Treaty in the Rain: Fantasy

[penthius]

The rain was the same purplish grey as her umbrella and her eyes, and that made sense. The world rearranged its colors and shapes around her to make her more enchanting, or so it seemed to others. Or maybe it was just that she rearranged the brains of those around her to make her seem more enchanting. Either way, it was a nice effect--and utterly terrifying. She appeared to be just a girl barely past puberty, all long flowing hair and wide eyes, and maybe she was. He didn't know. He didn't understand how her kind worked, but he knew that he was supposed to sit here and negotiate with her, to work out some kind of treaty between the townsfolk--

Inspiration: Firefox's "In the Rain" persona.
Potential: Medium.
Notes: Not actually awful, but there's nothing new here. In fact, the whole "treaty with strange, exotic anime elves" idea has been done to death (and mostly in fan-fic, which doesn't exactly help). Or maybe elves will be the new vampires?