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The plans for the wedding were going as well as any interspecies and intercultural event could--right up until they got to the wedding chairs. The idea of sitting at a wedding would signal defeat to the Zalts, and the traditional Indian family of the bride would be horrified at the idea of leaving out such an important part of the tradition. This was one of those cases where neither side would give, and having only the bride sit would also provide exactly the wrong idea. The Hindu ceremony was fine, the traditions for decorating the bride were fine, the thing-that-wasn't-a-white-horse was acceptable, but the chairs--inconceivable. Also, very very expensive unless she could manage to find a local artisan who could make something appropriate in time. She jotted a note on her pad about finding an artisan. Cost wasn't much of an issue--if it were, these two families would hardly be initiating a dynastic joining--but it was a matter of her pride as a good organizer. And if her second big contract sank in flames over a chair, it would also be her last contract. Her first contract, by comparison, had been simple to arrange.


Inspiration: MillionShort search on "tent bazaar" -> Indian wedding chair manufacturer
Story potential: Medium
Notes: Ah, the interspecies event planner. Another opportunity for a series of linked short stories, I suppose.
The flowers were gorgeous and purple and ruffled and quite unlike anything she'd ever seen before. And they were sitting in front of her door. Being the security-conscious type of person that the security chief should be, she disciplined herself and ran a full scan over the flowers to make sure they were clear of any toxins, poisons, explosives, psychedelics, or any other residues that might make it a trap. high level gang ring of rickletons had made her a little wary, since they were known for holding grudges and keeping high level scores of who was ahead and who was behind and sometimes they had the nasty little habit of evening the playing field by killing whoever was at the top. She had a wincing suspicion that doing her job had put her pretty high up on the list, and she was hoping that something else would rise up to capture their interest (and points) very, very soon. She also hoped that it wouldn't be on her station, because she'd had enough trouble for a while and all she wanted to do was relax. That wasn't enough for her caution to make her not pick up the flowers--they were lovely, and real biomass, not one of the scented simulacra!--but it was enough to have her arrange them in a lovely vase and then set them in her fresher. She'd be able to see them regularly, and if they happened to explode or do something else interesting, then the door would add an extra level of shielding.


Inspiration: The gorgeous purple and unidentifiable flowers that I got at the farmer's market. No idea what they are, except purty.
Story potential: High.
Notes: And somehow this is the first step in getting the main character in a dynastic marriage to one of those trouble-making, rule-breaking, score-keeping aliens. Also, not sure yet if the dynamic would be more interesting if it was a male main character (dealing with unusually aggressive females and ending up with the usual female dynamic) or a female (because more fun). I confess, this also made me think of B5 quite a bit.
Rake

What should Death's bride wear? It wasn't even really a question. If you were going to be Death's bride, you wore the traditional white dress covered with an overdress of ashes. Over time, that had evolved into a silvery gray embroidered overdress that managed to be mournful and celebratory at the same time. Some of the past brides had spent the last day on the earth worrying about accessories and putting their final affairs in order, but Gita's affairs had always been in order from the day she was old enough to take over managing her father's accounts, much to his relief. The house was cleaned, she'd arranged that the neighbor women should bring in food for her father for the next month while he adjusted to living without her, and she'd prominently placed the name of a good local bookkeeper on top of the neatly stacked books and beside the spike where her father usually just stuck whatever papers he thought might be important. She expected that when the spike was full, he might actually notice the bookkeeper's name. She had written farewell letters to all her extended family and to all the friends she'd made in the short 16 years that she'd spent on the surface of the world--but she reminded herself sharply that she'd decided not to think about that.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/closetartist/6955948306/
Story potential: High.
Notes: Something about the practical choice of the rake really appeals to me. So she faces him with rake in hand. I like this character. And I think these photos are going to be some great inspiration for me.
They clipped my wings today. Allen protested that he didn't believe in outmoded traditions, and that it was unnecessary damage, and how could I do that to myself? I'm a traditionalist, though, and I thought it was important for him to know that I loved and trusted him enough to believe he would take care of me. Also, they grow back in 7 years time, though I didn't tell him that. Then I can decide again if I want to have them clipped. He probably doesn't know. I'm told that most men don't. The change is gradual and subtle, and as long as we wear the ornate wing-caps that cover our stubs, they won't see that the claw has grown back at the tip, signaling readiness to fly and cling to cliff faces where we hide our nests, or where we did in the old days, before we became human.



Inspiration: "Clipped" - Rasputina
Story potential: High
Notes: Could be interesting for a setting. Could also hit a little too close to sensitive subjects for me to necessary feel okay writing it as a light-hearted thing, which is the thing that it is.
Priya smiled at him through the tummy of his Talk-Teddy. "I recorded this message for you after schoolwork," she said. "Mother is so strict about me doing everything in its time. Maybe we can chat again on Wednesday." Across a continent, Rajesh leaned back and listened to Priya chatting, watching her animated face in his Talk-Teddy. Once the recording was done, Talk-Teddy began to talk with him. Their teddies had introduced them first, three years ago, when Rajesh won the all-school math quiz and Priya had done the same in her school. Rajesh wasn't sure how big a deal that was because his teachers refused to tell him if they graded on a curve or not, and of course, since he never saw the other students--


Inspiration: Evan's creepy Toytalk link
Story potential: High
Notes: Where the AI toys act as marriage brokers from the very earliest interactions (after matching horoscope, etc.). The full arc of an lifelong long-distance relationship. Maybe at the end she doesn't even exist, but what they created does? Whether it be digital children (one wants to be a doctor) or something else. Options include LMoE, plague bunkers, ineligibility for the reproductive pool, or something else. Needs a second plotline to be a good story. Maybe this *is* the second plotline.
Two months since Rudy did a flying Dutchman when his safety line snapped while he was out working on the external antennae array, way up high there where there were no safety net floating forty meters out, where the beacons were all turned off because otherwise they could interfere with the signal. He should have remembered that his beacon was off and flipped it on, but maybe he was hit by a piece of flying debris when the smaller array came loose and swung on him. If it had been turned on, it would have automatically started broadcasting a mayday when both his boots let the surface of the station for more than a 120 seconds, but it was turned off. Laura and Grant kept going, because what else do you do? You go to work, you come home, you comfort your surviving spouse when she breaks down in tears in the middle of dinner, you sleep in the bed and try not to think of how empty it feels with only the two of you in it.


Inspiration: Trying to think of story ideas for the 4th Street Fantasy storytelling circle, wanted kind of a retelling.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: And then the flying Dutchman ship comes to the station just out of reach, demands supplies, mysteriousness ensues, Laura goes over because she believes Rudy is there, Grant is stopped, finale later he does make it, on some other station, or at least that's the rumor. There needs to be other plot stuff here, too, to make it truly interesting. Like what makes the spaceship a flying Dutchman, and are they pirates or under quarantine, or what?
Sakura

All winter, through the frozen hopes and the waiting, she huddled indoors, too delicate to venture out. All her food was delivery, and since she lived in a small town, she was very, very sick of pizza and Chinese food by the time the weather warmed enough for her to go out and seek her husband. She walked the alleys, sniffing the air. When the first scents of spoiled garbage started, she was ecstatic. It was the first sign. Then the lilacs bloomed, and the purple face of her husband turned to her once more.


Inspiration: The picture above. Thinking "bride of the cherry blossoms" - but no, that would be entirely different from the culture, why don't I do it with something local?
Story Potential: Low. So low.
Notes: Blargh.
Buying the house crossed a line, and he knew it, but he couldn't stop himself. She never wanted him to be too involved, too greedy, too attached. She wouldn't wear a ring, she wouldn't sign on-ship as a dependent, she'd chosen him because his work took him away for months or even years. He knew that if he ever quit his job, she'd quit him within weeks. But he loved her, and he thought that she loved him, too, in her own way, which was more than he thought he could ever have counted on getting. But he bought the house. A smarthouse could watch over her while he was far away, he hoped, and it could send transmissions--

Inspiration: "I Walk the Line" by Johnny Cash, plus a real estate listing that popped up when I googled "reflection" from the image of The Bean.
Story Potential: High? Though I'm a bit worried this isn't original enough.
Notes: A story told in transmissions. A horror SF story. At first the house keeps tabs, but then its need to care for her is frustrated by her fear of attachment. So eventually it arranges things so that she can't escape, and it does something to her sense of time so that by the time he gets back, a century will have passed with her as its prisoner.
It was never a good sign when her third husband came home and wound himself around her legs and then hid under her desk, where she could protect him. There had been quite a bit of that in the beginning, when she brought him home, as there usually was between new husband and old husbands. The marriage broker had told her to make a space that would just be the new husband's, and to let him venture out of it when he felt comfortable doing so, and not to freak out when the husbands fought. Of course, she already had two, so she had seen some of how it worked, but the first two had settled relatively quickly. Husband three...had not. He didn't start fights or mark territory, none of the usual ways that husbands caused trouble. No. He would--

Inspiration: Oh, a cat ran under my legs to hide from the Roomba.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: But it's tricky. The gender politics of this could be--troublesome. Would I feel okay if this was about a male and his "wives"? Less so, I judge. Ah, double standard. Perhaps a less charged term than husband and a more gender ambiguous one? Or would that be copping out? Hrm. Pondering. In fact--what happens if a husband gains independence? Would he then get "wives" like that? How would this society react to that?
"I can't believe you told her you were planning on killing her." "I didn't exactly *plan* on telling her--it just slipped out!" "What, with the morning tea? Good morning, dear, anything interesting in the paper today, and oh by the way, I'm planning on killing you?" "Well, something like that, yes...." "Dear heavens. And what, pray tell, was the ladies response?" "She laughed and said that she'd poisoned the tea herself. Why do you think we're meeting in a hospital?" "And had she?" "No." "Ah. Well, perhaps we'll get lucky and she thinks you were just joking, as she was." "Although there is some trace amount of a biological agent that they couldn't identify." "What?!" "It may be contagious, that's why they're not allowing visitors." "And you sat there and breathed the same air--!"

Inspiration: Voices in my head. Except I forgot what they said, and so this happened instead.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Meh.
He cheated while she was away on her diplomatic mission to Czartar. She won an award for that one, but it didn't make it worth coming home to find her husband had slept with the tattooed dancer girl at one of his banquets. The girl swore that she wouldn't have gone after him if she'd known he was married, but he'd given the impression he was separated. It didn't matter much, then, to her. She felt overwhelmingly tired. She had tried to keep ties to earth and family strong, she had tried to keep a marriage, even though they only saw each other every six months, and she had tried to stay a nice, good human woman, despite the wonders and temptations the alien worlds had opened up to her. That did it.

Inspiration: Sandra Bullock winning an Oscar and then finding out her husband had cheated on her.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: I like this character, and this could go interesting places, but the interesting bits would all happen around this.
Aiko had 4,627 husbands, and sometimes they drove her to distraction. One wanted her to have his shirts ironed, another wanted to iron them himself. One wanted to save the world by requiring all companies to abide by strict regulations, another wanted to become the CEO of a majorcorp. They all loved her. And it was her responsibility to love and support and encourage them all, even when they had different goals and needed different things. So it was almost as if there were also 4,627 Aikos, one for each husband--though in truth, the basic variations came down to only 60, with small reminders for daily routine differences. Men weren't that complicated. She loved them, she truly did, and they all loved her. So when she left them, without warning and without explanation, they all decided that something bad had happened to her and they set out to find their wife.

Inspiration: "Man in Japan Weds Video Game Wife" - http://www.boingboing.net/2009/11/24/footage-from-the-fir.html
Story Potential: High. Very high.
Notes: I don't know where the rest of the story goes, or even if she will leave them or if something else will happen, but I love this setup. Will definitely write this one (eventually).
She was wondering what to make for dinner when she heard the radio talking about a zombie outbreak 20 miles south of her town, and suddenly deciding between pot roast and spaghetti with meatballs just didn't seem that important. Neither did the dirty kitchen floor, or the unfolded laundry, or that annoying bitch at the PTA meetings. A great many of the things that she'd let build up around her like a coral reef suddenly didn't matter anymore. She picked up her cellphone and dialed her husband's number. When he answered, she just said, "Did you see the news?" When he said yes, she told him, "You'll have to pick up the kids from school, and you're on your own for dinner. Maybe longer. I'll try to call, if rioters haven't knocked down the cell towers by now. Or if survivors didn't try to climb them and the zombies knocked them over." She hung up without waiting for him to answer, and went up to the attic, to her cedar chest. Underneath blankets and her wedding dress, she found her black leather pants, bodice, gloves, jacket, and wide choker. They still fit--barely, and thank goodness for that kettleball class--though she felt half-ridiculous wearing them. The other half of her surged forward, victorious, elated, and ready to kick ass.


Inspiration: AC/DC "Back in Black"
Story Potential: High?
Notes: It's a good sign that I felt compelled to keep writing past the two minutes, until I got a bit more done. This can be ass-kicking and still speak to that part of most women that misses the things they had to give up for husband or family. Even the happiest woman will be wistful now and again. (Kettleballs thanks to Opheliac9.) And yeah, she's about to go fire up her old motorcycle.
Ralph froze up in the middle of the front door. It was a little awkward, when she wanted to have guests over. Especially overnight guests. They told her that he could tell; that he couldn't hear or see or think. They said he was just frozen there, as if nothing was happening. He'd had bad luck, they said, to find a hang. She took to telling friends and guests to go around the side of the house. Of course, Ralph might be able to see them through the windows. She couldn't remember how good his peripheral vision was, but she put curtains up just in case. She thought about closing off the front room, but it was a small house, so instead she hired a carpenter to come in and--

Inspiration: Firefox hanging. AGAIN. My computer is dying by inches. Very frustrating.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I like the idea of sketching this out as a short-short. Need something to add a little punch to it, but still good.
The blank was between her ears. That was the real problem with her. She smiled, she acted fine, she remembered her past. She could think about the future. But when it came to the here-and-now, she was entirely helpless. She remembered her past so that she could make rules for the future based on it. She remembered the future because that was what her family had been bred to do for generations. It made life interesting, having her as a wife. There was no telling what she might think would fit next, because half the time she was remembering the past, and the other half she was foretelling the future, but there wasn't really a way for him to tell which was which. He'd asked her, once, in a rare moment when she seemed wholly with him, whether there was some way she could indicate whether she was in the past or the future. She'd looked at him as if he'd asked her--

Inspiration: Loading up a blank page.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Started out boring, but I think it got somewhere interesting by the end.
"Thank you, husband!" she exclaimed, taking the delicately wrapped gift from him. He smiled, then gestured to all the porters behind him to bring in the goods that he had traded for. "It was a good trip, wife," he said, "our fortunes grow and prosper." He didn't see the quick turn aside that she made at the mention of his trip. To him, it was inevitable that they should part and go their separate ways for nine months out of the year--or sometimes even longer--as he plied his trade overseas and later brought home the results of his trading to fill the family coffers and to dress her and keep her in the manner that she deserved. They had--

Inspiration: Drinking tea *my* husband brought me as a gift, and pondering on how men are so pleased when they successfully hunt/gather something their woman likes.
Story Potential: High
Notes: She's without male company most of the year. It would be an interesting thing to take Beauty & the Beast and Persephone & Hades--but with the wife instead of a daughter. Of course, she probably has daughters, or other children. A woman settling reluctantly into middle age, perhaps. And with Italian influences, I think, though I'm not sure why.
The glories of the season swelled around her in symphony, and she spun beneath the cherry trees, looking up to watch the blossoms falling all around her. Her sash trailed gracefully behind her. Her face was a perfect oval tilted up innocently to look tat the trees. He felt his breath tighten in his chest, as if she had created a vacuum that was going to pull the air right out of him. He turned to the man beside him. "She doesn't know, does she?" he asked. He shook his head solemnly. "Not yet. Do you wish to tell her, my lord, or shall I?" "It was my bloody negotiated treaty, wasn't it? It's my job to tell her." Fear rose--

Inspiration: Thinking of spring and the seasons
Story Potential: High
Notes: Was quite tempted to keep on writing, which is a good sign. The standard marriage treaty, culture shock, etc. story. Not a romance, but nothing terrible about the spouse either. Instead, make it an exploration of power and following her on her path to it. Is fantasy just because it'll take place in a made-up world, not because I plan on including magic. Quite the opposite.
It was only a small dot, a water stain that hadn't been taken care of by the dishwasher, but when she saw it she froze. The small dot, just at the base of the wine goblet that they'd used for their wedding toast. They'd been so proud that it was dishwasher-safe, that they were being practical as well as romantic.... She saw the small dot, and the goblet slipped from between her fingers. It bounced, once, and then shattered to pieces on the vinyl floor of the kitchen. She looked down at it. She should get a dustpan and sweep it up, she thought, but for some reason the smudge of the water stain lingered in her mind, and instead she untied the apron she was wearing, tossed it on the kitchen counter, grabbed her car keys, and walked out the front door. She didn't even pick up her wallet from where it sat near the door. That wasn't the point.

Inspiration: "dot"
Story Potential: I don't know. Medium? It would probably be marketable, that's a really strong chick-lit start.
Notes: Was thinking of something not sci-fi or fantasy, wanted to see what would happen. Answer is, apparently chick-lit. Kinda surprised by that.
"Is the tea ceremony done?"

"Yes, it's done," I said, turning away slightly and tilting my head so that he could not read my face. I did not want to reveal my inadequacy so soon in my new marriage, for my husband was tall and strong and handsome despite a few scars from battle. I wanted to please him. I wanted him to not put me aside and go to the soothing poetry and perfect tea ceremonies of the geisha in his town. I knew I could not deceive him forever, but in this small matter, a tea ceremony for a ghost, surely he would have no way of discovering my ignorance. Perhaps I could even, in a subtle way, pick up the proper knowledge. For raised alone by my father, who was distant and involved in business not to be--


Inspiration: "nonfeasance" and the cup of tea in front of me.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: As far as the story goes, I wasn't thinking of this to start with, but I like it. It ties in to any number of fairytales where the new bride does/doesn't do something crucial that she is required to go on a long adventure through many perils to right. And I like the Asian aspect of it.

Has it really been a week since I did this last? Yikes. And to think that I started this as way to get some writing, however little, done on a daily basis...to keep the pipes from freezing over. Then I do get horribly, terribly busy and it's one of the first things to go. Well, not one of the first, but go it did. Must do better in the future.
Standing on the edge of the shore, he tilted his face up, letting the cold wind blowing off the lake dry the tears from his cheeks. In the distance, on the other side of the lake, he saw the glowing beacons of the harbor. Behind him lay the dark woods. He thought of going back to the boat and rowing back across the lake to safety, to a pint of beer in a pub and a casual chat with the same old faces that he'd seen for so long. He thought of the expression on his wife-s face before she stepped into the lake, the strange peace that had suffused her in the weeks before her suicide, the way that all the men of the town had held him back to keep him from diving in after her. The moon had ridden high in the sky, making the surface of the lake look like black blood in the night.

Inspiration: "Once in a Lifetime" by Wolfsheim
Story Potential: High.
Notes: At first I thought this was going to be a present-world, present-time story. Now I don't. Close, though; one of those other-side-of-the-mirror style of stories. Neat.

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