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When the sun set, the city rose up. When we were kids, our moms would take us out to the pier to watch the city rise up. They would tell us all sorts of tales about what the city was, whether it was magical or terrible or both, but all the tales would end with the same moral: don't go there. Even the good stories, the ones about enchantments and magic and fairy princesses, emphasized the sadness and the way that nobody who ever went there ever left. Some of the stories said it was because the visitors ate or drank something, but when I was a little older and started reading the books in the library, I stumbled across an old book of fairy tales and there it was. Does that mean the city was made by real fairies, or just that the idea of somebody being trapped by their own appetite was derived from those old stories? Could be either, I guess. At any rate, I never was one of the kids who dreamed of the city, who imagined going there and returning rich and famous and with all the girls smiling at them because they had done what nobody else does. Every year a kid or two leaves to "go to the city." They never come back. Truth, I suspect a handful of the disappearances of kids or adults isn’t because of the city at all, but it's easier to point a finger at that mysterious thing that rises up at sunset every winter night and say, "They did it," then it is to suspect someone else of murder or worse, or to think that your husband or wife or child simply left to go somewhere more mundane. Then one winter, it was my sister's middle child who disappeared.


Inspiration: Photo of a city along the shoreline that is almost invisible in the twilight. http://www.flickr.com/photos/pitgreenwood/12083163145/
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure what the city is, but it isn't what's expected. And by the same token, this protagonist isn't what the city would expect.
They don't warn you when you start eating hearts that eventually the heart you'll eat is your own. I have enough self-control to keep it to just the tiniest nibble every ten years or so, and I satisfy (ha!) myself with licking it in-between. You may have guessed that this results in constant hunger and a hollow spot in my chest even as I go on, but that much I kind of guessed would be the case, I just didn't understand why. It really took a while for it to sink in that my dreams of eating my own heart were not so much dreams, and were the cause of my sudden lack of energy, fainting spells, hollow feelings, and generally deadened aspect. Someday, if I live long enough, I might be able to persuade my heart to grow back. I’ve heard rumors that Koschei the Deathless started out as a heart-eater, and wound up able to grow his heart back enough and hide it well enough to live forever. Or perhaps he was just attempting to hide his heart from himself, and when the girl recovered it, she found a half-gnawed specimen of horror. Though you'd think that's the sort of thing a fairytale would keep in.


Inspiration: Google "quizzical" -> http://www.pressxtojustin.com/79890/376958/illustration/mola-rammed
Story potential: Medium-high
Notes: Interesting, could be good, this is more of a bare-bones and less of an anything that would actually mean something.
Body Language: Figures in Clay Art Exhibition

It didn’t matter how many of the others--the ones like they had been, once, and still were if you wanted to get technical about it--it didn't matter how many of them died. The wolves would tear them to pieces whether they were here or not, but somehow, she knew, her sanctioned presence made it matter, somehow, more than it would have if it were written off as the random violence that it might have otherwise been. It would have been a drug thing gone bad, either in overdose that drove people crazy or as some kind of violence that could be explained away. But she was here, she was of this world, and she saw the teeth that sank into the flesh of the dancers and worried it from their bones. The bodies hit the floor all around them. She watched, because that was what she was supposed to do, and because that was the one thing that kept her and Caleb alive. Caleb especially. It was her job to take care of her younger brother, and so she did. He huddled within her embrace, his face pressed against her chest and his eyes closed, wincing tat every squelch and scream and tearing rip that sounded like nothing else in the world. She watched, because she was the one who watched. At first, she'd been angry and jealous that Caleb got to hide and pretend that it wasn't happening. She was angry for his weakness.


Inspiration: "Let the Bodies Hit the Floor" - Drowning Pool and http://www.flickr.com/photos/theskylineview/8490684028/
Story potential: High
Notes: Maybe not a main character, but, I dunno, a side character if I ever write an urban fantasy/fae story where it seems to fit. And look at that awesome art!
Nobody likes trees anymore. We still remember that they're necessary to clean the air and provide wood and food and shelter and all that, but nobody likes living near the trees and nobody likes going in the trees. Same thing goes for cities with skyscrapers or other tall buildings that block out the lights and leave only shadows. I think we've reverted back to the Medieval Age, when women and children were warned to stay away from the edge of the forest and where the men treaded cautiously, where half the stories around the campfire were of the bad things that could happen to people who wandered into the forest when they shouldn't. And of course, nobody would go into the woods at dawn or dusk or nighttime. Nobody goes anywhere at nighttime. We huddle inside our safe, warm, bright houses, with all the curtains pulled. Less because we don't want them to see us--what good would that do--than because we don't want to glance out on our yard and see a dark shadow scudding across it, only to look up and see a bright moonlit sky with not a cloud in sight. In addition to snow days, we now have cloud days. The weather forecast predicts how dense the shade will be, and whether it will be safe to go out and see. They're a lot more careful with their predictions these days, too, ever since that poor man in Boston walked into the studio and shot the weatherman he blamed for getting his family snatched.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/josepha46/9369874988/
Story potential: Medium
Notes: I like the idea of this kind of adaptation, but it's more of a setting than a story idea--the whole story would need to be something else.
The jester capered, and the king laughed. The jester flipped, and the queen smiled. The jester left, and the animation drained from their faces as if they were nothing more than wooden statues. "We don't dare kill him," the Arms-Commandant murmured to his assistant. "They become themselves again briefly when he is here, entertaining them. Serious business is nearly impossible, but they will sign papers and issue judgments in the intervals between laughter. Sometimes. When we removed him from their presence and buried him deep in a dungeon room designed to hold fearfully powerful wizards, they did not recover. They wasted away so much we feared they would die. And so we are stuck with royalty who only become themselves while he is present. He himself claims he does not know why this is so, and it is true that the King and Queen's malady first occurred while--"


Inspiration: ChaoticShiny - "The heroes must discover the story behind the ship without the jester killing them."
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: Whatsit--the floating princess. Or the one who would not stop crying. Also, a ship is definitely involved. And the King and Queen are still enough themselves that they will not lie together while another person is in the room, so it's no heir coming soon, either.
We all say that there's no such thing as a dumb question, and we all know that's a lie. So when I say that the thing you really noticed about Ella was that she never asked a dumb question, you can get a good idea of how extraordinary that was. It was maybe the first thing that you'd really notice about Ella. Not because it was so readily apparent, but because in all other respects she was--not unnoticeable, because that is noticeable in its own way, too, but simply not particularly noticeable. She had nice-enough hair, and nice-enough eyes, and you might think in passing that you wouldn't mind if your son brought a girl like that home, but you didn't really expect him to. There was nothing about her that really stuck out, either for the good or for the bad. She did not seem particularly talented or skilled or clever. She was not particularly kind-hearted or mean-spirited. She was not startlingly beautiful or stunningly ugly. She just was. You expected her to go through life at a normal speed and end up in a normal place, probably marrying late because she had not the beauty, wealth, or vivid personality that would draw an early match, but you did expect her to eventually settle down with a nice, working-class person who would help raise a host of well-behaved children who always came back to visit for the holidays and perhaps sent home a bit of their pay in each weekly letter. None of us expected her to become a queen.


Inspiration: A Marketplace Money podcast talking about how there were no bad questions.
Story potential: High.
Notes: I do like this quite a bit. Nice hero's quest, and why don't we get any (actually Clever) Clever Elsa stories, eh?
It's about the radiation, you see. It doesn't matter how much better for a kid it is to be with their mother--or their father--when it means going up into the solar radiation range. And when you get that drafted-to-work notice? Well, they don't have an exception for people who are the only parents of their children, not after the first six months. Like the kid would even remember you later if you left them after six months! So what you end up with is a bunch of people in space, and half of them are heartsick because they had to leave their kids behind. The ones who got deferred until the kid turned 6 months are the worst, because they had to leave their baby behind right when all the hormones and crazy brain chemistry and everything is fully kicked in to make them the best protectors ever. So is it any wonder that when wish-granting aliens showed up, our first sign of it was a passel of kids running through high-risk areas?


Inspiration: That icky story about the tanning mom.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Wish-granting aliens who aren't there to make contact but who keep granting wishes....
The oldest of the oldsters swore that yes, Golden Alley had once been covered entirely in thin sheets of gold. Micah, the son of a businessman, said that was impossible, that the cost would be prohibitive and for no return, since the tourists who came to gawk at the gold would be too busy staring to buy anything. Elize, the poet, said that the filtering late afternoon sunlight turned the bricks to gold and that the beauty of it was all the gold anyone should ever need. Isha didn't know, but one afternoon as he wandered through the Golden Alley, past the knife-sharpeners and the hawk-sellers, and the sweet-bakers, he saw a stall set far, far back, and in that stall was a mirror, and in the reflection of that mirror, it looked like the bricks really were made of gold.

Inspiration: Combination of words from pictures - golden and alley
Story Potential: High
Notes: The falling-into-alternate world idea, except done with a modern Arab boy and the Arab fairytales, could be fun.
It's not all it's cracked up to be, being a prince from fairyland. First thing, there's only one prince. Sure, I know the media around here call all of us "princes" and "princesses," and we try to match that for any public appearance or declared fairyfolk. Coronets, clothes of silk, waist-length hair, the full nine yards, as your saying goes. Every fragment of belief we get is precious. Think of it as if you owned some acres deep in the woods, and you found out that every child you could persuade to believe in Rumpelstiltskin resulted in a gold nugget appearing somewhere on your land. For a while we were all over the world, trying to persuade you all. Then we settled into fairytales and haunt stories. We were taken by surprise by your Industrial Revolution.


Inspiration: Weezer's "Beverly Hills" - otherwise not a particularly enjoyable song, and really not a good fit for the station it showed up on, Pandora....
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I guess I like the idea that it's basically a bunch of starvingly poor and desperate people whose survival depends on convincing everyone around them that they're rich, glamorous, and magical.
Art: poetic watercolour:   dreams... never end...

The sorrow of the trees, that was what she felt when she was just a sapling. Her mother walked away from them, out to find her father who had never returned to them after that one moonlit night when she was conceived, but her mother had lost her heart, as was the way of their people. And when a tree loses its heart, it must regain it again or the tree will fall. She remembered some sunny mornings of being a toddler playing in the sunlight with her mother, before her mother left. But once she was old enough to have her own nutrients and not to need her mother's branches to protect her from the harshest winds and the drought, her mother left to find her heart. The daughter left behind stayed a sapling for a very long time, as if she hoped her mother would come back and awaken her if she only waited long enough. It took a forest fire to rouse her into the form with legs, and she stumbled and staggered alongside the graceful deer and the other animals--


Inspiration: The painting from Flickr. http://www.flickr.com/photos/35475855@N05/6789097553/
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: It is important that this is *not* an ecological fable. Because otherwise? Too trite, too easily done. Instead, dryad goes to the city and finds...a different thing.
He was ahead of the pack when the hissing, sputtering tunnel of light appeared ahead of him, spinning around the underpass like it had always been there. Kids setting off firecrackers? Maybe. Cops? Nah. Dangerous? Maybe. Fun? Hells yeah! The thoughts flitted through his mind in a fraction of a second and he pressed the accelerator down to the floor--well, he *would* have pressed the accelerator down to the floor if it wasn't already there. You never knew what might happen when you were racing through the streets at 3 AM, and this fireworks show sure and hell looked a lot more fun than when a cat ran out into the road in front of him. He'd lost that race, limped in last, but he'd almost managed to avoid hitting the cat at all, and the vet had fixed the cat's leg up real good. Damnfool thing decided it loved him, and loved racing cars, and right now it sat in the back of his racer in its special crash cage, purring contentedly as they broke several local and state laws. He figured it liked him because he'd never had much sense about loving things that weren't good for him either.


Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaikophoto/6791501665/
Story Potential: Medium-high
Notes: Just another mundane-gets-sucked-into-fairyland sort of story, but I do like the character. Could be kinda xXx (starring Vin Diesel) meets Tam Lin.
A boy wants a Christmas cookie. If she didn't want people to come sniffing around, he reasoned, she wouldn't live in a gingerbread house. And she wouldn't be baking sugar cookies--mm, sugar cookies, fresh from the oven. He salivated, and a long tongue unrolled to lick his chops as he slunk around the corner of the house. He didn't even give though to changing back to human form, though he'd heard that some people were less scared of a tall, rangy man with impossible hair and a sharp smile than they were of a wolf. Silly people. The wolf was simple. The man got complicated, sometimes, if he stayed i man-shape for too long. They were in the woods. So, a wolf was the right shape. Wolf wanted a cookie.


Inspiration: Image of Christmas cookies.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Eh. This is an odd spawn of fairytales and urban fantasy.
The moon was made of green cheese. That should have been my first warning that things had gone very, very strange overnight. Of course, I didn't know it was cheese--I just knew that the moon had taken on a very bilious tinge, visible even during the day. I went about my business after a brief, "Huh, I'll have to check the news once I'm at work." I was running late, so I didn't turn on the TV or grab a paper. I just pulled on black slacks, black boots, a white blouse, a glitzy fashion belt that I'd gotten as a freebie at the last event I photographed, and my new red cape-style winter coat. That red cape nearly got me killed. Good thing the boots were flat heeled enough to let me run.


Inspiration: I dunno--I've been re-reading the Foreigner series, so maybe that got me thinking of the moon.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Not original, but could be a lot of fun, playing with shifts of fairytales becoming real. Lots of fun to be had. Again, not super original, but I bet I could sell them.
The spring melt was so lovely that at first she didn't notice the snow. Almost all the snow was gone from the ground, the sun was shining, and there wasn't a cloud in the sky. Crocuses stuck their heads out of the ground quizzically. Buds formed on tree limbs. Robins hopped around murdering worms. In general, a gorgeous, perfectly normal spring day. Until the snow. At first it fell in small flakes that she ignored, but then the flakes became large as a hand-mirror, gorgeous and ornate, and she gasped and turned to run back to the village. But it was as if she was caught in a maze of mirrors, sharp and glinting snowflakes plummeted to earth around her and shattered--

Inspiration: Wishful thinking, and the view outside my study window.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Snow Queens have to come from somewhere, right?
It looked delicious but it smelled bad. She sniffed the air as discretely as possible, trying to make it look like she was just turning her head and looking up to see the surroundings. She saw a feast laid out on the table before her. She saw a bright sunny day outside of windows, with birds and squirrels on branches. She saw beautiful tapestries hanging over stone walls, and fresh rushes on the floor. She saw a fire in the hearth, and an apple-cheeked girl sitting beside it working on her embroidery. She smelled rotten fruit and burnt meat that had gone bad. She smelled winter rain. She smelled dust and decay. She smelled old ashes, and something inhuman.

Inspiration: "Down to Earth" by Barenaked Ladies
Story Potential: High
Notes: I find the dichotomy interesting. Something to play with.
"What is she doing to us?" Gretel cried to Hansel as they churned away inside the giant hamster wheel.
"I don't know--but I don't like the look of that oven. Keep running or she'll get us!"
"Oh, no, brother dear, I don't trust this. I'll just hang on. I don't think you should run, etiher."
"If I run, I'll be strong and I'll be able to run away and escape her," he muttered. "Have her just open that cage door one inch and I'm out of here."

Inspiration: Something somebody said at a party a long time ago.
Story Potential: High? Medium-high? I thought it was high at the time but I'm no longer sure.
Notes: Tie into the trend for "lean meat" and children now being fat, especially neglected children who eat too much fast food. Do a mostly humorous retelling with treadmills instead of a cage and being force-fed.
The bird with the golden beak sat inside a cage, and she thought it was the saddest thing she'd ever seen. "Its beak was too hard, you see," the vizier explained in a whisper in her ear. "It pecked and it hurt his highness. So he got a goldsmith and a butcher, and they sawed off the bird's beak and fashioned a soft gold one to replace it. The bird is not so hungry as it used to be, and it does not sing as loudly or fly as boldly, but when it pecks, it feels hardly like anything at all. But it rarely pecks." She slewed her eyes at the vizier. "I would have understood without the elaborate story." "Ah." The vizier smiled sadly. "But you see, the story is also true."

Inspiration: The previous freewriting about a room with a bird in it.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Neat image, but nothing new here.
The chapel bell tolled from the adobe church, sending reverberations echoing across the almost-ghost town. Tumbleweeds would have found another street to roll down. But in the zigzag of dusty streets and mangy dogs and falling-down mud-brick houses, one house stood tall and proud. A garden of extravagant red and white roses bloomed in its front yard. And inside it, there were two sisters, twins fraternal though not identical, who were preparing for their quinceanero. One was called Rosa Roja and one was called Nieve Blanca, after a snow globe her mother had brought back with her from New York when La Migra caught her and sent her home. She was pregnant then, and sad because the twins' father had not been willing to marry her, not for the children and not to save her from deportation and most certainly not for love.

Inspiration: "Schism" by Tool
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I like the idea of somehow tying together migration and illegal immigrants and snow white/rose red and the archetypal spaghetti western sort of small Mexican town. It would be magic realism, surreal, deliberately archaic. With coyotes and a cop. Title? "The Borders of Rosa Roja and Nieve Blanca" or something.
She nursed her own child as long as she could, but it didn't take very long before the child was full and sleepy and her master noticed. Then he sent for his dogs. She did not want to watch as they suckled at her breasts, but eventually, she did, if only to wince and brace herself for a nip from their teeth if she moved wrong, or to push them away if they started getting rowdy--her master allowed her that much, at least. In time, she could not help herself from noticing the differences in the faerie hounds, their silky ears, and the way their eyes turned to her, sometimes, when the master scolded them, as if they asked her for help. She began to not fear their feeding time so much. She would whisper in their ears, stories of what might happen once her child was weaned.

Inspiration: News of the Weird: In Uganda, "for seven years had been forced to breastfeed her husband's hunting dogs as she was nursing the couple's own children. Farmer Nathan Awoloi of Pallisa explained that his dogs needed to eat, and since he was forced to send Jennipher's family two milk cows in order to win her hand, he felt his demands were reasonable. "
Story Potential: High
Notes: Well, it's creepy enough that it could work pretty well with a dark fairy tale.
Apparently, in England, (unmarked) swans belong to the Crown and are protected by it. Swans are ferocious fighters. There ought to be a fairytale link there. Her Majesty's Own Swans?

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