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He could have made her all joy and happiness, a dancer to welcome the spring, a love-doll who loved loving. He didn't. He made her self-aware, and broken, and dark inside but with the longing for light. And he made her know it. She knew where her flaws lay, and her darkness, but unlike a human, she was not allowed to embrace it. And she was not allowed to change it. And so she stayed inside his darkened, silent house, while outside the cry of the chai-wallahs lilted through the air, and the lowing of the cows, and the laughter of street children playing in the alleys. She did not laugh. She did not think she could.


Inspiration: A combination of this (and what's with all the doll photographs that show up on Flickr, anyway?): http://www.flickr.com/photos/loba_rabiosa/6935024235/ and the India picture below.
Story Potential: High, I guess?
Notes: It's an interesting juxtaposition, and I like the idea of bringing in another culture. Also, I wonder if those who believe that everything is reincarnated might not be somewhat kinder to created beings, might not consider them entirely without soul. But anyway--and so her owner dies, and somehow she must find her own way.


Portrait of Celebrating Pohela Falgun / first day of spring
The complaints led her to deafen herself. One day, she could not take it anymore, the complaints about how this or that went and why it should be changed and, and, and--and so she went up to her quarters and poured a solution in her ears. It hurt terribly for a few moments, and then she felt nothing. And heard nothing. She walked out and down to the courtyard, where the nobles congregated, and she saw their mouths moving and their hands waving, but she heard--absolutely nothing. It was so blissful that she laughed, her famous tinkling laugh. And that too was silent. It felt wonderful. She did not tell anyone that she was deaf, but they figured it out, eventually. They brought her written notes.

Inspiration: Oh, a question about complaints about women writers.
Story Potential: Medium.
Notes: She doesn't blind herself; it's not that kind of story.
By the mountain of fire and the fountain of spit, she found herself for the 10th time that day. She was a goblin, hovering crouched under the fountain as the pilgrims walked by. She found herself, and the goblin knew herself for a bit, and straightened up and stepped away, and chose to jump into the mountain of fire. The goblin part mewled with terror, but she knew herself and knew that fire would not destroy her. The goblin fell through the mountain, and then started to uncurl, limbs straightening, greasy hair singed away to show a face that was not malicious and stupid as others would have seen it. The fire did not burn the goblin's body, even when it splashed down into the molten sea--

Inspiration: "I Fire Myself" by Mary Timony
Story Potential: Low
Notes: I like the idea of finding "yourself" multiple times a day, in a fantasy setting, but this--no.
The amnesia impulse came on her in the night. She rose from the bed, leaving her husband snuffling in his sleep among the blankets, and walked to the window. Silver moonlight shone down upon the back yard, and she saw it with the eyes of a stranger. She saw beauty where she'd only seen duty during the day, the duty to trim and tidy and weed and water and. She turned quickly in the moonlight, glancing back on her bed as if she thought her husband might have vanished. She pulled the curtain aside further and its silver light brushed over him, revealing a young prince gilded in silver, lying asleep and waiting for Princess Charming to kiss him awake. Unexpected--

Inspiration: "Feign Amnesia" by They Might Be Giants
Story Potential: High
Notes: I like the idea of her choosing amnesia deliberately, and yet having it be real. Make it all magic realismy. Might catch the--not chick lit, but "women's literature" market, and maybe some of the fantasy. Would need an external threat, too, or would get boring. Sorta romance, sorta self-realization, sorta fantasy. Smells like a novel. (Man, I'm going to need forever to write all the stories I think are neat!)

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