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The woods were twilight, sere, and deep, and she almost fell into the mural before she caught herself and pulled back. Just a mural, just paint on bricks. She wavered, but did *not* put her hand out to steady herself on the wall. If I don't see it, if I don't fall into it, then I can believe that it's not real anymore. That it was just my meds not being right. She closed her eyes and turned away. She had her meds. She had her crappy little studio apartment and her crappy little job at Kinko's and her--okay, pretty awesome, actually--boyfriend and the group of friends who'd stuck with her through what her parents called "The Episode."

Inspiration: Firefox's "Mysterious Blue Forest" persona.
Story Potential: Medium-high?
Notes: Might work pretty well as a POV balanced against http://penthius.livejournal.com/264861.html. Also, sere is almost certainly not the right word there.
"She don't want to talk about her babydaddy?"

"She says there isn't one. She says she didn't want to get messed up like she saw some other girls get. She swears there's no way she got pregnant."

"But she did--she's almost all the way now."

"I know. She still says there isn't a babydaddy."

"You know, I heard another girl like that, over on South. Her family, they strict, though. I thought she just didn't want to risk it."

"Maybe she telling the truth."

"What, now you can have a baby with no babydaddy? Ha! The gov'mint going to love that, they like us having babies so much right now."


Inspiration: Thinking about some of the African urban legends about men who can make women pregnant with a handshake and make men lose their genitalia. Mixed in with alien abductions. Sort of thought about it as a conversation on the bus.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: That last line is *awful*. Mostly, this could be good or it could be really bad.
The sun shone hot in the red sky. Heat waves sizzled and danced above the sidewalks and the metal fire escape ladders were so hot that if you spat out the window, the spit would sizzle on the metal. If you tried to grab the fire escape with your hand, you'd get a raised welt there in only a few seconds. She hadn't tried to fry eggs on the metal, but she'd seen others do it. Didn't work too well; you only ended up with mushy scrambled eggs that, well, you couldn't even eat. No chance of properly frying an egg. She sat in front of the fan and stared out the window at the endless heatscape, wondering when she would ever escape it. The offices were a temporary respite, but they were a different world, one too cold and too pale and--

Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/70854278@N00/3508139861/
Potential: Low
Notes: Potential's low because this isn't really a story. I like it, though. But there's still no story.
The date changed and nobody noticed until they found themselves cast astray upon th calendar of days. It was a dying time, a birthing time, and a time of catastrophic social change. Nobody knew what to do with a Wednesday. The millennium of Tuesday had cemented them firmly in their routes, and they knew what was, and what was not, a Tuesday thing. Wednesday? They had no idea. Going to the library was an everyday, any day thing, and so they still had the records from Monday--enough to know that the changes they might have to make could be severe. They huddled in their homes and some pretended to be sick, that first Wednesday. It was risky pretending to be sick on a Tuesday, but they had no idea what--

Inspiration: Looking at my day calendar, realizing the day was wrong.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Alien experiment? Weird magic realism world? Who knows!
She was in the park when she noticed the close attention the birds were paying to the man by the fountain. It was odd--she'd walked past the fountain a million times before, and always it seemed that there were people hovering about and looking. This was the first time she'd seen a man sitting by the edge of the fountain and leaning far, far out over it, to the base of the statue itself. It was strange, she reflected, that children never played in the fountain. People never threw quarters in for good luck, bums never tried to scrounge around for change in the fountain. Nobody ever sat on the edge of the fountain, either. It was always, instead, that they stared at it, or commented on it as they walked past. She was not one of the starers. She sped up whenever she walked past, because she did not like the way the strange, blocky shape seemed to loom,. It was a cold thing, a thing not of the park. Come to think of it, it was the first time she'd seen birds anywhere near it. Or squirrels. Or rabbits. Or any of the rest of the park's semi-urban wildlife.

Inspiration: "An Exultation of Larks," by James Lipton
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Who has two thumbs and a good idea? This girl!
Biking home today, I looked up through the golden-yellow maple leaf trees and saw, nailed at least twenty feet up off the ground, a "Convert VHS to DVD" advertising sign. Small, white paint on a black background, and not too noticeable for those ground level. Then I realized that I've seen these signs around, here and there, always posted really high up on telephone poles. So I picture a very, very tall thin man, hunched over in a raincoat, walking along with his knees bent up to his chest to make him look like a very fat man with a strangely large head. Until he reaches a telephone pole. And then he opens up like a telescope expanding--reaching high to attach his ad--

Inspiration: True story.
Story Potential: High?
Notes: Not a main plot thread, but would work nicely with another urban fantasy storyline.
"Hey, man, you want some--" he started to say, planning on hassling the middle aged man who'd just crossed the street. He knew the guy--thought he lived around there--but the guy wasn't a user. His jaw dropped open when the man dropped the briefcase he was carrying, revealing a hidden sawed-off shotgun. The dealer lurched for cover, but he hadn't been ready, and the sheer shock of seeing a boring middle-aged civilian with a serious weapon had made him slow. The shotgun blast cut him in half. One arm fell reaching toward the door of the building that he kept his stash in. The sound of gunfire made his gang brothers swear and tumble out of the building, looking for the rival gang sure to have started shit. They gaped at the middle-aged businessman. Then a soccer mom pulled up in her van, swinging the car wide so that the back end was pointing at them. The doors flew open, and a battalion of grim-faced mommies swung around the machine gun bolted in back--

Inspiration: It was very satisfying to write that.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I could write 5,000 very satisfying words of that. But I need something a bit catchier to make it a good story. OTOH, I bet a lot of people would enjoy reading something like that, too.

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