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The frightening thing was that the clockwork golem had clearly been built by an apprentice. The glass casing around the heart stuck out over the lip that was intended to hold it in place. The wind-up key had been built in a spot that had had a second hole drilled into it, because it had ended up not fitting in the first hole. One gear spun and did nothing. Another gear never engaged with the whole mechanism. A faulty connection to the eye socket made the golem wink constantly. But where there was an apprentice, there was a master. And Lin remembered uneasily the number of wasted, broken pottery vases his master had bid him make during his apprenticeship, while his master worked on perfecting--

Inspiration: My clockwork fish clock, which I love despite its imperfections.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: ::shrug::
Their chests ticked when they walked past her store, and the ticks dragged slower as they headed home at the end of the day, where their faithful wives would feed them dinner and put away their shoes and wind their stopwatch hearts. A gold chain went from their pocket to where there used to be a fob watch, but she knew that the chain went through the pocket of their waistcoat and between their ribs, right into the shining globe holding their stopwatch heart where there used to be a real one. Somewhere, the hearts were hidden, and when they remembered, the businessmen with stopwatch hearts might even try to find out where, not remembering exactly why it was important, since everything ran so smoothly by the ticking of their new heart, but because perhaps their wife would nag them until--

Inspiration: "Businessmen with Stopwatch Hearts" - Delirium
Story Potential: High
Notes: Mixes: heart of stone, deal with the devil, corporation as evil, steampunk, quest to regain loved one. Good stuff, could tap pretty deeply into Story Mythos. And, y'know, clockwork hearts!


Edited to add: Written as "Businessmen with Stopwatch Hearts," rewritten as "The Key to His Heart," and published 01/24/2010 at Thaumatrope.
The bird migrations started early that year, to match the turning of the sun. They had hoped the birds would realize that it was the time to go sooner, but they hadn't known enough about the native species to be sure. There was great rejoicing when they realized that they wouldn't accidentally wipe out a species or several hundred, for that had been one of their fears. Yet, the turning of the sun was necessary. Its light was already dimming, and if they could not turn it to allow them to shut down and replace sections, they feared that it would go out, and a great deal more than a mere hundred or so bird species would go extinct. They had hoped that the birds would move. They had not realized that it was not only the birds that responded to the phase of the sun. They had not realized that their very--

Inspiration: An article about, um, bird migrations.
Story Potential: High.
Notes: I just really like the idea of turning the sun. Are clockwork worlds overdone?
The suite began, the musicians shifting effortlessly from tuning up to playing the first waltz. The little figurines glided out from their recesses in the walls of the dance hall and moved through their paces like the clockwork that ran them. Their faces were pulled back in macabre grins of joy, their heads tilted at angles indicating wild abandon entirely unfamiliar to those who knew human anatomy, angles that would have been impossible if, one and all, their necks had not been snapped before the clockwork mechanisms were slid under their skins like morbid bones. There was only one living girl in the mix, and she was nearly dead of exhaustion and fear. If she could keep up, she could live. This--

Inspiration: "suite", as a musical term for a set of instrumental dances.
Story Potential: High? Low?
Notes: Yes, I've a macabre mind. I sort of like this as some sort of steampunk/dark fantasy/horror invention. She can live, but only if she can dance as much as the clockwork figures. And somehow, she does. How? Why? Through what intervention? And what does that do to her for the rest of her life?

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