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"I need to be in space," she said firmly to the recruiting officer, but what she was thinking of was the deep blue depths of the oceans--as they had been when she was a little one, before the lit-up cities and the domes and the tourist bubbles that went out to see even the few "preserved in a natural state" parks (and how could you preserve something without borders, that flowed from one place to the next, in a natural state?). She remembered the deep cool velvety dark, and the glimmers of phosphorescent fish, the wonder of seeing a thing that nobody else had ever seen, the creaking and groaning and moaning and booming of the vessel and of the echoes and rhythms of the ocean around them.


Inspiration: I needed to be writing.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Had a baby in August. Haven't done freewriting since mid-July. 'Nuff said.
After a terracycle had passed, she crawled out of the sea to see what had become of her children. It was forbidden to interfere until the cycles had passed around and again, giving time enough for all to know the success or failure of the line. It happened that she was the first of the mothers to have set forth a line for the terracycle in question, and so she was the first of the mothers to rouse herself from her sleep beneath the sea and swim to the surface to inspect the fate of the line. At first, she did not understand what it was that she was seeing. She wondered if the line had built a fine and fabulous city near the shore, a fitting view to welcome her back. It was only when she swam closer that she comprehended that mounds of whitened bone lined the shore.

Inspiration: 'Terracycle'- that and the Czerneda book I'm currently reading, I suppose.
Story Potential: High. I say this because I wanted to continue writing even when the time was up. However, first I must finish other things that I've started!
Notes: "My creations have turned into monsters and killed everything!" is way too simple, and to be avoided. Triple threat, I think--to the mothers, to the lines (extinct?), and to the very way of life/biology.
It was in the opening procedure that she first noticed a hint of a problem. She had been performing the ritual in the same prescribed way fro the last two hundred cycles, and never had anything been other than as planned. It was a simple enough matter, one of the minor rituals of the plan, one of the minor little details that safeguarded the lives and welfare of her flock. She had never even really thought about the deeper implications of the commands entered. She knew that there were other Holy Ones who had, in the past, and she respected that, but she was not as concerned with the deeper mysteries as she was with the simple here-and-now welfare of her holy children. She would rather make sure that every child was fed and clothed than wrestle with--

Inspiration: Um, I was in the middle of opening something when the time clicked over?
Story Potential: High, I think, though it could Really Really Suck if mishandled.
Notes: Far-future agrarian society, tech imbedded into the religious mysteries, and then--suddenly--they have to actually use the procedures that have been passed down faithfully. Crisis of faith? Massive, massive culture shock? Planet-wide evacuation? The possibilities are infinite! Very rich setting for a story with narrower focus, if nothing else.

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