of other gorgeous things. No. And it certainly isn't the silence, because that's the thing, see--it isn't. Silent. Nope. The constant hiss of recirculated air, and heaven help you if it stops, the sound of your coworkers breathing, that background white noise electronic hum that natural noises kinda help you tune out. That's there all the time. That hum. And it gets louder and louder sometimes, so's you wish that one annoying guy would tell that one annoying story one more time, just to get the hum out. People talking cuts it, somewhat. Not enough, not if you've been up there long enough.

Inspiration: "In Continuum" by Laraaji
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Not really a story here. Strong voice, though.
Drug addiction rates were sky high up on the rocket rocks. Something about neurons not being formed new as much. It was a lot harder to kick anything. People got obsessive, even the straight-edgers. They'd play their vids for forty-eight hours straight, or eat nothing but oranges for a week or more. The doctor tried his best to keep them all on an even keel, but the man was addicted to stims himself. And if the doctor went down, knowing the causes and the signs and all, what chance had the rest of them? When it got too bad they'd be shipped to rehab down on Earth, out of the radiation belt that slowed new neuron development. Had to do that anyway, after you'd been up for a certain amount of time. Your brain got to running a little slow.

Inspiration: Scientific American article about new neurons helping to fight addiction.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Kinda interesting setting, I guess.
They chanted the ship into ignition, a hundred-deep ring of monks, cowls off, heads tilted up to the ignition fire and the glory of God. Across the world, monks mirrored the circle in town squares, chanting the fire ascending and the miracle of planet birth to be. Children set off firecrackers that soared into the sky like tiny messages. On the mountain tops, peasants shielded their eyes and squinted to see if they could spot the ignition flare.

Inspiration: Listening to "Ave Maria" on Pandora while an ad showing a coffee cup juddering about on top of a car was playing.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I'm not sure what this story is--except awesome.
It was free, and that was the only reason he could put his finger on later. It was free, and so he took it. Never mind that nothing was ever free on Donner Station, and that that small detail was so well known that it not only made the orientation packet and the tourist brochures, it was even casually used as a tie-in in most of the news about the station. "In Donner Station, nothing is free, as so-and-so found out when--" Well, now he was the so-and-so.

Inspiration: I don't even know.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: It's not really a plot idea, but it's entertaining, and I find myself pulled in. Maybe I'm just easily entertained this morning.
The shipboard life was not a glamorous one, at least not on a ship like this. He'd signed on with dreams of being--if not a passenger--at least one of the servants, so suave and polished, that he'd seen on the advids. He'd known, intellectually, that he wouldn't find a job like that at a small port, and that even if he did he wouldn't qualify for it, but he hadn't really let go of the dream. And assistant ship accountant had seemed a respectable enough position, if not something like head steward or coordinator or--well, he wasn't actually sure what all the titles were. He hadn't expected it to mean shoving around cargo in the hold and counting things. He'd bought nice suits special before he--

Inspiration: Listening to The Vor Game, in a bit about spaceships.
Potential: Medium.
Notes: I like the character, but this needs something else to make it interesting. Oh, and obviously, as assistant accountant he discovers something terribly awry.
The rain was reaching peristalsis when she heard the first strums of the future against her gillflaps. It was not what she'd expected, and she croaked in horror as she felt the future pulling her away from the spawning pond and towards the stars. She tried to cling to the tree limb, but the tide was too strong, and the spring rains pulled her away from home and the handsome mate she'd selected and towards the station. She oozed from her skin in alarm, but the future was undeniable. She didn't really reconcile herself to her new life for several years, but after she saved--


Inspiration: "My Silent Knowing" by Liquid Mind
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Froggy aliens! But other than that, not much new here. Though I sorta like the character. Also, peristalsis is 90% the wrong word here.
She was staring at the radar readings, more than a little confused to pick up something the shape of an octopus with horns...if that octopus was the size of Texas and rapidly heading towards earth. "Um, boss?" she said, watching the display warily, as if it might change the instant she took her eyes away. "I don't know if somebody's playing a joke on me here, but I think you should see this. Now." Her boss strode over, took one look at the screen, and spun around and ran to the wall, where he pushed a large blue button under a large "Do Not Touch" sign. Then he picked up the telephone from the desk nearby and, without dialing a number, said, "Case Cthulhu is active. Repeat, Case Cthulhu."

Inspiration: A woot.com t-shirt marked with an octopus with horns.
Story Potential: Low. Silly? I don't know.
Notes: Cthulhu...in...SPAAAAAAAAAAACE.
Grandmother's paella was always rich and creamy, a savory concoction that made me think of old Spanish women passing along the correct way of cooking to their daughters and granddaughters, as they sat in the hacienda kitchen and watched every move of aged hands with great attention, knowing that a perfect paella might be their key to future happiness, and outside the caballeros whistled and sang as they worked under the hot Spanish sun. That is my idea. I have never been to Spain, and I never even saw the "Grandmother" that Grandmother's paella was made by. It was only ever a selection on the food menu, but when you have been kept in isolation--

Inspiration: A NYT.com article about a Spanish restaurant
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Kept isolated for some reason from most people except for the chosen, designated ones, has no knowledge of family, has formed these bonds for ? Escapes, finds connections. Under the Tuscan Sun meets Alien Resurrection (OK, that pitch alone is making me want to rate this higher). Could be an okay YA book--isolation themes are really strong for adolescents.
It was a long, cold haul on the job, going around the asteroid belt and building up a nice trail of ice-rich meteors to follow him back to the warm orbit where the watership could scoop them up. Not much to do out there, not even for a man as scientifically inclined as himself--the first few trips, he'd busied himself with experiments on plants and animals, seeing how they handled the strains of space. Most of it was repeating research done back in the early days, but he didn't care. Eventually, it ceased to interest him. Though in the beginning he'd watched the distant singing of the black holes on the spectrograph with the same fascination ancient sailors would have given to whale song, it too paled. He'd borrowed--

Inspiration: My tiring work schedule the last couple of weeks, an interesting (if unread as of the writing) article in SciAm about singing black holes, and Billie Holiday.
Story Potential: High, actually.
Notes: At least, I like the character and the themes a story like this could explore.
Being sick gave her an excuse to stay in and avoid the ceremony. It wasn't a lie, either; she'd caught radiation sickness working in the old ship, back before they even really understood all the different ways that radiation could creep inside and poison the bones of people. Despite that, she'd loved working on the old ship, and she'd never held a grudge. That was why she didn't want to see it decommissioned. She'd loved that ship, and her best days had been spent upon it. It wasn't time for the ship to go--somehow, it felt like she'd been marked as obsolete too. And maybe she had, she thought, looking around her at the stateroom that she had all her worldly belongings in. It was about as small as a captain's stateroom on board the old ship; that was to say, ridiculous--

Inspiration: Being sick. Pheh.
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Not 'zactly an unused beginning, but not one that's been done to death, either. It's really just the opening--what comes after is what makes it stand out.
In space, no-one can hear you scream. Except for the twat on the other end of your intercom, the one who persuaded you to do a one-only spacewalk on the outside of the ship because he thought he saw "something weird" and he's going to stay inside to give you directions. Right. She sighed, more than entirely expecting that he was about to sever her umbilical airline and go straight for the main base himself. All the heavy lifting was done. He could get in, sell the ore they'd harvested, and laugh all the way to the bank. There were always spacers looking for a berth, and maybe this time he'd get lucky and find a not-hideous one who didn't recoil when he offered to bunk together, one who would be happy to play second fiddle to a man who she now suspected only had the ship because--

Inspiration: Ah, I've been reading some space opera lately, and I really like it.
Story Potential: High, if only because this can go so many directions.
Notes: Does he? Doesn't he? What comes next?
He would wonder for the rest of his life how he had possibly slipped by. A glitch in the system, he'd thought at first, but by the time he was an old man and wise in ways that he could never have imagined back then, he suspected that it had been deliberate. Whether it was a necessary balancing or the intelligence's need to add random factors into an equation as a way of making the colony more stable in the long run, he didn't know. For the first while, though, he was convinced that somebody, somewhere, had made a horrible screw-up, and any minute they'd appear to take him back to where he'd come from. Because of this, he'd kept his head as far down as possible and done just enough work to earn him a little praise but--

Inspiration: I was thinking of guidelines and applications and whatnot.
Story Potential: Medium potential. No story spark, but a nice basic setting.
Notes: ...and then it all went horribly wrong....

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