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Doesn't matter what's in this world if you think about it. If you think hard enough, you can make it all fade away except that you, the organism, still continue, and that is all that really matters. It's a weird trick, thinking hard enough to get to the no-thought place where the animal organism lives, but it can be done. He thought. It was just so hard to concentrate in the hubbub of the lives and the distractions and the perils that surrounded him, to reach down and find the base. It had been so much easier out in the desert, which had an unexpectedly high amount of life, but far less than this city and its fecund rotting scraps--


Inspiration: Some song that started, "Doesn't matter what's in this world...."
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh.
"We know that they're there because of their influence on objects that we *can* see." That sentence echoed in Elizabeth's mind as she stepped out of the shuttle and into the bustling spaceport. People seemed normal; their presence must not be far advanced. She didn't see people running past screaming with blood streaming down their face while everybody else acted as if it were normal. She didn't see even one body tucked out of sight. She braced herself. Bad memories couldn't be allowed to cloud her judgment. She'd gone through the shrink, she'd gone through the processing, she'd gone through the physical therapy for her physical injuries. She was cleared and back in the field. She told herself that all those memories had done was make her resolve--

Inspiration: That first sentence, spoken in an AcademicEarth astronomy lecture.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Good potential for unsettlingcreepyaction. I like it.
Idea - Start in media res - for example a car wreck - start with character in peril to make you care (go, underdog!), have yourself being happy he survived, step back in time to plot, realize he's a bad guy, cut back to survival and now you're totally against him. Readers remember getting headfucked!

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"Damn, girl, where do you get your solid brass balls from?" he asked, lounging back in his chair and surveying me.

"I cut them off the first man who tried to keep me from doing what I needed to do," I said. "I got 'em bronzed. I keep them in a jar on my mantle, usually. Sometimes I'll take them out for special occasions."

He laughed. He thought I was joking. I smiled and let him think that. I don't lie. But I don't correct people's misperceptions, either. I sometimes joke, but most people say my sense of humor isn't a good one. Most people that aren't running away screaming, that is. Not lying makes it fun when they realize you've been not lying the whole time. You can kind of just watch the blood drain out of their face as they go back and relive all the conversations they've ever had with you--now, that's funny.


Inspiration: A hypothetical conversation in my mind with an agent about the need for writers having brass balls. Not that she's a writer. Because she isn't.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I really, really want to write more with this character. I must remember to come back and visit her again.
He stared at notification on his desk in dull horror. Security breaches...more than one of them.... security breaches pouring in from floors ten through fourteen. He switched to the cameras and got quick glimpses of people shifting though the floors before the cameras went blank. He'd signed on for the job as head of security. He'd thought that he'd accepted what that meant. He'd known that if there was ever a security breach, he was to enact the containment procedure. He had never thought that would happen. He didn't know what exactly this government warehouse protected. That wasn't his job to know. It was only his job to make sure that nobody else could find out, much less tamper with it. He'd been so damn proud of his security walls, too....

Inspiration: Phil's musing for me, based on a dream he'd had.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Mostly putting this in here so I don't forget to write this story eventually. Note to self: reference story idea file.

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