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She was ecstatic when she got fired, in anticipation of the struggle and sorrow and then the vast relief and happiness to come. She laughed aloud when her boyfriend told her he needed his space, though she'd wept when he asked her out. The Ouroboros ring she wore turned and turned on her finger, a nervous twitch she had while reading job ads or personals alike. One day she found herself laughing with delight so sharp she had tears in her eyes while she stood in the middle of a grocery store, and she knew something truly dreadful had happened--but she'd get through it.

Inspiration: Ink Tea is YAY!
Yesterday at 10:02pm · Comment · LikeUnlike
Rose Norris
yay!
Yesterday at 10:19pm
Todd Wardrope
...it's spelled the same, both ways!
Yesterday at 10:29pm
Erin Busby
Mmm... palindromes of excitement... wow.
11 hours ago
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This is maybe the story, maybe not. Maybe there is more than one story here. But--something tying into cycles, and the way people balance out no matter what happens to them (scientifically speaking), and--stuff. Maybe it's magic realism, or maybe it's a literary (shudder) story written with a circular story structure. I can't grasp this idea, but its all floating around and promising to be awesome some day, so I'll write down this bit and maybe later, it will be.
The chant of calling began, and she felt it pull her towards the altar of the true god. She knew what took place there. A demand would be issued, probably beyond the bounds of reason or probability. Every person felt the call at least once in their lives, some more often. The demand would be harsh and difficult or heartbreaking. One man had been asked to kill his own son. The god had reached out his hand at the last minute to prevent this from occurring, but he might not have. On another occasion, a merchant on a successful journey had been asked to sacrifice the first thing that greeted him on his return. It was his daughter, and nothing had stayed his hand. The broken merchant now wandered through the world telling his tale of woe and warning others to beware the price of success. It was the god's way. Some were sent on quests, some given trials, some told simply that their child would be a great--

Inspiration: Matisyahu
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This would work well as a premise for a series of linked stories, I think. It needs some extra element to make it pop, though.

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