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She thought it was about the coolest thing ever that he rode his bike home after school. He always hitched a ride in tagging along behind the bus to be pulled along by its slipstream, or he drove up into his dad's hauler and his dad dropped him off, if he was about to go on a long-distance drive, but home he rode unapologetically alone. Most of the guys woulda used it as an excuse to get the pretty girls to talk to them or let them give rides to escort them home. Not him. He never asked, and they could hardly ask themselves! It was a perplexity to them, that he always rode alone.

Inspiration: Thinking about somebody saying something is the coolest thing ever.
Story Potential: Low. So low.
Notes: Migod, are those even words being strung together?
"Treason." The sentence echoed in the courtroom. He sagged, defeated. He'd never considered that they might actually find him guilty of...treason. A little embezzlement, yes. Some inappropriate actions. He'd expected to have to resign, to maybe be censured. He hadn't expected a death sentence to suddenly be hanging around his neck. Treason had only one punishment. He wasn't even guilty! That was the oddest thing. Of so many charges that they could have brought, of which he would be entirely guilty, they had chosen the one crime that he hadn't committed. He loved his country. He loved the freedom to misbehave that it gave him, the rules that were observed more in the inaction--

Inspiration: The name of a French government officer executed for treason.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Low story potential, but I do like the idea of a character who is entirely disreputable, and not even in a lovable-rogue sort of way, who has to escape and clear his name or at least set up camp on a small island in Bermuda.
The net came down on his hand with all the force that a full bunch of fish could muster. He screamed, but it was lost in the swearing of the men above when one of them dropped his side of the net and the full torrent of fish poured out onto the deck beside the ship. He screamed again, as he felt the serrated scales of the fish slash open his hand as they poured past it, crushing it and opening up the flesh. In one painful moment, he went from visiting the docks in hopes of becoming a sailor, to being cursed to never sail again. It was all he'd done, all his family had done, but--

Inspiration: Talk about some sports figure who got his hand tangled in a net.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: And he became very bitter until, late in life, some massive realization opened up his life and made it worthwhile again. The end. See ya on the bestseller list!
The flicker of wind made the leaves rustle against each other, and it was in the slight gap between the time of the rustling that gave her reason to realize that she was not at home after all, not sitting in her backyard and watching the autumn come into full season. It was a hesitation in the sounds around her that she noticed now, strong and not merely in the leaves. She lifted a handful of sand from her garden walk and let it run through her fingers, listening to the hiss as it struck the ground. The hiss lasted longer than it should have. She straightened, smoothing down her skirt as she rose.

Inspiration: The wind in the leaves outside my window.
Story Potential: High? At least medium-high. It's only a skeleton, but I like the shape of its bones.
Notes: Could easily go multiple ways. Science fiction--and she's in VR. Fantasy--and she's in fairyland/the underworld. Mainstream--Alzheimer's or just garden-variety mental illness (as if there is such a thing).
One more brushstroke, he thought, and the painting would be perfect. He glanced anxiously up at the print hanging on his wall. Yes, it was exactly the light color of that last brushstroke that made the great one's works stand out above the rest. Carefully, he dipped his brush into a shade of vivid pink just two tones brighter than the rest of the flower that he'd been painting and brushed it across the last petal, angling the brush to give the impression of a careless dash of light. He stood back. It still looked planned. He hadn't gotten it to be careless-looking enough. He'd failed yet again. His shoulders slumped and he set the brush aside.

Inspiration: 'epigone'
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Might make an interesting side-note for an otherwise really impressive character, though.
The woman who walked into her shop was so trashy that Celina could do nothing but stare, mouth hanging open. Anybody that awful simply had to be doing it on purpose. From the crown of her blow-dried ratty blonde hair to the tips of her hot-pink toes poking through clear hooker heels, the woman was a masterwork of trailer-trash. Celina snapped her mouth shut, shook her head once to get her bearings, and stepped forward. What this woman wanted from her was impossible to guess: she couldn't have been attracted by the window display, not if this was her normal clothing--Celina had worked very hard to get just the right air of refined restraint and style.

Inspiration: 'trashy'
Story Potential: Medium-high?
Notes: It's not at all my usual sort of thing, so I'm kind of tentative about that rating.
She dug into the curry with her fingers, lifting strands of spinach and bamboo shoots to her lips. It was delicious sliding down, even though it was cold and had been sitting in the fridge for nearly a week. That was her safety margin: one week at the back of the fridge. One week and he wouldn't care if she ate it because he was going to throw it out soon anyway. So far, her system had worked; she hadn't been beaten for stealing food since she figured out the safety margin. Of course, she had gotten food poisoning once, but she hadn't died of it, so that was all right. Better than all right, actually--he'd gone so far as to take her to a doctor and she'd been able to stare at the city through the taxicab's windows.

Inspiration: I loves me some curry.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Everything's in the bit.
The tent reeled around him. He tried to stand up, but his legs faltered and he collapsed back down on the cushions. He stared at the musty canvas of the roof, visible only in pale glimpses unprotected by embroidered rugs, and tried to remember how this had happened to him. Who was he? He could no longer remember. Where did he come from? He thought for a moment that he saw the sea, a busy port town, but what was the sea? What was a port? The shining golden hookah on the table mocked him. There was no smoke coming out of it. He frowned. Wasn't there usually smoke coming out of it? He had to get out. He couldn't remember why, but he had to get out. What was out? The light that filtered through the canvas was out. He had to get to the light.

Inspiration: Well, that's kind of how I felt after my martial arts workout today. Except for the no memory part.
Story Potential: High. Really freakin' high.
Finished Length: Might be a short story, could be a novel--but come on! Two amnesiac main characters in a row? What is my subconscious trying to tell me?
Notes: It's not humor. It's the djinn myths, but not used in a humorous fashion. No trapping him in a bottle, either. No blue smoke. It's a foreigner who's stumbled into the Arabian nights...and boy does he wish he hadn't. If he remembered that he had. Maybe only temporary amnesia? Recurring, perhaps? Magic in the same way that zombies are magic, sort of. Could even be a magic-realism tinged more mainstream type of novel. Perhaps.
The scent of lilacs drifted in through the open window, curled around the room, and settled beside Lila's pillow like a cat come home after a successful night's hunt. She rose in the lilac-scented dawn and drifted to her wardrobe, where she pulled out a light purple dress and slipped it over her shoulders. The sundress was old and worn, but she knew that when the scent came calling she should not turn it back unheeded. Her calloused heels rapped against the worn wooden floor as she walked to the door and pulled it open. She hesitated for a moment in the doorway. The same familiar scents were there: the dusty odor of dry-rot in the wood, the smell of dust never quite cleaned away, lemon polish, and the scent of the bread that had been baked yesterday.


Inspiration: "smell-feast"
Story Potential: Erm. It intrigues me, the idea of doing for scent sort of what "Periwinkle Eyes" did for color. It probably isn't really high potential, but I'm going to say it is, because I want to write this someday.
Finished Length: Short story.
Notes: Don't forget the standard Smalltown, USA details.

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