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The amnesia impulse came on her in the night. She rose from the bed, leaving her husband snuffling in his sleep among the blankets, and walked to the window. Silver moonlight shone down upon the back yard, and she saw it with the eyes of a stranger. She saw beauty where she'd only seen duty during the day, the duty to trim and tidy and weed and water and. She turned quickly in the moonlight, glancing back on her bed as if she thought her husband might have vanished. She pulled the curtain aside further and its silver light brushed over him, revealing a young prince gilded in silver, lying asleep and waiting for Princess Charming to kiss him awake. Unexpected--

Inspiration: "Feign Amnesia" by They Might Be Giants
Story Potential: High
Notes: I like the idea of her choosing amnesia deliberately, and yet having it be real. Make it all magic realismy. Might catch the--not chick lit, but "women's literature" market, and maybe some of the fantasy. Would need an external threat, too, or would get boring. Sorta romance, sorta self-realization, sorta fantasy. Smells like a novel. (Man, I'm going to need forever to write all the stories I think are neat!)
It was hard to get, and that was the whole lure of the thing. Well, that and the literal lure on the end of her fishing line. She squinted into the sun, swung the line back, and cast out across the still water. The trees rustled faintly in the breeze above her. She could feel the current tugging at her waders. She smiled, not caring that it made the squint lines around her eyes deepen. It was a good day, and if she was honest, she had a good life. It might be a small town, but that was hwy she'd moved out here, after all. That was when she saw the corpse bobbing around the mangrove roots downstream of her. Her first thought was, thank goodness that's downstream. Then she really processed what she saw, and she foraged across the stream--

Inspiration: Fishing line, and playing hard to get.
Story Potential: Low. Or high, depending on how you look at it--so far it isn't doing anything new and interesting, but it's like a comfortable pair of shoes.
Notes: Mmm, tasty. A nice "big town murder in a small town" story.

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