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We all stared as the car drove through town. Nobody'd seen a vehicle like that in decades, even leaving behind the little detail that the King was driving it. My grandmother was a big Elvis fan, so I grew up surrounded by ceramic statuettes and black velvet paintings, so I knew the King when I saw him. This guy looked just like him, and I'm not talking about the shining jumpsuit or equally shining slicked back hair. No. The cheeks, the lips, the eyebrows--this guy was a reincarnation or a clone or something, down to the shape of his hand as it tapped casually against the convertible window as he drove up to the local diner, pulled in, and parked. I don't know what possessed me, but when he slid into a booth, took off his sunglasses with one slick move, and smiled at me--that smile that's half a sneer--I couldn't help myself. "Banana sandwich?" I asked. He smiled. "I think I'm going to like this town."


Inspiration: "Race Car Ya-Yas" - Cake
Story potential: High.
Notes: This is an oddball, genre wise. More magic realism than anything else, I guess. Oh,and Elvis is coming to town as a preacher. There will be rock-and-roll miracles. And--stuff. I don't know. But I feel a pull.
I was terribly excited when I thought my ghost was Elvis. I mean, having a ghost was nothing too special, not these days, but when my first clue was the assembled banana-bacon-peanut butter sandwich, I was sure that I'd hit the big time. Elvis--and not trapped in a repetitive loop in a toilet stall, either. I could rent the place out to a nightclub, or maybe sell tickets myself, I thought. Sure, you couldn't actually hear ghosts, but there were ways you could make them more visible, and if he felt like singing along with some of his hits--dollar signs flashed before my eyes. Turned out he was just an Elvis impersonator, though; I should have realized when I saw the sandwich wasn't deep-fried.

Inspiration: Writer's Digest prompt about finding a clue that your house was haunted.
Potential: High, I guess. I would say medium, but anything with humorous potential automatically gets bumped up a notch. Also, I just like the idea even though it isn't super-original.
Notes: Ghosts everywhere? Hmm.

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