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Whenever I had trouble trying to sleep, when the sound of the waves alone failed to lull me to sleep, I would leave my bed and walk down to the bluffs where the wind-whistlers sat. I don't know who they were--or are, I suppose--because the ceramic whistling masks they wore covered their faces entirely. Even their ability to see was navigated by mirrors through a labyrinth of pipes. You could not simply glance at their eyes and know. And yet I never saw one lying fallen, broken on the shore, never saw one trip as it (and I would say he or she except it is impossible to tell) moved around. They wore the masks when they came out of the temple, and so you could never know if the people you saw go in went in simply to pray for luck or good trades or good weather or if they themselves were wind-whistlers. Enough went in that I was certain couldn't possibly be, that it was impossible to tell.


Inspiration: "Brain Stew" by Green Day + unsettling photo of person in windwhistler mask sitting beside some body of water: http://www.flickr.com/photos/67105066@N07/12435334803/in/explore-2014-02-10
Story potential: High.
Notes: Just--a weird obliteration of self, in order to find self. Has resonance.
More than power? Never had anyone offered her that, and she leaned forward, intrigued. "And what would you say is greater than power, pray tell? Love? Wisdom? Other people have tried to sell these things to me before, and they were never able to carry through." "No," answered the merchant, bargaining for his life. "Magic. A magic that will make your food taste sweet again, will make every victory priceless and every ounce of power better." She leaned back and laughed. "That hasn't been the case since I was five and all my siblings were drowned like puppies, because the King had picked his heir." "He was a brutal man." "He was the finest King this country had had for fifty years." "And yet, I notice that you have no heirs of the body yourself." She shrugged, trying not to show the chill that went through her at the thought.


Inspiration: "Harder, Better, Faster, Stronger" - Daft Punk
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: The cliche here would be to do a bodyswap with some true unfortunate. But that's a cliche, which is why I don't think this story as-is has a ton of potential.
By the mountain of fire and the fountain of spit, she found herself for the 10th time that day. She was a goblin, hovering crouched under the fountain as the pilgrims walked by. She found herself, and the goblin knew herself for a bit, and straightened up and stepped away, and chose to jump into the mountain of fire. The goblin part mewled with terror, but she knew herself and knew that fire would not destroy her. The goblin fell through the mountain, and then started to uncurl, limbs straightening, greasy hair singed away to show a face that was not malicious and stupid as others would have seen it. The fire did not burn the goblin's body, even when it splashed down into the molten sea--

Inspiration: "I Fire Myself" by Mary Timony
Story Potential: Low
Notes: I like the idea of finding "yourself" multiple times a day, in a fantasy setting, but this--no.
She was very careful to never ever tell a lie. She knew what happened to wooden children that did. Their noses grew and grew and they could never be mistaken for real children, not unless they went on a great long quest that was difficult and dangerous. She didn't want to do that. So she was very very careful to never tell a lie. She knew she wasn't a real child, not like the others, but she watched them ever so carefully, and she paid all the attention in the world to what her foster mother told her a real little girl should do. Not that her foster mother put it like that, of course. They didn't know that she was a wooden girl, never born, raised by wild animals until she knew that she was different from them, and that she wanted to be a real girl.


Inspiration: "Zen In The Art of Writing." He talks a lot about using memories with strong emotional weight as Muse food, which is oh-so-very-much not my way.
Potential: High, but only because of the idea, not the execution.
Notes: And I think that the idea of a creature half-toy and half-wolf that wants to be human could actually really freakin' resonate if done well. Not sure that this particular bit works, but I still like the idea.
My coffers are empty, and with them the safety they could give. I've divested myself of all my worldly possessions, though some still sit in the rooms of my home, waiting for their buyers to come and take them away. You'd think this would make me a profit, but I'm sacrificing all that. I want none of the strings to bind me to the person I was, the past I lived, and the way I was. It takes seven years for every cell in your body to be replaced. I look forward to the end of those seven years. I don't dare accumulate things or belongings or a new nature until the time is up. Traces of the old me would linger. I'm probably risking myself just staying here long enough to make sure that everything--

Inspiration: "Extraordinary Way" by Conjure One
Story Potential: High.
Notes: Pilgrimage, sort of. Everything he acquires, he has to dispose of and change out. Nothing can be constant. Might be an interesting character for recurring stories. Also, I can tell committing so much time to editing has given me a real itch to write, because a large part of me is saying, "Yes! This! I could write this right now!"
Surgery/Surgery, the ads whispered to her. Do it one way, and have an automatic default set up to flip the other when you like. She scowled at the ads. She'd damn well withstood all the pressure. She had her own face, the one she was born with, and she planned to keep it. It wasn't perfect, not even close, but it was hers, and that was what she cared about. Her mother hadn't been so picky, and the memory of a long line of strangers coming to pick her up from daycare, insisting they were her mother, still sometimes gave her nightmares.

Inspiration: The "Surgery" song from Repo: The Genetic Opera was stuck in my head.
Story Potential: Low.
Notes: Meh. I was thinking, "And then aliens come that will only deal with people wearing their true face," and then I realized that was way too complicated along with the surgery.
I am the me that is there that is the me that I am and if you want to know me, you'll have to find where I am. He stared at the printed note in his hand. It wasn't a fortune cookie, it wasn't a threat, and it wasn't a love note--he thought. If it was a love note, he rather didn't want to get involved with whoever had sent it, because--she?--sounded crazy. Part of him thought the note was intriguing and the gender or nature or even existence of the creature that had sent it didn't matter, that all he needed was to follow that path back to the source and find out what it meant--or find out what sent it, which would mean that he'd have to find out where it was, because--

Inspiration: Chad posting a link to the Google map of where he was.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: Vaguely interesting, but nothing I feel compelled to pursue.
The amnesia impulse came on her in the night. She rose from the bed, leaving her husband snuffling in his sleep among the blankets, and walked to the window. Silver moonlight shone down upon the back yard, and she saw it with the eyes of a stranger. She saw beauty where she'd only seen duty during the day, the duty to trim and tidy and weed and water and. She turned quickly in the moonlight, glancing back on her bed as if she thought her husband might have vanished. She pulled the curtain aside further and its silver light brushed over him, revealing a young prince gilded in silver, lying asleep and waiting for Princess Charming to kiss him awake. Unexpected--

Inspiration: "Feign Amnesia" by They Might Be Giants
Story Potential: High
Notes: I like the idea of her choosing amnesia deliberately, and yet having it be real. Make it all magic realismy. Might catch the--not chick lit, but "women's literature" market, and maybe some of the fantasy. Would need an external threat, too, or would get boring. Sorta romance, sorta self-realization, sorta fantasy. Smells like a novel. (Man, I'm going to need forever to write all the stories I think are neat!)
Takeoff on symbiote. Human intelligence augmented by computers considered sentient by aliens, but not without it. => What complications? Humans would have to keep computers with them at all times or would lose the rights of sentient beings. What if this is before symbiotic networks? Or widespread cybernetics? And if a virus destroys a computer, is the "sentient" entity dead? Must include equal courtesy to computer half of symbiote, included with ambassadorship. Humans abruptly non-sentient without their computers. Nature of humanity?
Keys: inferiority complex, respect, Munchhausen, identity crisis, phantom limb syndrome

This post brought to you by me getting my CONvergence-inspired ideas in the same place as the rest of them!
The inner beauty was on display, he saw, as he stared over the ballroom at the latest crop of young hopefuls. Their scores danced above their heads: deportment, intelligence, grades, extracurricular activities, outside interests, musical compositions, links to their compositions, their writing, their yearnings for their mates. He sighed. He'd seen every ambition expressed before, seen every odd and interesting talent expressly selected to make the person stand out above the rest. He'd even been briefly enthralled by a hammer dulcimer player, until he saw her staring with hatred at the instrument when he'd surprised her at her practice. He could never see her in the same light--

Inspiration: Hmm, what was it? I was reading something about displaying inner beauty, I think.
Story Potential: High, at least as a gimmick.
Notes: I kind of like the idea of this, though as a set-up for what, I'm not entirely certain. Starts with him being intrigued by a girl who puts up nothing, or as little as possible, but is the start to romance, intrigue, or horror? Or all three?

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