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"Sir, where should we put the bodies?" the soldier asked. He was young enough that the fringes of his gills were greenish from nausea after the slaughter.

She sighed. Always the way. They were ordered here to murder a populace of creatures, sentient creatures in their own way even if they failed to pass some of the most critical tests to ensure Sentient Protection. The recruits were filled with stories of glory and battles for the good of the sentient alliance and told they were doing the right thing, the good thing, the thing that would allow more of their children to spawn. It was even true. They just weren't told that it would feel like murder.

She looked around the campsite. River, no, didn't want to contaminate it. Hard ground, no good for digging. Very little fuel to burn the bodies, and it would waste precious time for her soldiers to dig. She pointed. "Throw the bodies around the tree."

The clinging to their belief in tree gods that would walk among them and save them was one of the things that showed they weren't real sentients.


Inspiration: https://www.hcn.org/articles/scientific-research-tossing-salmon-for-science
Story potential: High
Notes: The bodies (maybe usually in graveyards) accelerate the growth of the "tree gods" from the trees that the "foolish natives" worshiped. Ooooooo .... spawning pools, have it lead to her coming to terms with some of her spawn dying, eating each other, but also deliberately feeding one--the kinder, more charitable one--against custom, to help it to grow. "There are worse deaths than those that bring something better into the world," she whispered to it. (Okay, that twist/character arc makes this story strong.)
After a terracycle had passed, she crawled out of the sea to see what had become of her children. It was forbidden to interfere until the cycles had passed around and again, giving time enough for all to know the success or failure of the line. It happened that she was the first of the mothers to have set forth a line for the terracycle in question, and so she was the first of the mothers to rouse herself from her sleep beneath the sea and swim to the surface to inspect the fate of the line. At first, she did not understand what it was that she was seeing. She wondered if the line had built a fine and fabulous city near the shore, a fitting view to welcome her back. It was only when she swam closer that she comprehended that mounds of whitened bone lined the shore.

Inspiration: 'Terracycle'- that and the Czerneda book I'm currently reading, I suppose.
Story Potential: High. I say this because I wanted to continue writing even when the time was up. However, first I must finish other things that I've started!
Notes: "My creations have turned into monsters and killed everything!" is way too simple, and to be avoided. Triple threat, I think--to the mothers, to the lines (extinct?), and to the very way of life/biology.

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