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The front of the temple was plastered with holy icons and images from people whose prayers had been answered. Discarded crutches, little baby layette outfits, money that had been laminated flat and affixed. He regarded it cynically. Might as well have a big sign out front saying, "Prayers answered--sometimes." He knew well that more than half the time, the prayers would not be answered. It didn’t seem to make a difference how worthy the prayer or the pray-er was, the god chose randomly who to answer and who not to. He'd even gone through and found a comparison report that put together the offerings by the people making the requests and the success of the outcome. Happily, there was a slight negative correlation. A big donation would not be necessary. Neither would a pure heart, or good intentions. This was good, since he had neither of them and at the moment, no money either. Steps had been put into play that might fix that, and praying to the god of maybe was one of those steps. If his prayer was answered, it would make things that much simpler, and although he did not believe in the god, not in the sense of worshiping it or even necessarily believing that it was what other people would call a real "god", it would be foolish not to hedge his bets. Hedging his bets, of course, was what got him into this mess in the first place, you might say.


Inspiration: Had a dream about L. Newman and I attending some odd meeting thing called Cooking Without God, which was half philosophy and half cooking and entirely boring...but while I was there I had an idea for a story where the premise is that one person gets a prayer answered, which affects a second person negatively, but the second person's prayer is not answered. So this was a story idea within a dream.
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Eh. Kinda trite, actually, as many dream ideas end up being.
"Give me a sign!" he called to the sky, arms spreadeagled as he screamed into the blue, blood trickling down his flesh where he'd mortified himself with thorns. He was determined to stay in the desert shrine until he received a sign, and if God had so abandoned him that there was no sign, he would die of thirst, and that seemed well enough. He'd brought enough water for three days, and he would refuse to drink the last flask until he was traveling home. Then he would need it. If he drank regularly and became dehydrated eventually and *then* he received a sign, he wouldn't even make it home. He sat on the stone and waited. In the heat of the day, sweat trickled across his--

Inspiration: B.B.K. - Korn
Story Potential: Medium
Notes: And the sign is that the water in the last flask never runs out, but he almost doesn't find it out, and only when in despair.
Earth angel, they call her. She's not of heaven, and so she is allowed to descend to hell. She's not human, and so she cannot be trapped there. She is immortal, and so they cannot kill her. At least not permanently. Sometimes they try, they tear her apart in anger and sorrow at what she reminds them of. Some say that's why the devil allows her entry. She brings with her the whisper of the grace of God, the reminder of all that the damned do not see. Beauty, love--all these things flow from God, and true hell is their absence. She brings back the memories, she hints at the good. She is beautiful. She smiles in a way that might almost be love--.

Inspiration: Earth Angel by Karin.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Eh.
Hell is the absence of God. That spark of light and hope and decency dies. Summer camp tries to survive. Mused by Phil. See full story notes in "Ideas-At Bat" file.
They gathered in the ruin of the old temple, pulling along folding seats and card tables, carting coolers of food and beverages, hauling blankets and wind-up radios. They didn't know why. They didn't know how it would help. But they believed that choice they'd heard in their heads, the quiet one that just said, "Go to the old holy sites and you will be spared." They'd seen the news reports of the horrible things happening in other parts of the world. Maybe they'd even seen the map predicting where it would all spread. They weren't going to pretend that if they did nothing, they'd be safe. So they'd grabbed their kids and their pets, those essentials that they could actually haul up the narrow winding path to the old stone ruin, and they'd--

Inspiration: http://www.flickr.com/photos/fellow-traveller/2631755730/
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Mostly I like the old/new juxtaposition, and it's a slightly different take on the whole "holy ground is safe" notion.
The chant of calling began, and she felt it pull her towards the altar of the true god. She knew what took place there. A demand would be issued, probably beyond the bounds of reason or probability. Every person felt the call at least once in their lives, some more often. The demand would be harsh and difficult or heartbreaking. One man had been asked to kill his own son. The god had reached out his hand at the last minute to prevent this from occurring, but he might not have. On another occasion, a merchant on a successful journey had been asked to sacrifice the first thing that greeted him on his return. It was his daughter, and nothing had stayed his hand. The broken merchant now wandered through the world telling his tale of woe and warning others to beware the price of success. It was the god's way. Some were sent on quests, some given trials, some told simply that their child would be a great--

Inspiration: Matisyahu
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This would work well as a premise for a series of linked stories, I think. It needs some extra element to make it pop, though.
"All I want is the truth," he whispered as he brought the rifle stock up to rest against his shoulder. He prayed that he was about to shoot an innocent man. If he fired his shot, and the Pope died, then all was well with the world. He himself, of course, would burn in hell--he could not ask forgiveness for this act, because he knew that he would not truly repent and therefore true forgiveness could not be granted him. If he shot the Pope and the Pope survived, he would know another answer, and it was one that shook him down to his core, the answer that made him wake up bolt upright in the middle of the night, breathing hard and with his sheets soaked with sweat. If he shot the Pope and the Pope survived, the president was next on his list. The president would be even more closely guarded--too many--


Inspiration: "Gimme Some Truth" - Generation X, and my survival day calendar describing how Pope John Paul II was shot in 1981.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Yeah, I think it is high potential, but this sort of conspiracy-theory, anti-establishment, paranoid thing is a style that I usually avoid writing. We'll see.
We knew the unsealed, and they knew that they were known, though they knew it not. We walked among them. We saw each other, the glowing marks of the god we were sealed to, and we saw them passing almost unawares around us. Some of them knew us, some only suspected. All knew that there were those that the gods sealed, but only the priesthood saw the sheer numbers of us. In some towns, there was only one. In a city, there were hundreds. In a country, usually thousands. There were rules passed down between the gods that limited how many of us could be created, but there was also a loophole. Each god had no doubt thought--

Inspiration: "sealed"
Story Potential: High.
Notes: And then what? War between the gods is too straightforward. Needs something else....
He found that he would lead his people in a dream. It came as a surprise to him; he'd always expected to follow his uncle's trade in the smithy. He certainly hadn't expected to be spoken to by gods and to teach the people the best way to live through the changes that were coming. At first, he didn't believe the nightmare of fire and war that had raged across his sleeping mind, though it was more vivid than any dream he'd ever had before and when he woke, he could recall every single detail, down to the bloodshot eye of the horse that had reared in front of his dreaming self and then been speared through the chest. It was not a dream that he wanted to come true, though there had been a few hints that he himself could do rather well from--

Inspiration: The name of the Baha'i leader, though this is not actually about the Baha'i.
Story Potential: Medium-high.
Notes: In and of itself, this whole "religious leader" thing is not unusual enough to be a good hook. Great building block for a wider story, though.
She squatted beside the St. Thomas tree, one finger drawing designs in the dust as she squinted at the workmen raising up the heavy concrete blocks for the new mission. Her finger swayed and danced, leaving eloquent lines that sprawled a history of the future across the hard-packed dirt, there for anyone to read that looked. After her hand slowed and came back to her side, she finally looked down at the pattern drawn. Her eyebrows rose. The future was not what she had feared it to be, but if it would be what she hoped for she would need to do more than simply step aside. She sighed and stood, stamping her feet to let the long skirt settle around her ankles. She smacked her hands together to send dust spinning out into the air. At her feet, the lines that had drawn themselves--

Inspiration: "St. Thomas tree"
Story Potential: High.
Notes: This theme of magic or divination being done by drawing patterns in the dust keeps coming back to me. And this is another African-influenced one, which is kind of nice. I should write those more. I'm hesitant about writing something involving the interaction of Christian faith and magic--it's a bit of a touchy subject.

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