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A scrap of blue cloth twisted in a thorn bush, that was all it appeared to be, and who knew how such a thing could come to be? It could have blown away from somewhere else until it got stuck. It could have fallen from the pack of a passing peddler. It could have been torn from the bright blue dress of a shepherdess who was attempting to be more scenic than most. He knew all these possibilities, but he also knew, without a doubt, that it had been torn from the hem of her shirt. He remembered her laughing about how thin the fabric had got when she was sitting by the fire attempting to mend it. She complained that she wouldn't get even one more year’s wear out of it, and it was all the fault of that peddler for selling substandard cloth, and that the only place it was fit to wear these days was out on the range where nobody could see her. He plucked the scrap of blue cloth out of the bush with trembling fingers and turned it to and fro in his palm to see if he could identify anything else. Sure enough, it was of fabric so thin that you might be able to read through it, and he recognized the neat stitches trying to hold it together along the edge. She always crossed her end stitches to help tie down the thread, a thing that he'd--


Inspiration: "Blue thorn" search on Flickr -> http://www.flickr.com/photos/davidselvam/4476355874/
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Nothing unique and interesting enough on its own here for me.
She tensed when she heard voices coming down the trail. He laughed. "What, you think they're coming here looking for you? You've been missing two months. Everybody's given up on finding you until Spring thaw. No, this is a school group that comes down every winter to study hibernation patterns. Buncha college kids. You--" he patted her thigh familiarly, "you aren't going anywhere. They'll find you when the snow thaws. What's left. In the meantime, you make good company and help keep cabin fever at bay." She slumped--


Inspiration: Voices in my head.
Story Potential: High? Medium-high?
Notes: I think it's my weakness for serial killers that's making me give this a higher ranking. And then...one of the students has some sort of psychic ability, precog, sensitive, or telepath. And how does that change the dynamic, and what are his limitations? Could be fun. Especially if it's all from the viewpoint of the girl in the box, so to speak. Or if it's her taking cues that might all be in her mind, leading to actions that let her escape. That could be fun.
The sound of the saw against the violin music sent her into shivering catatonic shock as she cowered in her "dressing room." The violin music stopped. There were screams, and the smash of a valuable instrument plummeting to the ground. The thump of desperately running feet. She sagged against the wall and pressed the heels of her palms into her eyes. Another "co-star" failed. She wondered how much longer this could possibly go on. At least--at least while "the director" was looking for the violin accompanist, she didn't have to worry about failing him again.


Inspiration: "Romance" - Apocalyptica
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh. Same old serial killer stuff. Not too interesting.
I waited until after my father died to announce to the press that he was the Swishline Killer, the one that they'd all thought must have been put in prison or died years ago. Nope. Not dead. Living out and enjoying his retirement in the Florida Keys, killing nothing more than fish and the occasional gator. I don't know if they believed me. There isn't really proof; we saw to that, mom and I. That was when he was still alive and it seemed like it mattered that nobody should ever know. I grew up, went off to college, came back home. I saw my dad a lot. When mom died, I was right there with him. He urged me to go off and get a job, but I saw the darkness in his eyes, and I knew that if I did--

Inspiration: News headline: "Californian Says Father Was Zodiac Killer" (http://www.nytimes.com/2009/04/30/us/30zodiac.html?ref=us)
Potential: Low.
Notes: Retired serial killer? I dunno. Seems...not very interesting. Maybe a short story, if there's a unique enough additional angle, but not anything longer.
She waved the bill under his nose. "Remember when you promised you'd pay this on time? Well, you didn't, so now you've nowhere to live. Neither have I, but at least I'm not going to live with you!" She threw the envelope at his feet, spat on the ground, turned to go, and then spun around and kicked him squarely in the balls as an afterthought. He doubled over and groaned. She slammed his own door shut in his face. Well, he supposed it wasn't his door anymore, now that the bill collectors were apparently going to take everything away from him as soon as possible. He uncurled slowly, painfully pulling himself to his feet. H glanced around his apartment. If the bill collectors were coming, they'd try to take anything of value. Fortunately, he kept nothing like that here. This was just a dump--

Inspiration: Oh, just feeling a titch irritated over credit card bills and the way certain imperiled credit card companies are planning on jacking their rates up.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: This is, of course, not his real identity, or his main apartment--maybe that's why he couldn't pay the bill? Regardless, not fantastic.
Idea - Start in media res - for example a car wreck - start with character in peril to make you care (go, underdog!), have yourself being happy he survived, step back in time to plot, realize he's a bad guy, cut back to survival and now you're totally against him. Readers remember getting headfucked!

http://cloudscudding.livejournal.com/688067.html
Idea - A murder story in reverse (murder at the end instead of the beginning), beginning with a premeditation. Filter in small details throughout plot as premeditated details come in, have "detective" character watching. Murder would occur at the very end, and detecting would come before. Does that make it a thriller?

http://cloudscudding.livejournal.com/688067.html
I didn't trust him, because he smiled at me first. They never smile at me first, not unless they've got some motivation beyond the usual for chatting up a couple of girls. Caitlin was beautiful, truly gorgeous. He should have smiled at her first. I was plain. Not spectacularly ugly, not striking, not beautiful, just--ordinary. I was the most ordinary girl I knew, in fact. The one with the face that everyone sort of remembered, because it looked like somebody they knew, or they could never remember me, because there was nothing original in my appearance. I was okay with that. I pretty much got into wherever I wanted, whether party or club, because I looked enough like somebody else that they'd pass me through while they were still trying to place me. It was one of the few advantages I had. The--

Inspiration: "The Wolf" by Rancid
Story Potential: High.
Notes: There's no high potential story idea here, not really, but I do like the character idea.
The old beanbag chair in the corner was comfortable and warm. It smelled faintly of feet, and a little bit like patchouli, and mostly like home--long-cooked stew, laundry, and teenage sweat. She huddled in it, keeping her eyes closed, trying to pretend that she was still home. The new house didn't smell right. It was all disinfectant and fresh paint, with a metallic tang underneath that she just didn't like. It was strongest in her room. She'd actually gone sniffing at the corners, like a dog, like Sadie would have if she could have come with them. Maybe another dog had marked the room and that was why it smelled funny, she'd thought. But it wasn't strongest in the corners. It was strongest right against the wall farthest away from the door--

Inspiration: Somebody posted on the Twin Cities lj requested a beanbag chair.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Because, c'mon, Something Terrible Happened Here isn't that interesting to play with. Though a dog that came back from the dead to protect her family could be a bit of fun. But overall, no.
The stained glass window in the old church looked as if somebody had lobbed a grenade through it, and the explosion had blown out all the glass. There were a few scorched edges still embedded in the frame, but every single other piece of glass was gone. Constable Drury scratched his head. "Well," he said, "what did they take?" "Nothing!" said the priest. "I'd say it was vandals, but it's most peculiar...most peculiar indeed. Every single piece of glass from the windows is gone. There are no pieces of broken glass anywhere!" "Would that have been difficult?"


Inspiration: Continuing the Stained Glass Harvest theme.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Could be either a cozy mystery, or a conspiracy theory/occult thriller.
The inner beauty was on display, he saw, as he stared over the ballroom at the latest crop of young hopefuls. Their scores danced above their heads: deportment, intelligence, grades, extracurricular activities, outside interests, musical compositions, links to their compositions, their writing, their yearnings for their mates. He sighed. He'd seen every ambition expressed before, seen every odd and interesting talent expressly selected to make the person stand out above the rest. He'd even been briefly enthralled by a hammer dulcimer player, until he saw her staring with hatred at the instrument when he'd surprised her at her practice. He could never see her in the same light--

Inspiration: Hmm, what was it? I was reading something about displaying inner beauty, I think.
Story Potential: High, at least as a gimmick.
Notes: I kind of like the idea of this, though as a set-up for what, I'm not entirely certain. Starts with him being intrigued by a girl who puts up nothing, or as little as possible, but is the start to romance, intrigue, or horror? Or all three?
She didn't see the skanky guy slip a dose of Love into her drink. She picked it up and sipped it, looking appraisingly at the blind date her friend had set her up with. The skanky guy coughed loudly and jostled her, but the blind date started choking on a bar peanut at exactly the same time, so she was busy thinking about how awful it would be if he died on her. She didn't even really notice the jostling; the bar was a pretty crowded place that night. She'd been jostled unintentionally more than once. So instead of turning around and facing him, she touched the shoulder of her date. "Are you okay?" she asked. He was still choking, so she thwapped him across his shoulder-blades. He spat--

Inspiration: The "Love and Kisses" postage stamps I got today!
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Unwanted true love that becomes wanted, drugs, danger, romance.... Could be novel-length. I'm actually kind of disturbed that this is high potential, but it is--for a romance bio-thriller, the sort of science fiction that nobody thinks of as science fiction anymore. Because, y'know, science fiction means spaceships.
He stared at notification on his desk in dull horror. Security breaches...more than one of them.... security breaches pouring in from floors ten through fourteen. He switched to the cameras and got quick glimpses of people shifting though the floors before the cameras went blank. He'd signed on for the job as head of security. He'd thought that he'd accepted what that meant. He'd known that if there was ever a security breach, he was to enact the containment procedure. He had never thought that would happen. He didn't know what exactly this government warehouse protected. That wasn't his job to know. It was only his job to make sure that nobody else could find out, much less tamper with it. He'd been so damn proud of his security walls, too....

Inspiration: Phil's musing for me, based on a dream he'd had.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Mostly putting this in here so I don't forget to write this story eventually. Note to self: reference story idea file.
The gritty feel of the blanket rubbed against his rancid sweat-covered skin. He'd started to smell really bad three days ago, after the first week. He was a little worried that the smell might break his cover, but then he rationalized that he was hiding in the garbage chute, so people would expect it to smell bad anyway. The general complained about it--but then he complained about everything else. Watching him be ousted had been interesting from the perspective of the man hiding in the garbage chute. Two men wearing shining uniforms had walked up to the general, told him that he was leaving, and he'd left. There hadn't even been any gunplay. The man was slightly disappointed by that. He had another two days to wait before he could expect his target to appear, and he would have liked a little small-arms fire to pass the time.

Inspiration: The Writer's Challenge over at Aberrant Dreams. I might actually flesh this out a little for them.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Kind of a nifty idea, but not the kind of thing that I'd really get into.
The damage done was irreversible, the surgeons had said, as she listened in bleak disbelief. She didn't really doubt them. She'd felt every blow, every slice of the knife, after all. It had felt permanent in the dreams, and she had no reason to doubt that it was permanent. Some part of her had clung to the hope that because it had been in the dream chamber, it would not last in the outside world. Instead, the reverse was true, the experts all agreed. It could not be corrected outside of the dreams. So she would need to go back into the dream chamber to have it fixed. Not a problem, right? Most adults chose to--

Inspiration: Not sure, but I mistyped 'dreams'--meant to say something like at the time, and then decided that 'dreams' made it more interesting.
Story Potential: High. Maybe. Maybe medium-high.
Finished Length: ? I should really get rid of this part of the notes as it is so rarely useful.
Notes: Yeah, so she's all traumatized and stuff and doesn't want to enter the dream world, which has all kinds of ramifications for the society that she lives in, and then somebody else is actually killed, and well, yeah. Ok, so it's novel-length.
The kid shuffled forward, hand jammed deep into his pockets. A bulge was the only indicated that he held more than his fists in there. Ross stepped back and leaned against the tin door to his restaurant, wiped his hands on his bloodstained apron, and lit up a cigarette, unfazed. "Yeah?" he asked the kid as he approached. "You want something? You want a job? Your sister, she likes her job just fine." His eyes narrowed as he watched the kid. Something wasn't right, there. It was off. He could smell it. You work in the restaurant business, you get a nose for smelling things that were off before anybody else could. It was essential. "They're dead," the kid said, before he fell over at Ross's feet. "Shit!" Ross swore. He ditched his cigarette into a puddle in the alleyway and stooped over the kid. "Kid?" Ross touched his shoulder, and felt something hot and wet against his fingers.


Inspiration: The first line is from an example of writing to show not tell, actually. Y'know, instead of "He walked over and said"
Story Potential: High.
Finished Length: ?
Notes: Ross may or may not be having an affair with the kid's sister. But the girl's family is dead, and she's in danger. Time to whip out that can of wup-ass from the back of the pantry.
A mosquito landed on his skin, and he gritted his teeth and ignored it. It sucked until he thought he could feel the pull through all his veins, but he didn't move a muscle. He had waited too long to get into position, belly-crawling by slow increments, moving less than an inch in fifteen minutes. He was suited up and kitted out, his rifle snugged next to his cheek and pointed at the target. He was a professional. He would not slap that damn mosquito, no matter how much he wanted to. He looked through the scope. In the green phosphorescence that night became when seen through his night-sights, he saw her moving around her apartment. Naked. He pursed his lips and whistled. Very nice.


Inspiration: All my damn mosquito bites.
Story Potential: High. Not because of this, but because of the various things my imagination took from it.
Finished Length: Short story...er, by which I mean probably novel.
Notes: Either she isn't the target, or she is, but he doesn't get to shoot her because he's about to get stung by a bug that isn't a mosquito, is actually a robot, and conks him out. This could be played straight as a thriller, or it could be sci-fi. I thought I was going to start with him getting bit by a robot bluebottle, but no...mosquitos pushed their way in where they weren't wanted, just like always.

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