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He hissed his breath out slowly between his teeth as he felt the snake venom enter his veins. He'd hoped to never be at this point again, but he must have expected it or he wouldn't have been carrying around a syringe of snake venom just in case. Sometimes, the only remedy for a poison was another poison. He had truly (truly, he told himself) believed that he'd shed the skin of his previous life like the snakes he used to live among, but if he kept the venom in case they tracked him down, he clearly hadn't believed it all that hard. His heart turned to a stone in his chest as he thought of the family he'd hoped to start with Angel, of the little girl they'd just seen on the ultrasound only a few days earlier. She'd be safe. They never went after families. If he took her on the run with him, though, accidents might happen. If he escalated it to a war--and how would he, anyway?--


Inspiration: "Voodoo" - Godsmack
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: Eh. I don't see anything unexpected here.


The post of Writer for the Sleeping Child was a fairly prestigious one, and well-paid, and it wasn't as if anything bad was happening to the Child. The Child--slept. The Child would always sleep, until it was no longer a child. Then it would wake up and be taught all the things about the world that a non-sleeping child would have learned from the time it could open its eyes and look around. Except how to talk, and certain other aspects that were significantly distressing to most people who interacted with the former Child. He was pondering what he would do when the Child woke. He had not had it for its full life; there was a previous Writer who had decided to stay on for the next Child. He did not think he could do that. He knew too much of her sighs and the slight lisp with which she talked, he knew what many of the symbols meant and annotated them in the Writing as should be sent. Some Writers adopted the Child when it awoke, took it home with them and made it part of their family. If he had a family, he thought he would have done that, but he did not. He knew very little, really, about even normal children, and so he worried that he would not be able to take proper care of her. His family still lived out in the country, by the foothills, a journey of a week's length that he made only once a year, in time for the annual Moon Dreaming festival. He would not be able to rely on their support as another unprepared father might. And he could not move back, first because his entire life as far as he could remember living there was devoted to escaping, and partly because his only chance at making a good income to support a family was to stay in the city. He did want a family, he just wasn't particularly good at talking with women, and he knew none of the ways that a solitary man might acquire a family. If his sisters had lived nearby, he assumed he most likely would have been married for a good ten years already.


Inspiration: http://www.danielmerriam.com/index.php?option=com_ponygallery&Itemid=0&func=detail&id=150
Story potential: High.
Notes: She wakes up early, say at--oh--ten. And no, there is not nor ever will be anything romantic between them. Ew. But because she wakes up early, she retains more of the powers of the Dreaming Child than normal, at least when she sleeps. And then plot ensues.
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I have only one blurred photo of my dad, from the year he met my mother. This is also the year that he left her and disappeared forever, from our lives and (as I would discover when I went looking) from the world itself, to all appearances. In the photo, he's of middling age, not quite young anymore but not old either, though his hairline has started creeping back at his temples. He wears a punk leather jacket, and he's shooting a photo with an antique brownie camera. The camera is the only thing left of him, and my mother presented it to me ceremoniously at my high school graduation. I've never used it. I'm not really a camera freak, and even if I was, I'm too broke to afford specialty film and the cost of developing the photos. Cellphone photos snapped and sent through Instagram is more my style, if I have a style. I guess I do. I try not to be one of those people who only posts pictures of their food and their friends having more fun than they are. I take pictures of the people that other people look past. Homeless people, crazy-talking guys on street corners, the dangerous-looking thugs who hang out at the corners, that people look away from in case they look back. Like looking away from trouble would ever help anything. I don't get a whole lot of comments on my snapshots, though once some lady who ran an art gallery in a hairdressing saloon said that she'd do an exhibit for me, if I wanted. At the time, I mostly wanted a job sweeping up hair, and I sure didn't have the money to get big prints made of my crappy little cellphone photos. It's not like I have a top-of-the-line cell, either. I'm lucky the thing even has a camera. Forget megapixels and sensor size, it could be a shadow box for as modern as it is.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/gauthierdumonde/9901186963/
Story potential: High.
Notes: I do like where this is going. And it positively reeks of symbolic resonance.
"Due to the nature of the child's parents, it would seem to make only good sense that her custody is divided equally between the two parents, given what the medical professionals involved have explained regarding her...particular...needs. They assure me that with time it will become evident with which parent she should reside, but until that time, it is important to provide equal time, given various assurances of her safety regarding...manifestations of her nature...in either location." She sat there, trying to pretend that she didn't even know this family that the judge was talking about, but it was no good. On one side sat her earth-walking mother, wearing fancy high heels as fi to emphasize that she could, her skin tanned from the time she spent outdoors but her hair coiffed to such perfection that it made it clear most of that time was not spent in saltwater. On the other side sat her water-living dad, his hair a sun-bleached tangle that glinted now and then with a strand of pearls or precious metals tangled in it, his clothes the easily shed, waterproof kind, and a pitcher of water large enough for a meeting of twelve sitting in front of him--half-drunk. It would be seawater, too, she knew. She liked seawater well enough to drink, herself.


Inspiration: "Harbour Lecou" - Great Big Sea
Story potential: Medium
Notes: What happens when a merman and a human woman really, really don't love each other anymore.... I like the character of the daughter, though.
Discovering that the baby you never planned to have, almost decided not to keep, but in the end kept and went back to a village not too near but not too far from where you came from, and claimed yourself a widow of the war--discovering that baby can spit fire is no small thing. Nobody asked what side your husband was on, of course, because dragons were monsters invading from across the oceans, sailing on giant rafts of monstrous trees lashed together, or landing on small islands and overnighting before sailing in to the port. You don't remember when the war started. Most people don't, now. Your father was a young man when the dragons invaded. Or first flew to our shores. You've heard a few older people muttering that the dragons weren't the ones who started the war, and we could have avoided all this if only--


Inspiration: "Spitfire" - Prodigy
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure if there's enough unique here to power a story, but maybe. The child is not a child of rape, but a consequence of a one-night stand after she was saved from some wartime danger by a dashing soldier. The dragons started invading because something worse across the sea was invading them. And it's coming next. The dragons are now in hiding and almost impossible to find, but she's by god going to have to go on a quest for them so that her child can be taught safely. Maybe re-read Mary Brown before writing this, either for inspiration or to avoid duplication.
I want a girl with a mind like a diamond, I wrote in the profile. What I was hoping to net was a smart girl with an affection for last-century ironic pop. What I netted was--well, you'll see. She's a girl with diamonds *in* her mind. How could she help being smart with an advantage like that? And sure, she's smarter than most of the smartest people I know. Took me a while to decide if I thought she was really smart or not, but I think she is. That sort of thing matters, you know, when you're thinking of asking a girl to marry you and start a family. It also means that the family jewels are going to get passed down to our kids, and that's--well, that's a bit harder to swallow. Not that swallowing is how they get implanted. Nope. It would be my wife, the black market brain surgeon. I ended up deciding that the connections, the leaps, the intuition, and the sense of how it all hangs together means that she genuinely *is* brilliant. The diamond network gives her perfect recall and the ability to execute any visualized or indexed action perfectly, but it doesn't help her sort out what to use or cue her to what's funny about the situation.


Inspiration: "Short Skirt/Long Jacket" - Cake
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: Not original enough to be a good story on its own. Good title, though.
If you've found this, I just want to tell you that this isn't what you think it is. It isn't a private confessional, or a recording of triumphs, some weird brag book. It isn't a collection of memories, either. No. This is a plan for you to act on, going forward. And if you're reading this, it means that I'm dead. So hopefully, you will see where I screwed up (when you know why I died), and use that to improve the plan. Keep a copy for our younger siblings, too, with notes on where you may have messed up and where you think I did. That's what I did with our older brother's notbook, except I think he messed everything up so badly that in the end I hid it so you wouldn't be influenced by it. I lived longer than he did, out there. But I guess if you're reading this, maybe I didn't do so much better after all.


Inspiration: Thinking of notes and lists and such.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This could be a really neat framework for a story.
It's about the radiation, you see. It doesn't matter how much better for a kid it is to be with their mother--or their father--when it means going up into the solar radiation range. And when you get that drafted-to-work notice? Well, they don't have an exception for people who are the only parents of their children, not after the first six months. Like the kid would even remember you later if you left them after six months! So what you end up with is a bunch of people in space, and half of them are heartsick because they had to leave their kids behind. The ones who got deferred until the kid turned 6 months are the worst, because they had to leave their baby behind right when all the hormones and crazy brain chemistry and everything is fully kicked in to make them the best protectors ever. So is it any wonder that when wish-granting aliens showed up, our first sign of it was a passel of kids running through high-risk areas?


Inspiration: That icky story about the tanning mom.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Wish-granting aliens who aren't there to make contact but who keep granting wishes....
The cards predicted a grim Thanksgiving dinner. There was Death, The Hanged Man, and the Mother. All of which were entirely predictable, given her relatives. The six of cups made her wonder if Uncle Tom would show up drunk again. But really, it was just the family. But her family was a bit different from most, and their alignment made all the difference in the world to the outcome for the person chosen as Reader and Guest, which this year was her boyfriend Mark, and so she had some hopes of figuring out which cards would attend and--she gave up there. People had tried to arrange the seating and the attendants differently before, but it only ended up with a freak tornado that deposited Aunt Bessie on top of the table and swapped three other relatives. When you were a living tarot deck, it didn't do to try and thwart the reading. They'd tried not gathering, the first year that the curse had been upon them, and that hadn't worked either. Between a bank robbery, a kidnapping, a work emergency, a freak flash flood, and a case of mistaken identity, the requisite number of family members had attended. Now they all tried to attend, and things tended to arrange themselves--


Inspiration: Bits from a discussion on my writing group's boards about writing prompts. One person linked to his writing prompt card deck, and another mentioned Norman Rockwell -> cards + Thanksgiving.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This would take some thinking and working out, but it could be fun, and I haven't seen it done before. Also, LOTS of potential for ridiculous coincidences and mishaps a la Janet Evanovich.
A lighted match could burn down the cabin he built. It wasn't much, but it was his, and he liked it flammable. His daughter came up to visit and she always exclaimed with horror about the location (in a designated wildfire zone!) and the construction (flammable!) and the lack of an emergency airvac port within twenty feet, like all houses were built with nowadays, and what would he do if some disaster happened? She might have not even let his grand-kids visit, except she was more sensible about such things than some of her preconceptions made her sound, and she always checked the fire zone hazard level before visiting, and he never invited them in the driest days of the summer. It was a nice compromise, and he liked it. He never explained about the basement vault--


Inspiration: Some song on Pandora that had that as the first line.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I at least like the setting. And then, natch, some disaster comes (while the family's visiting), and the cabin ends up being the best place to survive from.

Mud: Horror

Feb. 1st, 2011 02:46 pm
He had mud on his face. He sat in his house, his civilized modern architecture house iwht its open windows and cantilevered ceiling, and he kept touching his face. The mud was red. It wasn't because of the dirt in the area. It was the blood of his wife. She had bled--so much. He'd smashed the--the thing back off the cliff into the sea, but his wife was already bleeding, had been bleeding for so long before he came looking for her, had stopped bleeding as he held her in his arms. She bled still after her heart stopped (he knew it stopped because it, it wasn't there).

Inspiration: Oh, that Jonathan Coulton song about mud on your face, big disgrace....
Story Potential: Low potential
Notes: Eh.
She's with me until it sleeps again, curled inside my brain like when she was a little girl and would crawl into bed with me and press her cold feet against my legs until I yelped. Now she tries to keep her cold feet away, but I still yelp sometimes. That's the best I can describe it. How would you like having one of the soulless brides of the unnamed one shacking up with you? Just fine, if she was your sister. I have to wear sunglasses when she's there, and be careful not to let them slip, or her/my gaze could send my neighbor walking his dog spiraling straight into the abyss, and I really don't want a repeat of what happened with Fluffy. It's just not right to treat a dog that way, but that's the Nameless for you.


Inspiration: "Until It Sleeps" - Apocalyptica
Story Potential: High
Notes: I rather like the tone/subject matter contrast. Neither's particularly original, but together, I think it works. And I do okay with that horror/humor thing.
I stay away from the jar of flies she keeps in every room. They're her spies, and they buzz in her ears at night when she takes all the jars into her bedroom and lets them fly around while she sleeps. Sometimes this means she knows things she shouldn't. Sometimes it also means she believes her dreams are true. This can be very bad if she has nightmares about betrayals. I suspect that's what happened to my brother. Or maybe he did mean to betray her, to run away, to crush her flies and pull the wings from her ladybugs and overturn her bee hives. I don't know. The flies don't talk to me. I don't want them to. I keep a bird in my room, and I've warned her that sometimes the bird gets out, and if her flies come into my room, they may be eaten. Sometimes flies still come to my room, but not as much as when I was little, when they swarmed in until I had hysterics.

Inspiration: "I stay away" by Alice in Chains on Jar of Flies.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This is so creepy and--I just want to spend a little more time here, even if it makes my skin itch.
It was the twelfth day of Christmas, and signs of stress were beginning to show. "How much longer do you think she'll need this?" she asked between gritted teeth.

The psych nanny in her skull answered, "A large number of days longer, I would guess.. This is something she feels she lacked after her parents died, and it represents all the happy things that she wanted and couldn't have."

"And how long do you think it will actually be necessary?"

"All that time. Though at a certain point, she will probably start becoming angry with the toys and the perceived hollowness. What she really wants is her parents, and there's no bringing them back for Christmas."


Inspiration: Writing down the date -- 12/01/2009. Twelve.
Story Potential: High, mostly because of the Christmas angle.
Notes: Or is there? Time to think about technology and science and psychology. Hrm--the ghost of families past? Spiritual experience brain centers? (Nah.) Dead stars movie technology? A little Katherine Hepburn with her mother? A little Cary Grant with her father?
She was wondering what to make for dinner when she heard the radio talking about a zombie outbreak 20 miles south of her town, and suddenly deciding between pot roast and spaghetti with meatballs just didn't seem that important. Neither did the dirty kitchen floor, or the unfolded laundry, or that annoying bitch at the PTA meetings. A great many of the things that she'd let build up around her like a coral reef suddenly didn't matter anymore. She picked up her cellphone and dialed her husband's number. When he answered, she just said, "Did you see the news?" When he said yes, she told him, "You'll have to pick up the kids from school, and you're on your own for dinner. Maybe longer. I'll try to call, if rioters haven't knocked down the cell towers by now. Or if survivors didn't try to climb them and the zombies knocked them over." She hung up without waiting for him to answer, and went up to the attic, to her cedar chest. Underneath blankets and her wedding dress, she found her black leather pants, bodice, gloves, jacket, and wide choker. They still fit--barely, and thank goodness for that kettleball class--though she felt half-ridiculous wearing them. The other half of her surged forward, victorious, elated, and ready to kick ass.


Inspiration: AC/DC "Back in Black"
Story Potential: High?
Notes: It's a good sign that I felt compelled to keep writing past the two minutes, until I got a bit more done. This can be ass-kicking and still speak to that part of most women that misses the things they had to give up for husband or family. Even the happiest woman will be wistful now and again. (Kettleballs thanks to Opheliac9.) And yeah, she's about to go fire up her old motorcycle.
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"As soon as I turn 18, I'm taking out your plug!" she hissed at her mother. "No more of this! I don't *want* you knowing where I'm going, and I *really* don't like how you moms all got together and shared blueprints so you even know which *room* I'm in--and how could you let each other track your chips? It's totally no fair for you to know if I'm alone in a room with him!"

She glared at her mother from behind her glasses, for ince ignoring the chatstreams and the floating holograms of her friends videos with word-blurbs witing to be actiated. Her mother, in the real world and in the midle, was her unidvided focus.


Inspiration: The Writer's Block Prompt
Potential: Ah, low, I suppose.
Notes: Though I do find it entertaining to extrapolate how different interactions would change with technology. I mean, writers all over the place play with sex and death and entertainment. Less so fights with your mom or other unglamorous things.
She played with their marbles, ratcheting them up in little lines and then shooting them off to bounce around edges and off each other straight to insanity. It was a fun game. She was pretty upset when her mother noticed and confiscated all their marbles and gave them back, but that was what mom's did, she guessed: they spoiled the fun. Then there were endless long lectures about why playing with other people's marbles was bad and would she like it if somebody played with her marbles? She said that nobody could, and her dad muttered, "I wouldn't be so sure about that," with a really uneasy look on his face that made her pay a little bit more attention and be a little bit more worried, but her mom just scowled at him and made him be quiet. That was the last time she was ever lectured by her parents, but she really wished--

Inspiration: A marble mixed in with pebbles in the bottom of the vase of origami flowers I keep on my desk.
Story Potential: High, actually.
Notes: And why does she never get lectured again? Oh, that's because her parents commit murder-suicide later that week, and she's sent into the foster-care system with the really uneasy feeling that somebody messed with her parents' marbles.
Svetlana's second-to-last sister let out a scream that spiraled up into a peacock's cry, but Svetlana cowered under the firebird tree and covered her ears.


Inspiration: At a Minnspec meeting, I wrote this down for some unknown reason.
Potential: Medium, I guess.
Notes: My brain finds it to easy to go down well-worn quest paths for this idea. Avoid them.
My favorite doll had half her hair charred off, a melted ear, and a lingering smell like bacon. I loved that smell--it reminded me of breakfasts in the morning when my grandfather would charge into our home smelling like that. Mom always looked upset, but if I asked why he smelled like bacon, she'd smile brittlely and say that it wasn't him, it was that we were having a bacon breakfast to celebrate his visit, and maybe my gift would be foresmelling. "There isn't any such thing as foresmelling!" I'd insist, laughing. When I found out the truth, I also found I couldn't stand eating bacon anymore.

Inspiration: Writer's Digest prompt: write about your favorite toy as a child.
Story Potential: High, at least in terms of a character sketch.
Notes: Could be an interesting character viewpoint, the beloved grandchild of one who is, in many ways, a Very Bad Man. (Wizard, Conqueror, ??)
Hell is the absence of God. That spark of light and hope and decency dies. Summer camp tries to survive. Mused by Phil. See full story notes in "Ideas-At Bat" file.

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