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I #permute the summoning spell a little each time, hoping to catch an angel as yet unfallen. I tell myself the price is necessary. Only an angel can save us. But my garden grows with pretty maids all in a row, and the shovel is heavier each grave I dig. #amwriting #vss365 #prompt

Inspiration: #permute
Story potential: Low.
Notes: This is good, but it isn't actually a story idea.


When you see a gorgeous woman dressed in a strapless black dress made entirely out of feathers hovering a good three feet above the sidewalk, with gorgeous black wings stretching out five feet to either side of her, what you think is going to depend on where you are. If you're in Vegas, you'll think she's advertisement for a pretty kick-ass magic show or maybe some kind of magic/risque dance act. If you're in New York, you'll think she's a model. If you're in Goodwin, Iowa, you'll probably think she's an angel of the Lord, or maybe one of those Goth teenagers trying to pull off a prank. If you're in Roswell, you may have an open mind about what she is or you may think she's an alien. If you see her in Chicago or Minneapolis or Boston or some other reasonably sized city, you may wonder what she is and assume she's some kind of city phenomenon, like an art car or a parade of naked painted people. The real fun comes when every assumption becomes right.


Inspiration: The cover art of Apocalyptica's 7th Symphony
Story potential: High.
Notes: Could go many ways. All at once.
Heaven ain't close in a place like this, which explains why I was so shocked to see an angel walk through the door. Part of it was the place, part of it was the walking. Angels generally don't like to walk. They think it lowers the image, prefer to hover after they float down from the sky. They don't generally walk into my bar, either. I quickly bent down and picked up a bottle of virgin's tears from under the bar. Water isn't so good for the paras, you see. Something about unpredictable effects from the pesticides, hormones, and medications that we flood into our water supply (and then wonder why we're all dying of cancer). Virgin tears, shed in joy, seemed to me like the closest thing I might have to a decent drink for an angel.


Inspiration: "Somebody Told Me" - The Killers
Story potential: Low.
Notes: I realized that I don't want to write angels like this. If I ever do write angels--they seem to pop up in urban fantasy a fair bit--I want them to be a good bit more Old Testament awesome crossed with the ineffability of God.


Angel eggs can only hatch in the ruins of a civilization so destroyed that bare handfuls of survivors remain, waging constant war between the groups. That is when an angel can be born, because that is when an angel can feed and grow and learn and protect and do all the things an angel is supposed to do. Places like the DMZ, Somalia, and Croatia. You wonder why we don't see angels every day in an established, industrial society? Well, you might. It's not something to wish for, at least not if they are young angels. Mature angels that have shepherded a society back from the brink of collapse might travel to the cities, though as I understand it the differing quality of people's desires may drive them right back--or turn them bad, if they stick around too long. Not always, but sometimes. That's right, I'm blaming consumer culture for fallen angels. A hatched angel is an amazing sight, all downy wings and glistening skin and ravenous hunger for the needs of others and the glory when they satisfy their belief. The angels of the Mayan people after the collapse must have been a wonder to behold. Now, sometimes, an egg will hatch two angels. A double-yolk.


Inspiration: "Before High Heaven" - Daniel Merriam
Story potential: Medium
Notes: I don't think the tone is right here. Anyway. Could be an interesting story, I suppose, but does not immediately speak to me.
Stay away from the basket, that's all I'm saying. We're teaching kids the wrong things, with the happy giant bunny distributing candy eggs, the Curious George exploring Easter, the go-run-off-and-hide-in-the-bushes-where-there's-candy. Not what you might call survival skills, those. The old Easter had the right idea. Get up at dawn and go out and freaking celebrate that you're alive. Tell the kids that sometimes the dead come back to life. Tell the kids that things come out of dark caves, sometimes. Terrible things. Beautiful things. And no, I'm not talking about vampires and zombies. Would you want a real angel involved in your life? An old testament angel, with a fiery sword and a terrifying visage and a plan for upending and maybe even just plain ending your life? The kind that puts you through hell as a test of faith?

Inspiration: Advertising for Easter stuff on Amazon.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh.
I wish I had an angel, he thought, as he stared up at the carved wooden faces peering benevolently down at the congregation. He looked sideways at his mom, where she sat in gray-haired, black-clothed dignity. Instead of a nagging harridan. He sighed. He knew as well as any that the only angels available in this town were the kind you rented for the night and watched your wallet around. The next evening, he took himself to angel street and picked the cleanest looking one of the lot. She had big eyes and white teeth and seemed clean enough, but when she stretched to take off her shirt, he saw needle pinpricks all along her back. "Whoa--

Inspiration: "Wish I Had An Angel" by Nightwish
Story Potential: Low
Notes: Meh. Been done.
She found the bones on the second month of the dig, when they were deep down past what any other archaeologists had gone through before. When she straightened her back to take a break and look up at the sky, it was a small circle of blue high above her. Spiraling ramps of compacted earth led back up. She found the bones and felt a real stir of excitement. They were the first non-dinosaur, non-identifiable bones that they'd seen so far. As soon as she ran one finger along their edge and heard a faint whisper of bells, as soon as she lifted a tiny separate bone out of the ground and held it to the light and saw how it gleamed like polished pearl, she knew she'd found something special. She didn't, however, expect that the UFO fanciers would declare them alien bones and the religious fundies would declare them angel bones.

Inspiration: Listening to...MPR Science Friday, I think. Or the Scientific American podcast. They were talking about Darwin with an archaeologist.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Use darwin quote about crust of the earth. And it's important to leave the actual origins of the bones undeclared, I think. Play it both ways.
The cloudy breath hung on the air, like the man if man he was who breathed it. She stared up at him from her comfortable pile of rags and cardboard boxes. It was her nest, and she'd always felt safe in it before, especially with a bottle of something to keep her warm. She'd never expected, not even in her most fevered delirium, to be descended upon by what was surely an angel. Or maybe an alien. Rob always said that there were aliens out there, and that they only came to visit those who they knew nobody would believe. "Are you an angel?" she asked, figuring that an alien shouldn't be insulted by being called an angel, but an angel might be irritated by being called an alien. "No," he said, "but I am your salvation. Come with me." He held out his hand. She didn't want to take it. For a minute, she wondered if maybe it was all wires and chicken feathers--

Inspiration: "Hunter's Kiss" by Rasputina
Story Potential: I don't know! I can't decide!
Notes: This story idea confuses me. It's definitely different from what I've been writing, and I find it interesting, but I've got no idea what it would be. Also, I'm entirely sure he's not an angel of the Biblical type.

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