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Healing Priya's daughter of chickenpox sent Anjali back to her bed for a week, and the stupid woman wouldn't even agree to vaccinate her daughter and her other children to keep this from happening again. She did seem properly grateful, though--at least she showed up at the door twice a day with daal and chapatis for Anjali's family, and she sent her healthy daughter with chai in the afternoon. She had promised to get her husband to write off the balance owed to his shop for the last two weeks of vegetables, too, so there was that. With Neelam having less hours training the phone bank workers, every bit saved was good. Anjali hoped Neelam would be sent to move soon again, though. She had never even met Priya before, but the woman knew that Anjali had the touch.


Inspiration: Thinking of all the different types of protagonists I've written--male and female, gay, straight, and transgender, black and white and other--realized I hadn't written a disabled one yet. Doing it right and in the right kind of story could be a good challenge.
Story potential: High.
Notes: My long-form notes are in my red notebook with gold flowers, but basically, some link between magic acts (not just healing) and increased pain and disability along her spine, perhaps related to chakras, not sure if choosing chronic pain or chronic back pain and associated disc damage and weakness, but it could all link together.
I always look for sharp edges and corners, things I could open my head up on, but part of the problem with unreal space is that what you see is not always there. I figure that's not a problem, not really. I don't care if other people see me carefully skirting empty space. I don't worry about looking like an idiot, and the unreal space vision is marked clearly on my identification, which usually keep away the cops and bughouse people, both the real and the unreal ones. The bigger problem is when something keeps me from seeing what *is* really there. It's not much of an issue, because people who don't see what's there tend to die a lot younger than those who see what isn't, but I'm one of the ten percent who have a mild enough bit of it that they survive. Also, my parents were the most paranoid people around. You've never seen childproofing until you've seen what they did to our house until I was twenty-five and had passed all the tests and vocational training and was officially emancipated and moved into a government apartment. I nearly died that first night, walking into a bathtub and slipping and hitting my head. Sheer luck I didn't drown while I was unconscious. I didn't tell my parents that part, but--


Inspiration: Thinking about childproofing.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I'm not sure where this one would go, but I felt myself getting more drawn in and interested the longer I wrote. Good character, if nothing else.
After the performance, the hallway was crowded with beings waiting to tell me how much they loved my voice, and how great it was. I still felt like crying, or laughing, sometimes, when they did that. The very qualities they loved so much were the reason my career in Earth opera had died. Once you get burrs on your vocal cords, once you start wobbling on the notes--you're done. And I'd only played a few roles when it happened, so I was heartbroken. I couldn't get any professional singing jobs, and that was all I'd ever trained to do. Oh, I could manage folksongs well enough to earn change busking in subway tunnels and beside streets, and that was how it started. The street was mostly empty--


Inspiration: "Opera Singer" - Cake
Story Potential: Low
Notes: Meh. Not too original, not enough here to be interesting.
She kept the phantom limb as a little reminder of a lot less pain. When somebody eyed the odd bulge under her sleeve oddly, or stared at the blatantly artificial hand, she'd move the phantom a little, and feel the twinge, and be grateful for her new arm. To hell with the starers. That was why she didn't go ahead and get a less useful but more natural looking arm, one with fake skin and fingernails and other such things. It would be giving in. It would be saying, "Oh, yes, my natural arm would have been so much better, I am ashamed of what I had to do to get my job." And she wasn't. And it hadn't been. And--

Inspiration: "Setback" - Fluke
Story Potential: High?
Notes: There's not a whole lot of story in this, but the character and the setting are compelling.
The complaints led her to deafen herself. One day, she could not take it anymore, the complaints about how this or that went and why it should be changed and, and, and--and so she went up to her quarters and poured a solution in her ears. It hurt terribly for a few moments, and then she felt nothing. And heard nothing. She walked out and down to the courtyard, where the nobles congregated, and she saw their mouths moving and their hands waving, but she heard--absolutely nothing. It was so blissful that she laughed, her famous tinkling laugh. And that too was silent. It felt wonderful. She did not tell anyone that she was deaf, but they figured it out, eventually. They brought her written notes.

Inspiration: Oh, a question about complaints about women writers.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: She doesn't blind herself; it's not that kind of story.
The net came down on his hand with all the force that a full bunch of fish could muster. He screamed, but it was lost in the swearing of the men above when one of them dropped his side of the net and the full torrent of fish poured out onto the deck beside the ship. He screamed again, as he felt the serrated scales of the fish slash open his hand as they poured past it, crushing it and opening up the flesh. In one painful moment, he went from visiting the docks in hopes of becoming a sailor, to being cursed to never sail again. It was all he'd done, all his family had done, but--

Inspiration: Talk about some sports figure who got his hand tangled in a net.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: And he became very bitter until, late in life, some massive realization opened up his life and made it worthwhile again. The end. See ya on the bestseller list!

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