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Wake me up when September ends, dear," she said, and then my mother rolled over and fell asleep amid a drift of comforters and overstuffed pillows. A single red-orange leaf lay beside her pillow, like an alarm clock promising to wake her up when her season came around again. As it happens, this had been one of the better summers that I could remember in my whole life, at least when one considers it a good thing when my mother is awake. After some fifteen years of being my mother, I think she's finally learned to remember that I am human, and mortal, and have limitations. I may be awake when she sleeps away the other three seasons, but once she wakes up, she's *up* until winter comes to town, and sometimes even for a bit after that, since the seasons may shift back and forth a little. There's wiggle room. Some of that wiggle room is why I saw so much of her this summer. I wonder how Summer is doing, honestly, or I would if I really knew him. But he's here now and again to visit with my mother and discuss those things pertaining to their separate domains (it's a lot more than weather, let's just put it like that). She got to be awake because of the drought and unseasonable cold that had some of the maple leaves turning colors early. Everyone else complained and worried, but it made me secretly and selfishly happy, because it meant that for once I got to go on a summer vacation with my mother and my father. Dad and I have always had our own little rituals--and believe me, I use that phrase in the most common and generic sense, not like some of the other mortals who've figured out about Mom and the other seasons would!


Inspiration: "Wake Me Up When September Ends" - Green Day
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure if I want the protag YA or not, but either way, lives with parents, interesting seasonal relationship. Stronger story potential because this could be a good seasonal sale.
"Due to the nature of the child's parents, it would seem to make only good sense that her custody is divided equally between the two parents, given what the medical professionals involved have explained regarding her...particular...needs. They assure me that with time it will become evident with which parent she should reside, but until that time, it is important to provide equal time, given various assurances of her safety regarding...manifestations of her nature...in either location." She sat there, trying to pretend that she didn't even know this family that the judge was talking about, but it was no good. On one side sat her earth-walking mother, wearing fancy high heels as fi to emphasize that she could, her skin tanned from the time she spent outdoors but her hair coiffed to such perfection that it made it clear most of that time was not spent in saltwater. On the other side sat her water-living dad, his hair a sun-bleached tangle that glinted now and then with a strand of pearls or precious metals tangled in it, his clothes the easily shed, waterproof kind, and a pitcher of water large enough for a meeting of twelve sitting in front of him--half-drunk. It would be seawater, too, she knew. She liked seawater well enough to drink, herself.


Inspiration: "Harbour Lecou" - Great Big Sea
Story potential: Medium
Notes: What happens when a merman and a human woman really, really don't love each other anymore.... I like the character of the daughter, though.
"Time is what you make it. Never feel like you're going to break it, because if you feel that you might--well, then you might. But if you don't feel that you might, then you never will. And we hate having to go in and clean up after broken time. It's inevitable, I suppose, with us teaching you young ones how to take care of it, but that doesn't mean it's any fun. Sometimes there are human casualties, and there are *always* causality casualties. All of you will be volunteered to help with a time collapse before you're passed through. It's important to learn what we're trying to avoid, here. And yes, there are natural time collapses, and yes, they can be real buggers about it because they're not as naturally limited in scope as ones caused by kids screwing up something minor. Yes, I'm talking about you. Yes, I know that most of you have degrees and all of you are over the age of majority--like any responsible parent would sign off on a minor--and--yes, you have a question?" "More of a statement, really," he said calmly. "I'm fifteen. Just thought you'd like to know." "Well, yes--what?!--who passed you thorough?" "It was less of a passing and more of a necessity. I was found in one of these disaster zones, and my parents--don't exist anymore. I can hardly remember them, since I was only a toddler. I've been in a special exclusion zone ever since, but they decided that was no longer safe enough for those around me. So they decided to train me instead of kill me." He hesitated. "I think. I suppose it's possible I'll die here or that the killing will still end up being the only option, but they decided to give me a chance first."


Inspiration: "Until the Morning" - Thievery Corporation
Story potential: High.
Notes: I'm giving this story bonus points because it's a possible time-travel/paradox-related story that I actually like. Though I think I'd probably treat it as fantasy instead of SF, if only because time travel is...not very much S, really.
We live on the edge of the Cliff Over Nothing. I know, I get massive cool points for saying that. I also know you just took massive cool points away for me using the phrase "massive cool points." It's okay. I like watching old shows from Before and reading teenager's books from Before, and unfortunately that means I think things are hip or tight or groovy. Yeah. Well, it's still comforting to pretend that nothing changed before my parents had me, that there isn't anything new or scary about being a teenager. Yeah, right. My parents are Watchers. They volunteered for the position, went through all the training and passed with flying colors (and don’t even get me started on what that did to their expectations for me), and got assigned way out here on the edge. Me, I was a bit of a surprise, but they love me, and they talked their supervisor over to their side and managed to keep their positions and the house even though I didn’t go through anything near the screening process that they did.

Every morning I go and throw things over the edge, before anybody wakes up.


Inspiration: "Hyper-Ballad" - Bjork
Story potential: High.
Notes: Yeah, so...something's been paying attention. And something else may or may not happen to "modern" teenagers when they got through puberty.


The manor was turned halfway inside-out when the architect died, and so it stayed afterwards, since nobody could figure out what the architect had done or persuade the manor to obey any other spells. This suited the patriarch of the family at the time just fine, since he had hired the architect specifically to create something unusual, and this certainly qualified! At that time, too, the family's finances were more in order and they could afford the extra servants to properly get things done between the two halves and the hazard pay that sometimes became necessary if a servant walked through the wrong door in the wrong phase of time. They posted signs as soon as such things happened, and so the house proliferated with warning labels, but over time this approach was able to reduce the incidence of a disappearance down to one perhaps every ten years, and that was easy enough to blame on a parlormaid running away or footman stealing a piece of jewelry from a guest. The signs stayed up, though, because if it went back to the way it had been it would be much more difficult to--


Inspiration: Today's Google Doodle in honor of Antoni Gaudi.
Story potential: High.
Notes: I like this. It feels whimsically charming. Rather Chrestomanci-esque.
"Wake up, time to die!" boomed the overhead speakers at 6 AM. We all groaned and threw pillows at the video monitors--that joke was old before we were born, and we knew it. Cultural induction meant that we got to watch all the pop culture from the twenty years before we were born and most of the current stuff, too, though we knew they censored things they thought might alter our psyches from the current youth movements. I don't know why they thought current events would have more influence on us than past ones; from our view in the bunker, it was all the same. And so we had a flapper and a Goth among us, even if the flapper could only cut her hair appropriately and roll up long fake cigarette holders out of paper, and the Goth could only manage lipstick in a really dark shade of red, and foundation for the pale-skinned, not the dead-skinned.

Inspiration: Mention of the Suicide Squad comic book (which I haven't read or heard of before--http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/1401235441/boingboing), and an article about Stalin notebooks selling in Moscow (http://boingboing.net/2012/04/06/stalin-notebooks-are-hot-selle.html)
Story Potential: Medium? High?
Notes: This is a strange, weird, sideways world, and I like it.
Drifting through the trees, weightless in real time, while around everything else moves in slow-motion. I move slow, but if you glance up, all you'll see is leaves rustling quickly or maybe a flicker of white. It is a frustration, I tell you. I understand why some ghosts start zooming through people, or deliberately creating cold breezes. The strongest can even knock items over. Me? Not so much. But I did learn that I can--age--buildings. I may not be able to grab a can of spray paint and tag anymore, but I can damn well make the bricks age and the mortar chip and the mildew die, leaving "Ghost" behind in its place.

Inspiration: "Aish Tamid" - Matisyahu
Story Potential: High?
Notes: But this is a character. But a teen ghost, who can still do some things--and then something else happens, and he/she is actually called to...could be fun. YA, though, which--gah! can I even write?
Being mauled by a small purring ball with very sharp claws and a difficult-to-pin down outline was not how she'd expected to spend her first day of veterinary school at the University of Intergalactic Medicine, and to judge by the confused, shocked, frightened, awed, or jealous expressions on her classmates' faces, they hadn't expected it either. Great. She sighed to herself. Just what she hadn't wanted to start off with. She'd hoped, truly hoped, that it could be different here. People came from all over, so any distaste for people who were slightly different would wear off quickly. She'd really hoped she could learn to blend in, make some friends, and--

Inspiration: Being mauled by a small purring ball with very sharp claws.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: This is endearing, and sweet, and not terribly original.
Living on the rooftops with the gargoyles and taking care of them was a life, and it was much better than some, he thought. Cleaning moss from their teeth and mildew from inside their ears, reading aloud to them some of the novels people threw out in their trash, and generally keeping an eye on things during the day. Scaring off kids from drawing graffiti on them and the like. The gargoyles were pretty good company, too. During the day, he could stretch out on their stone backs, warmed by the sun, and watch all the people moving around the city below, and at night--well, at night, he was in the safest place in the world. And night was when most of the nasties that might be interested in boys came out, so really, he was doing pretty well. Now and again, the gargoyles would even bring back food for him, mostly even food he could eat. So he was doing pretty well, and life was good, and his only worry was if the gargoyles were serious about him having to go to school once he turned fourteen.

Inspiration: "Chim chiminey, Chim chim cher-ee!"
Story Potential: Medium-high.
Notes: And then something Bad starts to happen to other gargoyles, and it becomes a Dangerous Adventure. This is high potential, I guess, but it's not very original, so I downgraded it.
She caught the nightmare with a carefully baited trap: her little sister after she kept her up really late watching Halloween with her. It worked, and it was totally worth it, even if it did make her mother ground her for a month. And her little sister's constant nightmares for the next week gave her something to feed the nightmare colt with while she worked on taming it. She hadn't been exactly sure how she could go ahead with bridling such a creature, but it turned out that weaving together strands of dream catchers worked like, well, a charm! And then she learned how to feed the animal--not with her own dreams, since she never had nightmares, and hadn't since she was super-small--but by walking it around the town at 2 a.m. If there was nothing, she'd lurk outside a kid's bedroom window and play the tape of Halloween sounds she'd unearthed from the attic.

Inspiration: The nightmare beast in Phil's Dark Sun one-shot.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I like the idea that this could turn her into something mythic, and not exactly on the good side of good vs. evil, but not really evil either.
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"As soon as I turn 18, I'm taking out your plug!" she hissed at her mother. "No more of this! I don't *want* you knowing where I'm going, and I *really* don't like how you moms all got together and shared blueprints so you even know which *room* I'm in--and how could you let each other track your chips? It's totally no fair for you to know if I'm alone in a room with him!"

She glared at her mother from behind her glasses, for ince ignoring the chatstreams and the floating holograms of her friends videos with word-blurbs witing to be actiated. Her mother, in the real world and in the midle, was her unidvided focus.


Inspiration: The Writer's Block Prompt
Potential: Ah, low, I suppose.
Notes: Though I do find it entertaining to extrapolate how different interactions would change with technology. I mean, writers all over the place play with sex and death and entertainment. Less so fights with your mom or other unglamorous things.
The little brat ran too fast to catch up. Serena slowed, and listened. She heard a rustling in the bushes, and part of her mind screamed, "Monster!" but she dismissed that and pounced. With a shriek and a rattle of branches, she pulled her charge out.

"Your mother said that while I babysat you, I should feel free to spank you if you needed it," she threatened.

"Nuh-uh!" the brat said. "She wouldn't pay you anything if you did!"

"Wanna find out?"

The little girl shrieked again, reaching a decibel level that only fire sirens and six-year-olds could manage.

"Come on, let's get out of here," Serena said, glancing around the empty park. The moonlight glinted off the slide and the swings that hung limp and empty. "I don't like this place."

In her moment of inattention, the brat jerked her arm free and sprinted off to climb into the park maze.


Inspiration: One of the slipside stories.
Story Potential: High
Notes: See the slipside story notes. Should this be the first one? Maybe not.
She was carving ghoulies out of the dinosaur skulls when her father found her. She thought he'd yell at her, because most of the year he wouldn't even let her touch the bones, but this time he just stopped in the doorway and watched what she was doing. She carefully carved out toothy grins and winking eyes, smiling lips or mouths parted in a howl, ears like curlicues or like trumpets. The knife never got dull, and she thought it was so much better than th knife that she took with her to school to cut her meat and peel apples. "Papa," she asked, "can I have a knife like this to take with me to school?" He went a little white around the eyes, then guffawed, as if it was a surprise to him. "No, dear--"

Inspiration: A website with crafts suggestions for kids. It had suggestions for carving ghosties and ghoulies.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: I thought this wasn't very high, at first, but now I rather like the idea of writing a cheerfully goth little girl who lives in a very peculiar world/society. It's not original, I know, but it *is* endearing.
They went to the mall because they didn't know what else to do. There were political riots at school, so they couldn't go there, and their parents were still at work, so they couldn't go home because they weren't supposed to *be* there until 4 PM. They thought about going to the library, but that was too much like a school, so they guessed there were probably riots there,too. They would have called their parents to ask where they should go, but all the cellphone signals were busy. They would have gone over to a friend's house, but that was suddenly risky. What if their friend's family was part of the rebellion? They could make their *own* family look suspicious. They could all be thrown in jail. It was all very tenuous, but they just didn't know what they could do. They might have asked a policeman, but half the policemen were--

Inspiration: Mall game.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: High in a survivalist/escapist YA sort of way, which is actually pretty high. Stories about kids and how they survive on their own are good stuff.
The bubbles rose to the surface of the pool and burst in great explosions of water that spattered the tiles of the wall and sent chlorine belches into the air. Good thing coach wasn't there to see this; he'd've gone crazy, seeing his nice pool being destroyed like that. Destroyed? Oh, yeah, it wasn't only water that was exploding. Tiles around inside the pool were shattered from the sonic underwater force of the hatching. Long strands of birthing slime floated through the pool. Tom got a lashing of it right across his face and made a screech that I couldn't help laughing at, despite the seriousness of the moment. I mean, here we were about to be parents, sort of, and *he* was the one who sounded like a girl. Of course, it was a nice bonus that--

Inspiration: Pearl Milk Tea (bubble tea)
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: So, two young swimmers find something and bring it back.
He was her little glowing friend. She'd found him out in the woods one day while she was trying to stay out of the way of her parents, who were having another one of their truly epic fights, the kind that made the housekeepers quit and the walls get repainted, the kind that once or twice had even made them move to another house and another city entirely. She'd learned early to stay out of the way during those times. She'd only been hurt once, by accident, when a shard of flying pottery sliced across her cheek, and they'd stopped and apologized immediately and taken her to see a doctor. For a few weeks, she'd hop[ed that everything would be better, that they'd stop fighting altogether, like they'd promised. That didn't last. So now she took walks when--

Inspiration: Warren Ellis' email about post topics on his boards.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: I really don't know where this could go, so although it's not bad, it's not high potential either. It's sort of a standard set-up for many a YA fantasy novel.
The shortcut wasn't working out the way he planned. From the street, it had looked like the back yard opened right out onto the alley, no muss, no fuss. It would be pretty easy to cut across the yard, dodge through the alley, and get home before his ma found out he was gone. Or so he'd thought. He had only made it halfway across the yard, though, when things got...weird. He hadn't expected an old woman to look up from her gardening--he was pretty sure nobody lived in the house, and even if they did, why would they be out gardening at 3 in the morning? He hadn't expected her to give him an odd measuring look before she turned back to her gardening either. He'd figured he was going to get yelled at, for sure, and maybe worse.

Inspiration: Damn kids walking over my lawn.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Maybe she needs an adventurous kid who's always poking his nose in the wrong place. Or maybe it's just punishment. Either way, he'll be gone a while, though of course it will still be the same time (almost) as when he left back home.
Grandmother's paella was always rich and creamy, a savory concoction that made me think of old Spanish women passing along the correct way of cooking to their daughters and granddaughters, as they sat in the hacienda kitchen and watched every move of aged hands with great attention, knowing that a perfect paella might be their key to future happiness, and outside the caballeros whistled and sang as they worked under the hot Spanish sun. That is my idea. I have never been to Spain, and I never even saw the "Grandmother" that Grandmother's paella was made by. It was only ever a selection on the food menu, but when you have been kept in isolation--

Inspiration: A NYT.com article about a Spanish restaurant
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Kept isolated for some reason from most people except for the chosen, designated ones, has no knowledge of family, has formed these bonds for ? Escapes, finds connections. Under the Tuscan Sun meets Alien Resurrection (OK, that pitch alone is making me want to rate this higher). Could be an okay YA book--isolation themes are really strong for adolescents.
The dividing engine was a marvelous thing to behold, a creation of steam and iron and magic. It was also scary, at least when one was only a ten-year-old boy who had never expected to be brought before it. It was a great honor, everybody said, but he'd only ever planned on working in his father's shop and being the best student and son that he could be. He hadn't expected to save a boy who nearly fell in front of the automobile of the Prime Minister, and therefor to be brought to the attention of the lords. He had certainly never expected that their capricious reward would be a declaration that he should be Divided, as fit reward for his service above and beyond the expected for his station. It was only children of nobility who were brought before the--

Inspiration: "dividing engine"
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Shades of Philip Pullman.... I don't know what the Dividing Engine does, certainly not that, but I want to find out! Could be a nifty steampunk coming-of-age story.
The fox slipped over the border of midnight and wound up in early morning. It stood still for a minute, its ears flicking forward and back as it paused just beneath the crest of the hill, high enough to spot for guards but low enough to keep from presenting a profile. It glanced over its shoulder at the wall of gloom behind it, the realm of eternal midnight, and flicked its tail. Then it trotted cautiously around the edge of the hill. Midnight might seem more oppressive, but from what the fox had heard, it was early morning and late afternoon that were truly where the evilest creatures lay in wait--

Inspiration: Um, updating my Firefox themes.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Not low because I dislike the idea, but low because it's too similar to things currently out. Heck, I'll make it medium.

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