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"I'll sit here, brother, and lend you my ear." The old man looked sympathetically at him, a cooling coffee mug between them, and Randy thought, "Fuck it." The old man was probably some minister trying to convert him or save his soul, but hell, Randy needed to talk to somebody,and if the burden of it made the old man have nightmares like Randy did, well, at least he wasn't dumping that burden on somebody he knew and liked. It wasn't like he could tell his parents or his girl or even his buddies from Iraq. They used to joke that they'd seen shit that there just wasn't shit like anywhere else, and that was true, but hell, now he'd seen shit that even they didn't know or believe existed, but he'd been into that shit all alone, so he didn't even have any buddies--


Inspiration: "It's Not Easy" - Glen Ahhaitty
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: I like the character/story set-up, but there isn't an actual story here. Could be a great intro for any number of horror stories.
Hickory dickory dock, the mice ran up the clock. The clock strikes 10, the mice run down again, hickory dickory dock. Hickory dickory dock, the mice run into the maze. The clock strikes eleven, the mice are even, hickory dickory dock. Hickory dickory dock, the mice unlock the box. The clock strikes twelve, and no body needs to rhyme ever again, because nobody's going to tell their kids what happened after I got out of the box. Even parents who tell the original version with the mice getting their tails chopped off and the wicked stepmother being pushed into the barrel lined with nails--even those parents aren't going to tell the--


Inspiration: The ticking timer. Always the timer.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: This is low potential, I suppose, because there's no super-original story there. I *love* this as the opening for something, though.
The error message flashed up in front of him on the elevator's wallplate. "Error. Error. Unauthorized person has accessed the motive codes. Please remain calm and attempt to contact the authorities." That error was rapidly followed by a string of others as the elevator tried to contact the police and failed, tried to deploy the safety mechanisms and failed, tried to reboot and failed. He'd been nervous about the reboot, because it would mean free fall for the time the elevator took to restart, but he only became truly worried about his safety after it failed. He had plenty of enemies, yes, but they'd always seemed the polite, businesslike kind to him, not the sort that would act directly against him. He was right, as he found out later. The elevator--

Inspiration: Getting an error message when I tried to get through to Google.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: The story might be interesting, but I do not know what the story is. This is not it.
"Address service requested," it said. He flipped it over. It was blank. It wasn't even addressed to anybody. That didn't make any sense; how could you have address service requested when you didn't have an address to correct. By default, it must be at the right address. He frowned. Or the wrong one, as almost all junk mail seemed to be. He flipped the card between his fingers again. Still, just a blank postcard, with a single stamp and that "Address service requested". He squinted at the stamp. He hadn't seen one like it before.

Inspiration: I'll give you one guess.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: It's a catchy-ish opener, but it reeks of Harry Potter, and besides, the story itself could be anything. At all.
The free pass was lying in the middle of a pool of vomit. Not even the half-digested Skunnoina flivver-rat was enough to keep her from snatching it out before a cop came along to investigate the passed out, maybe-dead tourist lying in the puddle. She tucked it under her shirt, her nostrils narrowing to try and block out the lingering vomit reek, and scurried along the corridor to the cubby that she rented from Mama Simsung for a hundred credits or a take of equal value. Once she had squirmed into the 6' x 3' x 3' cubicle that she called home, she pulled the pass out from under her shirt. She didn't--

Inspiration: The free pass program currently being offered by the library.
Story Potential: High, as far as it goes.
Notes: This is a story beginning I could slide into like sliding my feet into a pair of comfortable old shoes--that's my way of saying it's not very original and it's got a definite Golden Age sci-fi juvenile feel to it. Some days, that ain't a bad thing. And it's only a beginning--it could go pretty much anywhere from here.

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