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Every #harvest was hard work for the farmer. When the harvest was bountiful, she worked in the field every day. When the harvest was small, she trolled the highways for field fertilizer, looking for hitchhikers and vagrants and stalled cars.

Inspiration: harvest vss365
Potential: high
Notes: This is basically a complete microfiction. Could be amped up, rewritten a little, more show less tell. And seasonal!
I #permute the summoning spell a little each time, hoping to catch an angel as yet unfallen. I tell myself the price is necessary. Only an angel can save us. But my garden grows with pretty maids all in a row, and the shovel is heavier each grave I dig. #amwriting #vss365 #prompt

Inspiration: #permute
Story potential: Low.
Notes: This is good, but it isn't actually a story idea.
white broken light, many shadows

The white light overwhelmed her after weeks of nothing but darkness. She remembered colors and light but this had none of that. There was only the harsh white and the shadows moving through it. It was still more beautiful than anything she had imagined in her long sojourn under the city. At first she'd believed the madman would kill her, that he was the reason the newspapers were talking about the girls found without their teeth. But after a bit, she came to believe that he was just going to *keep* her, and in some ways that was worse. She'd started looking forward to death after the first week. Even now, echoes of pain ran along her nerves, and when her hands fluttered up to touch her eyes she found the dreaded wetness of blood. Maybe he'd blinded her. But no--


Inspiration: The picture, "Let Go" by Frou Frou (There's beaty in the breakdown), and "Teeth" by Lady Gaga.
Story Potential: High, perhaps. I like the character origin.
Notes: And she comes out of it rather insane but with abilities she did not have before.
She tensed when she heard voices coming down the trail. He laughed. "What, you think they're coming here looking for you? You've been missing two months. Everybody's given up on finding you until Spring thaw. No, this is a school group that comes down every winter to study hibernation patterns. Buncha college kids. You--" he patted her thigh familiarly, "you aren't going anywhere. They'll find you when the snow thaws. What's left. In the meantime, you make good company and help keep cabin fever at bay." She slumped--


Inspiration: Voices in my head.
Story Potential: High? Medium-high?
Notes: I think it's my weakness for serial killers that's making me give this a higher ranking. And then...one of the students has some sort of psychic ability, precog, sensitive, or telepath. And how does that change the dynamic, and what are his limitations? Could be fun. Especially if it's all from the viewpoint of the girl in the box, so to speak. Or if it's her taking cues that might all be in her mind, leading to actions that let her escape. That could be fun.
The sound of the saw against the violin music sent her into shivering catatonic shock as she cowered in her "dressing room." The violin music stopped. There were screams, and the smash of a valuable instrument plummeting to the ground. The thump of desperately running feet. She sagged against the wall and pressed the heels of her palms into her eyes. Another "co-star" failed. She wondered how much longer this could possibly go on. At least--at least while "the director" was looking for the violin accompanist, she didn't have to worry about failing him again.


Inspiration: "Romance" - Apocalyptica
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh. Same old serial killer stuff. Not too interesting.
I waited until after my father died to announce to the press that he was the Swishline Killer, the one that they'd all thought must have been put in prison or died years ago. Nope. Not dead. Living out and enjoying his retirement in the Florida Keys, killing nothing more than fish and the occasional gator. I don't know if they believed me. There isn't really proof; we saw to that, mom and I. That was when he was still alive and it seemed like it mattered that nobody should ever know. I grew up, went off to college, came back home. I saw my dad a lot. When mom died, I was right there with him. He urged me to go off and get a job, but I saw the darkness in his eyes, and I knew that if I did--

Inspiration: News headline: "Californian Says Father Was Zodiac Killer" (http://www.nytimes.com/2009/04/30/us/30zodiac.html?ref=us)
Potential: Low.
Notes: Retired serial killer? I dunno. Seems...not very interesting. Maybe a short story, if there's a unique enough additional angle, but not anything longer.
The suite began, the musicians shifting effortlessly from tuning up to playing the first waltz. The little figurines glided out from their recesses in the walls of the dance hall and moved through their paces like the clockwork that ran them. Their faces were pulled back in macabre grins of joy, their heads tilted at angles indicating wild abandon entirely unfamiliar to those who knew human anatomy, angles that would have been impossible if, one and all, their necks had not been snapped before the clockwork mechanisms were slid under their skins like morbid bones. There was only one living girl in the mix, and she was nearly dead of exhaustion and fear. If she could keep up, she could live. This--

Inspiration: "suite", as a musical term for a set of instrumental dances.
Story Potential: High? Low?
Notes: Yes, I've a macabre mind. I sort of like this as some sort of steampunk/dark fantasy/horror invention. She can live, but only if she can dance as much as the clockwork figures. And somehow, she does. How? Why? Through what intervention? And what does that do to her for the rest of her life?
It was unrenovated, the Realtor had warned them. He'd thought about not even bothering to see it, but the description of it had made Clarissa glow inside--the veranda, the old chandelier, the two-hundred-foot trees, the butler's pantry, the old icebox, the ballroom in the basement...the ceramic tiles in the kitchen. When they looked at it, they agreed that no, it wasn't renovated. They fell in love with it anyway. They knew that they would be sinking huge sums into it just to keep it running on a yearly basis--that's why the old owner had sold it, the Realtor confessed. She shouldn't be telling them this, she said, but they seemed like such a nice couple. He thought she probably just knew that--

Inspiration: "unrenovated"
Story Potential: High, though it's not such an original idea.
Notes: I could easily twist this to the horror that has been done so often before, but I think I'd rather not. I could make it fantasy. I kinda like the idea of using it as a dark thing that somehow balances the darkness in the owners--improving them all. Maybe murder's required, but maybe they're serial killers. Or maybe he's a wife-murderer, but the house brings victims back to life. Many possibilities. I think I like the idea of giving it a horror flavor, but have it end up uplifting.

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