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Discovering that the baby you never planned to have, almost decided not to keep, but in the end kept and went back to a village not too near but not too far from where you came from, and claimed yourself a widow of the war--discovering that baby can spit fire is no small thing. Nobody asked what side your husband was on, of course, because dragons were monsters invading from across the oceans, sailing on giant rafts of monstrous trees lashed together, or landing on small islands and overnighting before sailing in to the port. You don't remember when the war started. Most people don't, now. Your father was a young man when the dragons invaded. Or first flew to our shores. You've heard a few older people muttering that the dragons weren't the ones who started the war, and we could have avoided all this if only--


Inspiration: "Spitfire" - Prodigy
Story potential: High.
Notes: Not sure if there's enough unique here to power a story, but maybe. The child is not a child of rape, but a consequence of a one-night stand after she was saved from some wartime danger by a dashing soldier. The dragons started invading because something worse across the sea was invading them. And it's coming next. The dragons are now in hiding and almost impossible to find, but she's by god going to have to go on a quest for them so that her child can be taught safely. Maybe re-read Mary Brown before writing this, either for inspiration or to avoid duplication.
Scrubbing away a decade of bad karma is a lot harder than you might think, especially since that bad karma? Yeah, it messes with you. Makes everything harder than it should be. Ruins your best efforts, puts banana peels in your path, and sends drunk drivers veering straight at you. And sometimes I screw up, and I do something that darkens my karma more than it cleans it. Kinda depends, you think about it. I killed a guy who was a real bad guy who did bad things to lots of people. All those people's happiness and relief and safety brightened things up more than killing him darkened it. On the other hand, I rescued a cat that was about to get run over by a taxi. Mangy cur hissed and ran away. Turned out it had rabies and it bit somebody afterward, so saving a cat was worse than killing a man. Just depends. Best I can do is muddle through and watch out for ladders and drunk drivers and check all my belongings twice before I leave the movie theater.


Inspiration: Ida Marie - "Bad Karma"
Story potential: Medium
Notes: Interesting character idea, but not enough here.
The dice rattled and rolled across the velvet panel, finally sliding to a stop on top of death and taxes, and the king laughed a deep rumbling belly laugh. "Death it is!" he proclaimed. The court applauded politely, though the man in cuffs looked pained. "But wait," the prisoner insisted, "see there--the dice didn't lay flat. It's on its side between death and fate." "Only because there was a wrinkle in the velvet," the king grumbled. "Even a wrinkle may show the desires of the gods." "Oh, bah. Very well, then. A quest." The king leaned back, stroking his beard.


Inspiration: Dice-roller.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Blech.
The spires of St. Petersburg rose before him, the breath of the firebird hissed past his ear, the heavy iron of the gun weighed down his hand, and the blood of the tsarina throbbed against his heart. He lifted his hand to touch the handkerchief the spot of her blood had fallen on in salute, and then he strode through the snow across the square to the squat building beside the spires. It was a bureaucratic, stolid-looking building, all about business and red tape and the necessary lubrications of rubles and vodka. But he came with a pack of invisible wolves raging across the snow behind him, leaving no tracks--

Inspiration: Everybody else is going to an awesome Russian vodka bar, and I'm staying home sick. I really wanted to visit this place, too.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Obviously, lots and lots more research needs to be done. I don't even know the pieces to fit together. Something in the Russian folktales and the grim beauty of the land makes me want to write this, though. After a lot of research. In maybe 2-3 years, when I'll be able to write even better.
Their chests ticked when they walked past her store, and the ticks dragged slower as they headed home at the end of the day, where their faithful wives would feed them dinner and put away their shoes and wind their stopwatch hearts. A gold chain went from their pocket to where there used to be a fob watch, but she knew that the chain went through the pocket of their waistcoat and between their ribs, right into the shining globe holding their stopwatch heart where there used to be a real one. Somewhere, the hearts were hidden, and when they remembered, the businessmen with stopwatch hearts might even try to find out where, not remembering exactly why it was important, since everything ran so smoothly by the ticking of their new heart, but because perhaps their wife would nag them until--

Inspiration: "Businessmen with Stopwatch Hearts" - Delirium
Story Potential: High
Notes: Mixes: heart of stone, deal with the devil, corporation as evil, steampunk, quest to regain loved one. Good stuff, could tap pretty deeply into Story Mythos. And, y'know, clockwork hearts!


Edited to add: Written as "Businessmen with Stopwatch Hearts," rewritten as "The Key to His Heart," and published 01/24/2010 at Thaumatrope.
Weary from their journey, they sat beneath the shade of the great banyan tree, squatted on their haunches, and chewed at the fruits they'd brought in their bags. Around them stretched the scrub desert, empty of any visible life. Then a small bird flew up into the sky from a bush nearby and they jumped to their feet, their hands reaching for their spears. There were predators in the scrub, predators that were not them and could kill them all easily, spears or no spears. There were also smaller beasts that would only attack if they thought the group to be easily taken. They had reckoned their chances before they set out, and they knew that it would be a true trial to persevere through, but with all others dead or dying around them, they had been forced--

Inspiration: "Weary from your journey"
Story Potential: High.
Notes: A true survival tale. I'm thinking--plague, perhaps, something that wipes everybody out. Some truly Biblical shit. And they can't go to their nearest neighbors because they have been told that they will be killed on sight. But they can go to a very far neighbor, across a desert, because the government figures that by the time they cross the desert, any infected will have died. So--true struggles to survive and adapt in a strange and hostile environment, some Moses & the promised land, some plague resurgence, some truly complicated things...and then safety. Maybe. For a time. Huh. Sounds like a novel, dunnit?
Sorry is where the story ends, or so I always heard growing up. You say you're sorry, and they forgive you, and the haunting unease that has made it difficult to sleep, that rears its head and comes back to bother you in any still moment, is banished. I didn't know what to expect when I found her and said, "I'm sorry." I knew that I had committed a great crime against her people, and a sin against her personally. I think I more than half expected her to pull out that big shotgun she kept under the bar and kill me right then and there. I would have deserved it; there's no doubt of that. Instead, she looked at me long and hard, with all the pain that I'd known I'd see in her eyes. Sorry wasn't the end of this story. She didn't forgive me, and she didn't kill me. She sat down and told me a story, instead.

Inspiration: "Sorry Seems to Be the Hardest Word" - Ray Charles
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Interesting. It's one of those repentance and redemption stories. Those are interesting. I like it. Not much meat on this idea, more just that bit, but yeah, I like it.
"Kill her."
"Let's not be overhasty--"
Miranda's skin started to sweat again. She was still terrified, but not the bone-dry terror of a few minutes ago. If the elders decided to kill her, she would have no chance to escape. She could run as far as she chose, and still her fate would find her, at the hands of a stranger, or a child, or an animal, or some creature gone and away before any could try and punish it. It would probably look like an accident. She had resigned herself to death., and her body had begun to prepare. Now hope breathed back into her, and with it the natural responses of a body in terror. She nearly pissed herself.
"What do you suggest?"
"Reparations."
Miranda nearly fainted with relief. Reparations would be terrible and painful and--

Inspiration: "overhasty"
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Pretty standard beginning to a quest-type story.

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