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The #impact of the sword in her gut was so slight that she didn't even feel the pain for a moment, just a sharp, searing heat. Steam hissed as her flesh quenched the blade.
"Ah, yes, this is a good one," the smith said, smiling.
"Will she live?"
"Maybe. Who cares?"

Inspiration: impact
Potential: high
Notes: She does live, maybe because the person who asked cared enough to try and save her. And she does have a weird magical link to this evil (well, it's forged that way, at least) sword, which would complicate some things.


The waves were choppy that morning as she pushed the boat off from the pier and settled down to row to the altar center, or what they thought was the altar center. Eventually, the buoy from the last successful sacrifice always disintegrated or floated away or fell apart, but that was part of the way it worked. Nobody would put extra buoys out unless they'd had a separate sacrifice, as if the altar might move around and they might end up sacrificing to nothing. She had a major request, this day, and so she'd gone to the trouble of buying a whole calf to take out on the waters. That was the rules. No fish, because there were fish enough, but something from the air if you had to or the land at best. She'd once heard tell of a thing called a camel, that lived only far out in the desert, and she figured that would be the best sacrifice of all--certainly nobody else would have offered up such a thing--but one had never come near her.


Inspiration: Picture of water, mountains, and clouds: http://www.flickr.com/photos/o_d_r_a_d_e_k/12175351336/
Story potential: Low.
Notes: Pretty picture, though!
Mascots, they call us, and I guess they're sort of right. For certain sure, they don't think of us as the shamans at the ritual sacrifice sports, channeling the power of the watching millions into great works of magic for the benefit of all mankind. but let me tell you, if there wasn't a goofy gopher jumping around in the middle of the football game, global warming would have wiped out all of humanity by now. Sure, you can say what you like, but it's a damn hard field to get into. A young magician’s game, or at least a game for a magician who's mastered the Stone and can keep him (or her, but like all the physical, it's more likely to be a he) self in good enough shape for the full scene. Sure, you hear that it's usually just a team of different guys from the cheer team or whatever they call it, switching off inside the suit. That may be true sometimes, but it makes weak magic. Some of the sacrifice has to be ours, in sweat and vertigo and the exhaustion that comes after the dozenth triple-flip. Sure, we can prank the players--after all, the joker and the jester have their places in magic--and we can launch small prizes into the air for random fans who are not, after all, as random as you might think, but it comes down to the flat out exertion, the sweat and the synchronized chanting, the risk of permanent damage, and the managing to focus the will and the energy of the crowd watching as well as the tenuous links to all the home viewers.


Inspiration: Hulu screenshots from "Behind the Mask"
Story potential: Medium.
Notes: This is probably actually high potential, but not for me. I'm not enough of a sports fan to do a decent job with it as a main thing.
Whether in delight or despair, that was the question. The pills sat in a bowl before him. Choose one, and he would go delighted and in pleasure to his death. Choose another, and he would gain the vital resignation that would allow him to pass through the gate without weeping or trying to escape or otherwise shaming his name. There had been a few instances, in the beginning, where such things happened and the sacrifice was killed before it could be offered. Nobody liked having to schedule a draw for another sacrifice, nobody at all. So now, there was the the choice. He paused to consider his feelings. He did not *feel* overset. He shrugged, picked a despair pill, and pressed his palm to his mouth, allowing the pill to slip up his sleeve. He fake-swallowed.


Inspiration: Some violin music.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: And, blah, that makes him survive somehow. Not original.
They ate their father-host before they knew him. Before they knew themselves. Before they were themselves. It is only with the consumption of the host that they could take knowledge, understand forgiveness, realize the depth of their transgression, and how much their father-host had forgiven them. He knew. He knew that they would eat him and kill him, quite painfully, and that it was the only (only?) way they could be born. He had--they found out, as mandibles chewed through the brain stem, as the meat writhed around them and screams filled the air--he had been able to kill them, if he wanted. He had chosen not to, despite knowing it would be his death (and salvation? they were confused by that part, as they were confused by so much). They were nearly full, the host-father being larger than--than the herd animals that were traditional, and how had they known that? Still, the little bits of knowledge they ate made the whole more urgent, and they arrowed into the braincase, jaws gnashing, as around them the meat-host-father convulsed one last time and lay still, the electrical impulses dying.

Inspiration: I haven't done anything organic/creepy/gritty in a while, and I miss it.
Story Potential: High
Notes: And then they make their way in the world. A world that has barely survived the battle to exterminate their kind? The power of the willing sacrifice, etc. Be subtle with the religious metaphors.
She kept the phantom limb as a little reminder of a lot less pain. When somebody eyed the odd bulge under her sleeve oddly, or stared at the blatantly artificial hand, she'd move the phantom a little, and feel the twinge, and be grateful for her new arm. To hell with the starers. That was why she didn't go ahead and get a less useful but more natural looking arm, one with fake skin and fingernails and other such things. It would be giving in. It would be saying, "Oh, yes, my natural arm would have been so much better, I am ashamed of what I had to do to get my job." And she wasn't. And it hadn't been. And--

Inspiration: "Setback" - Fluke
Story Potential: High?
Notes: There's not a whole lot of story in this, but the character and the setting are compelling.
They greeted the rising sun with the joy of children unsure that the darkness would ever leave them, though they didn't know how close it had been. The sacrifice on the stone closed his eyes in joy, as his blood ran down the runnels and then slowly trickled to a stop as the rising sun painted everything the red of his blood. His body's heat cooled as the rest of the world warmed from his sacrifice. The wreath of holly on his head fell to the ground, leaving pin-pricks of blood along his brow. His fight done, the spear fell from his slack hand. He died, and passed from life into legend.


Inspiration: High
Story Potential: High. Really high!
Notes: This is the ending, so it should be the beginning. And it's real. He's the sacrifice, and he goes and does what he needs to to make the sun come again and stay longer. Lover, scholar, warrior, which? All? This is a story best told circular, which will be an interesting challenge for me. Of course, naturally I think of this *after* when I should write it to get it published this year. Because this is a winter solstice/Easter(?) story. So I should have written and submitted it last October. Ah, well, adding a note to the calendar for next year.
Her pinky stump throbbed when the weather changed, and sometimes when weather not of this world changed. She didn't think it was actually the scar that did that, just her own mental projection--a storm of a kind was the reason she'd had her finger cut, and so she projected her subconscious detection onto the scars. She could always rationalize away that she'd seen certain signs, because in hindsight, no matter what kind of storm it was, there were always signs.

Except this time.

She'd listened when her pinky started throbbing worse than it had ever before, and she'd gone and hidden in the o-san's restroom, taking her sword and lifting up the tatami mat and quickly carving out a hole in the floor so she could hide under the floorboards with the tatami mat settling back over the floor.


Inspiration: Short story titled, "Pinky the Invisible Flying Pony Who Saves The World." True fax.
Story Potential: High. I wanted to keep writing.
Notes: Some sort of ceremonial knife was used and some of the knife's specialness rubbed off. Plus this fits in with the "great sacrifice is required for power" sort of thing. After whatever entirely unforeseen, hint-free disaster this may be, her next step will be to find the specialist who removed the finger, to find out what's going on. Don't keep the o-san part. That's not even a word. Unless somebody's name is o. Though Osan is a city, and apparently also means giving birth.
The riparian nomads were known to the water spirits, and vise versa. This did not help their popularity in the communities that they visited. Anyone untouched by the same kind of drownings, sudden floods, and other waterborne calamities was not viewed popularly, no matter that their caravan barges held all manner of useful things and their plays, put on by torchlight on the wide boards of their barges, brightened dull lives. Oh, they were looked forward to, but they were not exactly trusted. Who knew what evil bargain they'd struck with the sylphs to allow them free reign of the rivers? The sylphs knew. So did the nomads. They knew, and their eldest sons knew. Sometimes the boys came back from their year beneath the water moonstruck and unable to concentrate on anything else until they fell over the railings--

Inspiration: "riparian" - related to or living on the bank of a natural river or watercourse.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: I like the idea of a culture of water-gypsies with a dreadful bargain, but that's background, not a story. Basically, I was writing along and naturally the locals are suspicious of the outsiders, and the outsiders are poor misunderstood--but no, wait, what if there *is* a dreadful bargain?
A rivulet of blood ran down from the mother's eyes, and she stone idol didn't blink./ The sacrifice was not acceptable. There will be a reckoning in the harvest to come, the priestess warned them. She didn't approve the sacrifice, and it is now too late. You will not be able to try and appease her again until next year. The priestess nudged the sacrifice, who moaned softly, too drugged to understand what was going on around her. This one now will be one with the priestesses, for that is how the goddess chooses us. There is no reason that she should have been sacrificed, ad that is why the mother refused her. You should have found a guilty one. "But, she *is* guilty," the leader shouted.

Inspiration: "rivulet"
Story Potential: Low
Notes: And then Himself tromped in with his big noisy feet and started shouting my name and wouldn't shut up and leave me alone long enough to concentrate. Grrr.

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